True Love

by TOUCHY on August 23, 2005, 06:35:22 PM
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This one is really sad. If you have problems in your relationships, try and fix them. And remember, never let go of the person who you're really in love with.

girl: hey baby I want to show you...
boy: (cutting her off) ugh I'm so mad
girl: why? what's wrong?
boy: everything
girl: explain it
boy: I just lost a championship game, my parents, and I'm catching a cold
girl: well there are always other games you know...what is your problem with your parents?
boy: they're making me pay for a car repair.
girl: is it a lot of money?
boy: no but I don't want to pay for a car repair I have other things to do.
boy: but hey I don't feel well so I'm just gonna lay down for a couple of hours ok?
boy: bye.
girl: wait. I have to give you something.....
boy: can't it wait until tomorow?
girl: oh ok bye
boy: bye

2 hours later a friend of hers asks her to go for a drive......

her friend curved the car to avoid hitting a truck....hitting a tree instead.... her friend quickly dies, while she is in critical condition...

(this one here is between her sister and the boy talking...)

sister: oh my gosh(crying)
boy: what...what's wrong?
sister: my sister.....your girlfriend was involved in a car wreck(crying)
boy: oh no! is she ok?
sister: she's in critical condition
boy: I'll be there as soon as possible

he goes in the hospital room, sobbing.

boy: she wanted to give or tell me something...
his gf's mom: yeah.....this.

he opoens it. In the envelope it said,
......you're everything to me.....I love you with everything I am,
and everything I have... I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Sealed in the envelope was a ripped movie ticket from the first movie they went to and the first picture they both had...he kissed the picture as tears fell from his eyes onto the picture.....
then the machines flatlined. After 3 minutes she was pronounced dead.

I am telling all of you who have read it this to open your hearts and minds, to love the person who you're with, and never to let go.


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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2005, 10:53:31 PM »
"To love the person who you're with, and never to let go.".........kinda senti but bahut acchi hai.....but u got to agree w/ me sometimes its good to let go to make others happy........who care abt. us.....hai na
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Suhas
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2005, 05:09:26 AM »
Moral is really good...."If you have problems in your relationships, try and fix them. And remember, never let go of the person who you're really in love with"

Thanks for sharing with us Touchy!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2005, 01:32:37 PM »
Thats really sad Touchy.........!!!

Some people get their due attention..... when its too late........ !!!!!
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TOUCHY
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2005, 05:24:17 PM »
Thank U so much Isha ji, yeah u r right n i back ur attitude in dis regard.
Thank u so much Suhas Ji  n Talat ji!!!!!!!!!!!! aap hamara likha kuch padhe yahi hamare liye bahut hi fakhar ki baat hain........ really it gives me a lot of motivation n support n i lways need dis.............. Hope !!!! U won't let me down.
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2005, 05:29:56 PM »
hmm such a very touching story, par woh kya hai na hum logo ko value kisi ki tab hi samajh me ati hai jab woh humare pas nahin hota. we took some ppl for quranted... sad5
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TOUCHY
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2005, 05:41:28 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
hmm such a very touching story, par woh kya hai na hum logo ko value kisi ki tab hi samajh me ati hai jab woh humare pas nahin hota. we took some ppl for quranted... sad5


True Very True Meena ji............... bilkul sahi kaha aapne.
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Sahil_Khushi
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2005, 01:32:35 PM »
THat is really nice,,,,,,,,,,,,
Ya Rab woh na samje hein na samjegay meri baat
De un ko dil aur jo na de mujh ko zubaan aur.
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diya_barsat
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2007, 10:42:58 AM »
Well, its really touching but sometimes its good to let it go because if its yours it will be back for sure and if its not then think that it was never urs and the happiness of both can be in that.
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