Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!:General Stories

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Tumhara muntazir
Taish

Mere Zehan ki wusat me usska tasavvur jaise,meri pahunch se door kaheen sookhi hui, sehmi hui, tanha zamee per Kuch qatre shabnam ke,or usska ehsaas jaise Meri Shayri me rang phoolon ke,Usski yaaden jaise mere Dil-o-dimaag ke beehad or sunaan jangle me hawaaon ka sangeet,usske khwaab jaise kissi marte hue shaks ko aas Zindgi ki,Isske saath Usska kabhi na khatm ho sakne waala intzaar .. kuch na-mukammal duaaen use paane ki,jo her rab se ki gayi thee,Inper bhi ek vaahiyaat umeed usske aane ki jo
maasoom dil-e-nadaan khud me zabt kiye baitha hai,ye sab Apni shaksiyat ke saath tanhayi ke andheron ki chadar me lapete maazi ke samander ki gehrayi me bhooli bisri khwahison ke patther ke niche dabaane ke baad Ek nayaa shaks bann ker zamaane ki mehfilon me laut aaya ,Main andheron ka musafir roshini me laut aaya Ek naya chehra liye ek nayi pehchaan liye,Phir socha ki ek khat likhker ussko alvida keh doon or apne marrne ki ittilaah keh doon,Likhne ke liye na samander si syaahi mili or na he Baadalon ko kaagaz banaa sakaa,kuch sitaare chaahtaa thaa lafzon ki sajaawat ke liye wo bhi tod ker na la sakaa to phir
Dher saari khaamoshi likh ker khat me bhej di maine

Aankhen moond ker Kuch der khamoshi se baitha raha khat likhne ke baad or kuch sochta raha…. Ek tadap or bechaini kuch kho dene ki,jaise Naye Naye ZakhmoN per namak ki tees mach jaaye,tilmila ker uttha ,aankheN kholiN aur picche mudd ker dekha To sab ke sab mere saamne khade thai, Wo hi shabnami tasavvur usska,phoolon sa rangeen ehsaas wo Surmayi yaaden,or aas se bhare dilchasp khwaab,saamne thaa wo be-aqibat intzaar bhi ,wo na-mukammal duaaen wo vaahiyaat umeeden dil-e-nadaan ki sab andhere ki chadar ke saath mere maazi ke samander se nikal aayi thee,Unn sabko gale lagaa ker kuch der rota raha or Wo shaks jissko maine abhi abhi maara thaa Phir zinda ho gaya…………………….. judaa ho gayi ye zamaane ki mehfilen,or roshini ka safar,Hum andhere ke musafir Humko Tanhaiyaan mubaarak

Ye sab to mere humsafar hain, mera samaan jeene ka, us se bichad ker to phir bhi zinda houn,Inn sabse bichad gaya to kya jee paaunga?

Izzajat
Taish

muntazir-- one who is awaited

Wusat--- area

Tasavvur—imagination

shabnam-- morning dew

Zabt-- control

Maazi-- past

Be-aqibat--- non conclusive


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT mehboob ke naam...!!

«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2013, 08:41:43 PM »

Waaaaaaaah taishji. apni khamosh muhabbat ko khoob achchi tarah se aapne lafzon mein piroya hai.kya andaz hai, kya ehsaas hai, kitni tadap hai subhan allah.

,Likhne ke liye na samander si syaahi mili or na he Baadalon ko kaagaz banaa sakaa,kuch sitaare chaahtaa thaa lafzon ki sajaawat ke liye wo bhi tod ker na la sakaa to phir
Dher saari khaamoshi likh ker khat me bhej di maine

Waah waah bahut khoobsurat ehsaas taish ji. Applause

Wo hi shabnami tasavvur usska,phoolon sa rangeen ehsaas wo Surmayi yaaden,or aas se bhare dilchasp khwaab,saamne thaa wo be-aqibat intzaar bhi ,wo na-mukammal duaaen wo vaahiyaat umeeden dil-e-nadaan ki sab andhere ki chadar ke saath mere maazi ke samander se nikal aayi thee,Unn sabko gale lagaa ker kuch der rota raha or Wo shaks jissko maine abhi abhi maara thaa Phir zinda ho gaya…………………….. judaa ho gayi ye zamaane ki mehfilen,or roshini ka safar,Hum andhere ke musafir Humko Tanhaiyaan mubaarak

Ye sab to mere humsafar hain, mera samaan jeene ka, us se bichad ker to phir bhi zinda houn,Inn sabse bichad gaya to kya jee paaunga?

Bahut bahut gehre ehsaas hai. ek alag andaaz aapka dekhne ko mila. bahut pasand aaya mujhe. Har ehsaas dil ko choo gaye. hazaron dili daad. hats off to you.
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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyon se bhara...!!

«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2013, 09:04:00 PM »

taish

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ek khamosh replyyy


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyon se bhara...!!

«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2013, 09:06:00 PM »

Lucky Jee Aadaab... !

Bahut khoob janab shayraana taur par jo ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye haiN waqai behad laa jawaab rahe...

MaiN aksar aise hi likhta tha apni dairy meiN.... wohi samaaN baNd diyaa aapne bhi behad umdaa daad...

HazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyon se bhara...!!

«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2013, 09:09:48 PM »

Sher-o-Shayari se Hat Kar One Of The Best Things I Have Read In Recent times.....

Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khooob taish ji..Har lafz Apna Jaadu Bikher Raha Tha..

Just Beautiful....


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyon se bhara...!!

«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2013, 09:11:00 PM »

parwaaz ji ek dairy ka page aap bhi post kijiye na.... dekhna hai aapka bhi andaaz e bayaan.... plzzzzz


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyon se bhara...!!

«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2013, 12:00:40 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on June 14, 2013, 08:41:43 PM

haaye itni tareef to shayad kabhi kisi ne nahiN ki meri, ab aqsh ji chane ke jhaad pe bhi na chadhaaiye, bechaari jhaad mera vajan nahin jhel paayegi, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath nibhaati raheN...!!


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!

«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2013, 12:30:56 AM »

Wah,Wah,Wah Taish ji,
Bahut khoobsurat ahsaas.Really nice.


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!

«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2013, 03:42:37 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 14, 2013, 09:04:00 PM

taish

tumhari fan
anamika love4

ek khamosh replyyy

hahahahahah ahcha andaaz tha ji, waise aaj to mera din ban gaya, aap aur meri fan, so chaliye aaj se aap meri pehli sworn fan haiN out of my frnz... Usual Smile

bas yuNhi ye pyar aur hausla afzaayi mujhe dete rahyegaaa....


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!

«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2013, 12:40:34 PM »

hats off taish ji... bahut bahut umdaa... Usual Smile


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!

«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2013, 04:54:41 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 14, 2013, 09:06:00 PM

parwaaz bhai ab to hume aapki diary ke un pannoN se ru-ba-ru hona hai bas... bataaiye kab padha raheN haiN aap...

waise aapka tah-e-edil se shukraguzaar huN maiN ki aapne is kosish ko itna saraaha.... Usual Smile


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!

«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2013, 05:27:03 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 14, 2013, 09:11:00 PM

parwaaz ji ek dairy ka page aap bhi post kijiye na.... dekhna hai aapka bhi andaaz e bayaan.... plzzzzz

anamika ji maiN bhi aapki baat se poori tarah sehmat hun, ab jo parwaaz miyaaN ne baat ched hi di hai to ab to hume padhana banta hi hai...!!


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!

«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2013, 01:17:33 AM »

Quote from: khwahish on June 14, 2013, 09:09:48 PM

Sher-o-Shayari se Hat Kar One Of The Best Things I Have Read In Recent times.....

Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khooob taish ji..Har lafz Apna Jaadu Bikher Raha Tha..

Just Beautiful....

aapne bas do lines meN meri saari trishnaa bujhaa di, dil khush ho gaya ye jaan kar ki kisi ko is darza pasand aayi meri ye kosish, bas yahi mansha rahegi ki aage bhi kuch aisa likhta reh sakooN...!!


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!

«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2013, 03:22:31 PM »

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 15, 2013, 12:30:56 AM

Wah,Wah,Wah Taish ji,
Bahut khoobsurat ahsaas.Really nice.

sudhir saaheb padhne ki jehmiyat uthaane ka aur tareef karne ka bahut bahut shukriya...!!


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Re: Taish- ek KHAT khamoshiyoN se bhara...!!

«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2013, 04:57:22 PM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on June 15, 2013, 12:40:34 PM

hats off taish ji... bahut bahut umdaa... Usual Smile

touhid saaheb shukriya is kosish ko itni izzat bakshne ke liye...!! Usual Smile


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