Unknown Target...........masoom -Panna 2:General Stories

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«Reply #15 on: August 20, 2012, 03:58:42 PM »

Quote from: mkv on August 17, 2012, 02:25:50 AM

Sukriyaa bhaai


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #16 on: August 21, 2012, 12:13:18 AM »

Quote from: mkv on August 19, 2012, 08:18:03 AM

Bahoot bahoot bahoot Sukriyaa


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #17 on: August 21, 2012, 08:08:32 AM »

Par etnee khusee mai wo ye sab kaise dekh paatee
Se aage......
Update 7 :- Part 2
Usne jaldee se letter khoola aour parne lagee...

Dear Riyaa
Tumhaaraa shahar kiyaa chood aayaa , aesaa lagtaa hai apnaa DIL, apnee JAAN apnee DUNIYAA sab wahee tumhaare paas chood aayaa. Pahle din me ek doo baar tumhaaraa deedar hoo jaataa thaa too pooree raat chain se tumhaare sapnoo me kaat daaltaa thaa , par ab to kambakhat neend bhee goom hoo gayee aour chain bee.
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Kabhee kabhee to DIL kartaa hai sab kuch chod chaad ke tumhaare paas aa jaan.oo par ye bhee mumkeen nahee hai.
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Jab tumhe dekhne kee tadap ne meraa jeenaa haraam kar diyaa to main tumhaare shahar aayaa par pataa chalaa kee tum bhee shahar chod ke kahee jaa chukee hoo. KahaaN...ye koi nahee jaantaa.
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Mujhe lagtaa hai agar aour kuch din tum mujhe nahee milee to main pagal hoo jaaonga . Main mar jaaongaa....tum jahaaN kahee bhee hoo plz mere paas aa jaao naa. Main marnaa nahee chaahtaa. Main pagal hoonaa nahee chahtaa. Tum plz...aa jaao naa.....mujhe pagal hoone se bachaa loo naa...plz plz plz plz mujhe bachaa lo na....bachaa lo.....bachaa lo.
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Riyaa kee sanse ukharne lagee wo bechainee se pagal hoone lagee. Usse wo letter aage na paadaa gayaa. Wo bahoot der tak gahree sans letee rahee. Fir ek gilaas paanee piyaa tab jaake normal huyee aour fir aage parne lagee...

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mkv

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #18 on: August 21, 2012, 12:52:02 PM »

aage..
beech beech me acche jajbaat mix karte hain aap


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #19 on: August 23, 2012, 12:10:11 PM »

Quote from: mkv on August 15, 2012, 05:15:46 PM

Badhiya..aage?

Sukriyaa bhaai aesaa lag rahaa hai jaise aapke alaawaa es story ko koi aour par hee nahee raha hai. Sirf ek aap hee hai jo comment de rahe hai. Aapkaa sukriyaa , bahoot bahoot sukriyaa


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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #20 on: August 23, 2012, 12:15:59 PM »

Kya farq padta hai..
shayad khatam hone ke baad log kuch comment karenge.
Don't get disheartened.


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #21 on: August 24, 2012, 12:42:23 AM »

Fir ek gilaas paanee piyaa tab jaake normal huyee aour fir aage parne lagee...

Ab aage
Update 7 :- Part 3

Pagal to sayad main ho hee chukaa hooN. Tumhe Letter likhne me lagaa hooN aour ye bhee nahee jantaa kee tum kahaaN hoo.
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Kuch pataa hoo yaa naa hoo par ek baat mujhe achche se pataa hai aour yakeen bhee hai. Kabhee naa kabhee tum mujhe jaroor miloogee, kyonkee meraa pyaar sachchaa hai aour jyaadaa din tak BHaGVAAAN bhee tumhe mujhse judaa nahee rakh payegaa. Usse bhee hamey ak karnaa hee hoogaa .... Karnaa hee hooga.
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Riyaa tumhe pataa hai, ab mujhe rooj doohree jindagee gujarnee pad rahee hai. Raat-Raat bhar aanso'ao me tairtaa rahtaa hooN aour subah hootey hee muskurahat hontooN pe sazaa letaa hooN. LogooN koo hasaataa hooN aour khud hastaa hooN par koi nahee jantaa kee ek baar hansney ke liye mujhe dil hee dil me hazaar baar roonaa padtaa hai. Par koi un aanso'ao ko jaan hee nahee paataa .. Aour main khud bhee nahee chaahtaa ki koi unhe dekh paaye yaa jaan paaye........ Par kabhee kabhee es jindagee se thak jaataa hooN aour soochtaa hooN ki es jindagee koo khatam kar dooN, par meree jindagee to tumhaaree amaanat hai, esliye esko khatam bhee nahee kar paataa.
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Khair raat ke 04:50AM hooo chuke hai, ab soota hooN....
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Naa hee kahee bhejne waale kaa naam likhaa thaa aour naa hee address...Riyaaa pagloo kee tarah letter ulat pulat ke dekhtee rahee ... KaheeN too naam mil jaaye ... KaheeN pataa likhaa hoo, Shaayad apnee koi phootoo bhejee hoo par kuch bhee haath nahee lagaa. Haath lagaa to sirf maayusee aour maayusee..

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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #22 on: August 24, 2012, 01:07:49 AM »

Update 7 :- Part 4

Riyaa kuch der tak jabt kartee rahee fir pagloo kee tarah chillane lagee...

"Nahee... Ye be-imaanee hai...9 saal pahle tum mujhe ek Letter thamaa ke gum hoo gaye the... Aour 9 saal baad fir ek letter bhej diyaa... Khud nahee mil sakte kiyaa... KahaaN hoo tum mere paas aa jaao naa... Main tumhe apnee banhoo mai chupaa loongee.... Ek baar aa jaao fir kabhee tumhe khud se alag nahee hoone doongee.... Sirf ek baar mil jaao naa...sirf ek baar"
Riyaa kee aawaaj us ajnabee tak too kahaaN pahoonch paatee par niche room main so rahe uske mammee paapaa tak pahoonch gayee.... Uskee mamee doodte huye upar aate huye boolee.. "K...kiyaa huaa betee kiyooN chillaa rahee hoo"
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" k...k... Kuch nahee ..m...mamee wo sapnaa dekh rahee thee.." .. Riyaa sarmindagee se bolee
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Uskee jindagee bhee to ek sapnaa hee ban chukee thee jiskaa ab tootne kaa waqat aa chukaa thaa... Bikharne kaa waqat aa chukaa thaa ... Par wo masoom anjaan thee

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #23 on: August 24, 2012, 03:00:22 AM »

Quote from: mkv on August 21, 2012, 12:52:02 PM

aage..
beech beech me acche jajbaat mix karte hain aap

Thanks a lot brother


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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #24 on: August 24, 2012, 03:07:40 AM »

is baar maamla serious hai.
mai isiliye kahta hun..kahaniyan sirf kahaniyan hoti hai jindgee ka sach nahee..
still qurious...it's really interesting now.
but TRUE love doesn't exist in materialistic world now.


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«Reply #25 on: August 25, 2012, 02:15:48 PM »

Quote from: mkv on August 23, 2012, 12:15:59 PM

Kya farq padta hai..
shayad khatam hone ke baad log kuch comment karenge.
Don't get disheartened.

Hauslaa baranaa kaa sukriyaa.


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #26 on: August 26, 2012, 03:58:50 AM »

Update 8 :- Part 1
Karan es LOCKET ko ek hee najar dekhkar pahchaan gayaa thaa. Chaandee kee chain se judaa chaandee ke choote-choote phoolooN ko jodkar R shabd bnaa huaa ye Locket bahoot khoobsurat thaa. Aesaa Locket sirf special order dekar hee banvaayaa jaa saktaa thaa. Esme koi shak nahee thaa kee ye wahee Locket thaa jo usne Shaan ko hameshaa pahne dekhaa thaa. Use yaad aayaa kee Usne shaan se us Locket ke baare me hazar baar poochaa thaa par kabhee bhee usne koi dhang ka jawab nahee diyaa thaa. Hameshaa ultee-seedhee baate karke use taal deta thaa... Karan ne apnee aankhe band kee aour apne Maajee kee kitaab ke panne ulatne lagaa....... Aour kahee bahoot peeche pahoonch gayaa

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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #27 on: August 26, 2012, 04:29:24 AM »

Update 8 :- Part 2
"Shaan , tum ye Locket har waqat kiyoo pahne rahte hoo"
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"Kiyoonkee main tumse bahoot pyaar kartaa hooN" Shaan ne ek natkhat muskurahat laboo pe sajaate huye jawaab diyaa.
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"Kiyaa ..... Kiyaa matlab hai tumhaaraa" Karan uljhee huyee najaroo se use dekhtaa huaa cheekhaa
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"Matlab saaf hai... Main tumhe dil ao jaan se chaahtaa hooN"
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"Main tumse locket ke baare me baat kar rahaa hooN ,, aour tum ho kee bakwaas hee kiye jaa rahe hoo" Karan jhunjhlaa hee gayaa
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"Achchaa aesaa hai kiyaa.... Main to samjhaa main Jokes sunaa rahaa hooN"Shaan ne masoom banne kee shaandaar acting kee
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"Yaar majaak mat karoo .. Ye R kaun hai" Karan sanjeedaa thaa
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"Tumhaaraa naam K A R A N hai naa"
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"haa hai"
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"R tumhaare naam me aataa hai naa"
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" Haa aataa hai"
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" Bas esee liye maine ye Locket pahnaa hai" Shaan pyaar se us LOCKET ko haath se choota huaa boolaa.
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Karan jane kitnee der tak majee ke tree ke neeche baithaa rahtaa kee mobile kee lgaataar bajtee ring ne use past se present me aane pe majboor kar diyaa.

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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #28 on: August 26, 2012, 04:52:15 AM »

Update 8 :- Part 3
Karan ne ek thandee sans lee aour apnee jeb se Mobile nikalkar call pick kee...
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"Hello"
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"Kiyaa"
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"KahaaN"
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"Main abhee aa rahaa hooN" Karan ne mobile jeb me daalaa aour bhaagte huye apnee gaadee tak aayaa. Aour ek minute baad uskee gaadee full speed se shahar ke baahar kee taraf jaa rahee thee. Thooree der baad hee uskee gaadee shahar se bahar ek veeran khadhar ke paas jaakar rookee.
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Hameshaa veeran rahne waalaa khandar aaj apne seene pe aadmeeyo ko chalte firte dekh rahaa thaa.
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Karan jaldee se gaadee se utraa aour lagbhag doodte huye khandar me ghons gayaa. Khadhar me ghooste hee Karan ko Sub-inspecter Chirag aour Sikandar mile jo usko lekar ek kamre me gaye.
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Kamre kaa darvaajaa tootaa huaa thaa. Uskee chaat ko makriyoo ne apnaa ghar banaa rakhkhaa thaa. Mkaan ke fars pe tarah tarah ke keedey apne shikar kee talaash me edhar udhar ghoom rahe the. Chiraag ne tourch on kee aour marne waale ke chehre pe light daalee. Uskaa chehraa dekhkar karan kaa moonH hairat se khaulaa aour fir khaulaa hee rah gayaa.. Aour chehre pe pareshaanee ke ghaney shaaye mandraane lage

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(Jaaree)


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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #29 on: August 26, 2012, 07:16:16 AM »

pehle to yeh kahungaa ki kahani bahut shaandar hai aur mystery khaufff aur drama ko mixkarke jo combination se banaya hai kahani ko bahut mazedaar hai bas thodha confusion story mein mat kar dena jisse sunte sunte dimaag hi behek jaaye...khair story going great


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