Unknown Target...........masoom -Panna 3:General Stories

masoom shahjada

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«Reply #30 on: August 26, 2012, 01:27:37 PM »

Quote from: mkv on August 24, 2012, 03:07:40 AM

is baar maamla serious hai.
mai isiliye kahta hun..kahaniyan sirf kahaniyan hoti hai jindgee ka sach nahee..
still qurious...it's really interesting now.
but TRUE love doesn't exist in materialistic world now.

Haa bhaai kahanee hee hai. Bas aap sabko thooraa saa intertenment karne ke liye likh rahaa hooN. Aapkaa bahoot sukriyaa. Bas esee tarah sath dete rahiye tab hee mai ye kahaanee puree kar paogaa.


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #31 on: August 27, 2012, 11:24:25 AM »

Quote from: asif biswas on August 26, 2012, 07:16:16 AM

pehle to yeh kahungaa ki kahani bahut shaandar hai aur mystery khaufff aur drama ko mixkarke jo combination se banaya hai kahani ko bahut mazedaar hai bas thodha confusion story mein mat kar dena jisse sunte sunte dimaag hi behek jaaye...khair story going great

bahoot sukriyaa aasif bhaai.
Ye kahanee ek suspence thriller hai sath sath ek jabardast suspencefull love story hai.
Main kosis karungaa kee kahanee ko jyaadaa naa uljhaane kee.
Have a nice day.


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«Reply #32 on: August 27, 2012, 11:07:42 PM »

Update 9 :- Part 1
Karan kee aankhe laash ke chehre pe jamee thee aour moonh hairat se khulaa huaa thaa. Es aadmee ko Karan ne us din Park me dekhaa thaa jise dekhkar Shaan choonk uthaa thaa aour usse Park se kheenchtaa huaa baahar le gayaa thaa. Ab es shakhas kee laash ek veeraan khandhar me milnaa yaa to sirf ek ittefaak thaa yaa fir ye shakhas bhee us kes se talluk rakhtaa thaa jispe Karan kaam kar rahaa thaa. Kuch bhee kahnaa muskil thaa.
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" Chiraag, tum roosnee kaa intizaam karo aour Sikandar tum es khandhar kee talaashee lo" Karan ne apnee hairat pe kabu paate hue kahaa. Kamre me andheraa thaa jisse Karan ke chehre pe aane jaane walee hairat ko koi dekh nahee sakaa thaa.
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Thooree der baad kamraa roshan thaa aour Karan aour Chiraag room ke andar laash ko gaur se dekh rahe the bakee sabko Karan ne Sikandar kee help ke liye bhej diyaa thaa.

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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #33 on: August 27, 2012, 11:43:15 PM »

Update 9 :- Part 2
Laash ek kursee pe bandhee huyee thee jo yakeenan baahar se hee laayee gayee thee. Murder yakeenan yahee huaa thaa jiskee gavaahee deervaaroo aour fars pe jamaa huaa khoon de rahaa thaa.
Laash kaa haal bahoot buraa thaa. Ak haath kee 3 ungliyaa faras pe bikhree huyee thee , ak kaan bhee fars pe giraa huaa thaa, daaye kandhe pe 4 jakham aour baaye kaandhe pe 2 jakham the, pet pe bhee 5 jakham the. Jakham chaaku se kiye huye lagte the. Fars pe giraa huaa khoon jam chukaa thaa jo es baat kee gavahee detaa thaa kee eskaa murder raat me kiyaa gayaa hai. Jisne bhee es sakhas ko maaraa thaa bahoot be-rahmee se tadpaa-tadpaa ke aour bahoot itmeenaan se maaraa thaa.
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"Es murder ke baare me kisne inform kiyaa" Karan ne Chiraag se poochaa
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"Kisee PCO se call aayee thee" Chiraag ne jawaab diyaa
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"Pahchaan huyee eskee" Karan kee aankhe laash pe jamee thee
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"Nahee sir"
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"Jald se jald eskee detail information pataa karoo eske dost dusman sabkee list kal tak meree table pe hoonee chaahiye" Karan ne Chiraag ko order diyaa
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Thooree der baad Sikandar bhee room me thaa..
"Maine pooraa khandhar chaan maaraa kuch bhee nahee milaa" Sikandar ne maayoosh se lahje me kahaa.
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"Laash ko post-martam ke liye bhej do" kahtaa huaa Karan room se nikal aayaa.
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Wo kuch soochtaa huaa gadee tak aayaa aour thooree he der baad uskee gaadee shahar kee aour dooD rahee thee.
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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #34 on: August 27, 2012, 11:45:00 PM »

Update 10 :- Part 1
Wo kuch soochtaa huaa gadee tak aayaa aour thooree he der baad uskee gaadee shahar kee aour dooD rahee thee.
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Aour kuch hee der baad Shaan ke ghar ke aage rukee. Karan gaadee se utraa aour door-bail bjaane lagaa. 5 baar door-bail bajaane ke baad bhee jab darvaajaa naa khulaa to Karan 6tee baar door-bail bjaane ke baare me sooch hee rahaa thaa kee darvaajaa khul gayaaa...
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"Etnee saveraa saveraa kaise aanaa huaa" Shaan ne angdaayee lete huye kahaa
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"12 baj chuke hai janaab aour aapke liye abhee saveraa hee hai" Karan use tooltee nigaahoo se dekhtaa rahaa
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"Tumne wo kahaavat to sunee hee hoogee , jab jaagoo tab hee saveraa, Main ab jaagaa ...... to mere liye abhee saveraa huaa naa" Shaan dring-room me Karan ke saamne soofe pe girtaa huaa boolaa. Karan chup-chaap use ghoortaa rahaa.
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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #35 on: August 28, 2012, 03:01:36 AM »

very good


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masoom shahjada

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«Reply #36 on: August 28, 2012, 03:31:31 AM »

Update 10 :- Part 2
"Kiyaa looge paanee...Soodaa paanee yaa nimboo paanee" Shaan sofe pe lette huye boolaa... Par uske andaaj se nahee lag rahaa thaa ki wo Karan ke liye ab kuch laane ke liye uthne waalaa hai.
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"Cofee" karan ne farma'es kee
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" Cold, Hot , white, black , yaa green..."
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"Mere baap kaisee bhee banaa laao" Karan uskee non-stop chaltee jaban ko rokne ke liye jaldee se bolaa.
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Shaan muskuraataa huaa Kitchen me chalaa gayaa.
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Karan thakaa thakaa mahsoos kar rahaa thaa esliye fresh hone ke liye bath-room me aayaa. Par jaise hee usne baathroom kaa darvaajaa khoolaa uskee aankhe fatee kee fatee rah gayee.
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Usne ghabraa kar baahar dekhaa Shaan abhee tak kitchen me hee thaa. Baath-room me khoon me sane huye kapre rakhe the. Karan ne jaldee se apnee jeb se mobile nikaalaa aour bath-room ke 4-5 photos le liye. Aour un kapdoo me se khoon se sanaa thooraa saa kapdaa bhee es tarah faadaa kee wo gaur se dekhne se hee pataa lag saktaa thaa kee usme se kuch kapdaa faadaa gayaa hai,..
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Karan jaldee se sofe pe usee andaaj me aakr baith gaya.
Aour cofee peekar jaldee se police station aayaa aour wo khoon se tar kapdaa forensic jaanch ke liye bhej diyaa.
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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #37 on: August 28, 2012, 05:13:21 AM »

Update 11 :- Part 1
Riyaa kee jindagee ajeeb haalaatoo se gujar rahee thee. Jindagee ke 9 saal usne apne andekhe aasiq ke intizaar me kaat diye the. Ab 9 saal baad use usse milne kee ummed hone lagee thee kyonkee ab rooj uske anjaan pyaar kaa rooj ak khat aataa thaa.... Uske paas aane waale khatoo me badotaree hootee jaa raahee thee aour uskee chaahat me bhee..... Ab wo jab bhee ghar se bahar hotee har jagah apne pyaar ko talaastee par har baar naakaamee hee haath lagtee par ek din chamatkar hoo gayaa...
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Ye bhee ek aam saa hee thakaa dene waalaa din thaa... Wo office se lautkar apnaa dinner karke apne kamre me aayee aour aaj aayaa huaa letter khool kar padne lagee tab hee uskaa mobile bajne lagaa usne dekhaa screen pe koi unknown number thaa usne OK press kiyaa aour baat karne ke liye mobile kaan se lagaayaa.

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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #38 on: August 28, 2012, 05:32:42 AM »

Update 11 :- Part 2
"HELLO" Riyaa ne kahaa
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"Is it Riyaa" Riyaa ko aawaaj kuch sunee sunee see lagee
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" Yaa .. I am Riyaa, but who are you?"
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" I am your Lover , and i want to meet you tomorrow at The Green Park" Doosree taraf se aavaaj aayee.
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Uskee es betukee bakhwaas ne riyaa kaa khoon khaulaa diyaa..... Wo gusse me chillayee. "Who the hell are you and how dare you to talk me like that, i'll kill you bastard"
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"i am the guy who sends you letters" wo ajnabee sarartee lahje me boolaa
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"K..ky.....kyaa kah rahe hai aap" Riyaa ekdam shocked ho gayee...use lagaa use sunne me galtee huyee hai

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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #39 on: August 28, 2012, 05:50:22 AM »

Update 11 :- Part 3
Use lagaa use sunne me galtee huyee hai...
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"Yaar main hee hooN jisne kuch saal pahle aapko ek letter bhejaa thaa aour pichle kuch dino se main hee aapko letters bhej rahaa hooN.. Ab main aapse milnaa chaahtaa hooN"
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" Main abhee aa rahee hooN.... KahaaN hai aap" Riyaa besabree se boolee
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"Abhee nahee, kal shaam 5PM ..at The Green Park" Ajnabee ne fir kahaa
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"Kal nahee aaj aour abhee milte hai naa" Riyaa uskaa jawaab sunkar ruhaansee see hote huye boolee
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"Aaj , Nahee kal hee milege"
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"Apnaa naam to bataa doo... Aour ye number aapkaa hee hai naa.. Aap kahaaN rahte hai.. Aour kiyaa karte hai...aou"
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"Arre baabaa sans to le loo... Kal mil rahe hai naa sab maloom hoo jayega....O.K. Bye..... Take Care" Ajnabee ne uskaa jawaab sunne binaa hee call dis-connect kar dee.
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Riyaa kuch der tak hairanee se apne Mobile ko dekhtee rahee aour fir pagloo kee tarah Mobile ko kiss karne lagee...
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(Jaareee)


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«Reply #40 on: August 28, 2012, 06:22:13 AM »

Update 12 :- Part 1
Kal ke bare me soochte-soochte kab raat aankhoo hee aankhoo me gayab hoo gayee use maloom hee naa huaa... Subah usne break-fast kiyaa aour poore ghar me chakraatee firtee rahee.. Uskee mammy usse ajeeb najroo se dekhtee rahee..... Aakhir khudaa khudaa karke Dophar huaa aour Lunch karke wo apne kamre me aa gaayee aour taiy'yaar hone lagee...
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Badee-badee kaalee andheree raat jaisee kalee aankhe jinse aaj khusiyaa saaf-saaf dikh rahee thee... Uskee aankhe etnee khoobsurat thee kee agar koi unme jhaank letaa thaa madhoosh hoo jaataa thaa...... Gahre gulaabee hont jis par sadiyoo kee pyaas rahtee bahoot khoobsurat lag rahe the... Aour kale-kale kamar se niche tak aate ghane baal jinko usne aaj khulaa hee choor diyaa thaa mahfile loot'ne ke liye kafee the.. Halke pink color ke sont aour salwaar se uske gulaabee hont aour bhee jyaadaa gulaabee lag rahe the.. 5 foot 5 inch ka kad .. Aour khoobsurat badan khudaa ne wakai use behad haseen banaayaa thaa ... Use husn binaa mack-up ke hee jaan le letaa thaa... Aour naa kabhee wo mak-up kartee hee thee.. Aaj bhee usne mack-up ke naam pe sirf apne baaloo ko khulaa chor diyaa thaa aour sirf halkee see lipistic lagaayee thee....
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(Jaaareeee)


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«Reply #41 on: August 28, 2012, 06:36:47 AM »

Update 12 :- Part 2
3 baje hee woo The Green Park kee ak bench pe baithee apne aashiq kaa intizaar kar rahee thee... Man me tarah tarah ke khayaal shoor machaa rahe the ... Aakhir kar kareeb 4:30 pe black jeens aour white shirt me kareeb 24-25 saal kaa koi larkaa use apnee aour aataa dikhaa.. Larke kaa kad 5 foot 7 inch thaa.. Rang halkaa savlaa aour kasratee jism jo yakeenan jim kee badolat thaa. Uskaa samlaa rang tamtamaa rahaa thaa Riyaa jaisee paree ke aage uskaa rang bahoot kaalaa lag rahaa thaa...
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Aane waalaa sidhe Riyaa ke paas aayaa aour uske paas hee tik gayaa

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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #42 on: August 28, 2012, 10:14:31 AM »

Update 12 :- Part 3
"Sameer , tum yahaa kiyaa kar rahe ho" Riyaa ne hairat se kahaa.. Aane waalaa sameer hee thaa jo college me Riyaa kaa claas fellow rah chukaa thaa...
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"Tumse milne aayaa hooN"
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"Majaak mat karoo" Riyaa ne halkaa saa muskuraake kahaa.
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"Main majaak nahee kar rahaa ... Maine hee we saare letters tumkoo bheje the aour kal call karke aaj milne ko bhee maine hee kahaa thaa" SAMEER kaa lahjaa ajeeb saa lag rahaa thaa ... Aesaa lag rahaa thaa kee wo pareshaan hai yaa insaan aksar jab jhoot booltaa hai too uskaa ye hee haal hootaa hai.
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"Kyaa wo tum hee ho" Riyaa khusee se chillaayee aour uthkar uske gale jaa lagee aour roone lagee... Sameer halkaan pareshaan naa too use chup karaa paa rahaa thaa aour naa hee use khud se alag kar paa rahaa thaa...
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"Riyaa log ajeeb najroo se dekh rahe hai" Sameer jab use khud se alag karne me naakaam rahaa too usne loogoo kee aour dhayaan dilaayaa.
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"Dekhne doo... Ab main tumhe nahee chodugee.. Tum fir mujhe chodkar chale jaoge...... Main ab tumhe kahee nahee jaane dungee" Riyaa jajbaatee hoo rahee thee.
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Sameer ne baree muskil se use chup karaayaa... Wo dono wahee baithe der raat tak baatey karte rahe.. Jab raat jyaadaa hone lagee to sameer ne jaanaa chaahaa... Par Riyaa use jaane hee nahee de rahee thee... Sameer ne kal fir milne kaa waadaa karke baree muskil se use ghar ravaanaa kiyaa aour khud bhee apne ghar ko chal diyaa.
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Riyaa ghar pahoonch kar apne mammee paapaa ke saath dinner kar rahee thee.. uskaa mobile bajne lagaa usne mobile jeb se nikaalaa ... Call Sameer ke number se aa rahee thee... Usne khaanaa adooraa hee choodaa aour upar apne kamre me aa gayee...
"Arre khaanaa beech me kiyoo chood diyaa" kee mammee kee pukar ko bhee usne ansunaa kar diyaa thaa..
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Usne mobile kaan se lagaayaa
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"Hello, kyaa aap riyaa bool rahee hai" uske hello karne se pahle hee kisee larkee kee aavaaj sunayee dee..
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" Jee haaN main Riyaa hee bool rahee hooN.. Par aap kaun" Riyaa ne hairat se kahaa.
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"Main Sameer kee bahan bool rahee hooN.. Sameer bhaai kaa acsident hoo gayaa hai.. Ham unkoo Ashokaa Hospital lekar aaye hai... Sameer bhaai aapko yaad kar rahe hai aap plz jaldee aa jaaye" Sameer kee bahan bahoot pareshaan lag rahee thee..

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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #43 on: August 28, 2012, 10:39:09 AM »

Update 13 :- Part 1
...Aap plz jalee aa jaaye" Sameer kee bahan pareshaan lag rahee thee
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" main bas abhee pahoonchtee hooN" Riyaa ne kahaa...
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Riyaa paagal see niche bhaagee aour apnee car nikaal ke toofaanee raftaar se hospital pahoonchee. Khudaa kee khair hee rahee kee 3-4 jagah acsident hone se bachaa... Usne Sameer ke number call kee aour uskee bahan se pooch kar uske paas pahoonch gayee... Uskaa mobile ek baar aour bajne lagaa.. Usne dekhaa uske ghar se uskee mammee kee call aa rahee thee usne apnaa phone switched off kar diyaa.
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Sameer kee bahan use Sameer ke room me le gayee.. Sameer ke kahne pe uskee bahan ko choodkar sab kamre se baahar nikal gaye .. Tab riyaa boolee "Kaise huaa ye sab" Riyaa kaa chehraa aansu'ao se tar thaa..
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" Maine tumhe dhookaa diyaa thaa usee kee sajaa Bhagvaan ne dee hai..."
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" Dhookaa kaisaa dhookaa..... Kaisee bahkee bahkee baate kar rahe hoo" Riyaa ne pareshaanee se uskee aour dekhte huye kahaa
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"We letters jo maine tumhe bheje the dar-asal we maine nahee likhe the.. We sab letters mujhe Station pe mile the" Sameer ne apnee gardan jhukaate huye kahaa... Aour Riyaa uskee baat kaa matlab samajhane kee nakaam kosis kar rahee thee...
"Baith jaao main tumkoo sab btaataa hooN" Sameer ek gahree sans lete huye boolaa..

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(Jaaree)


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«Reply #44 on: August 28, 2012, 11:07:53 AM »

Mast..bahut badhiya


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