Unknown Target...........masoom -Panna 4:General Stories

masoom shahjada

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«Reply #45 on: August 28, 2012, 12:56:48 PM »

Update 13 :- Part 2
"Baat lagbhag 2 maheene pahle kee hai, mai train se utarkar station se baahar aa rahaa thaa. Mene dekhaa do sakhas mere paas se bhaagte huye nikle .. Unme se ak kaa beg gir gayaa .. Mene wo beg uthaayaa aour unhe aavaaje detaa unke peeche aayaa . Par jab mai station se baahar aayaa to un dono ka kahee pataa nahee chalaa. Mene station pe unkaa kafee der tak wait kiyaa par we laut-kar nahee aaye.. fir ye sochkar beg ghar le aayaa ki beg me unkaa address hogaa to es beg ko unke paas pahoonchaa doongaa... Ghar aake maine beg khoolaa to shocked rah gayaa beg me tumhaare bahoot saare school time ke phootos the aour letters kaa pooraa dher.. Jinhe padne pe mujhe maloom huaa kee address badal jaane se wo shakhas we letters tum tak nahee pahoonchaa paayaa.. We letters dekhkar ek pal mere man me aayaa kee beg tumhare ghar pahoochaa doo.. Par fir tumhe fasaane kaa idea mere man aayaa.... Bakee maine kyaa kiyaa wo tum bakhoobee jaantee hooN.. Un letters ko padkar mujhe pataa chalaa wo shakhas tumse be-intihaa muhabbat kartaa hai... Aour uske saath bagvaan hai... Kiyookee mene tumhaare paas aane kee kosis kee too bhagvaan ne mujhe ye sajaa de dee.. Meree bahan wo beg tumhe de degee.. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar denaa" Sameer ne pooree kahaanee use samjhaayee aour hath jodkar maafee magne lagaa.
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Riyaa kaa dil kar rahaa thaa kee Sameer kaa galaa ghoont de ..... Usne khudaa se kahaa khudaa ye bach kiyoo gayaa eskee jaan le hee lete to achchaa thaa. .... Baree muskil se wo apne gusse ko kaboo kartee huyee kamre se nikaltee chalee gayee
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(Jaaree)


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asif biswas

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #46 on: August 28, 2012, 03:51:24 PM »

thriller with romance story ko bahut acchi se kheech rahe ho... notworthy

intezaar rahegaa agli update...


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mkv

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #47 on: August 28, 2012, 03:59:29 PM »


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #48 on: August 29, 2012, 01:29:08 PM »

Quote from: mkv on August 28, 2012, 11:07:53 AM

Mast..bahut badhiya

Bahoot bahoot sukriyaa bhaai.


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masoom shahjada

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«Reply #49 on: August 30, 2012, 07:19:37 AM »

Quote from: asif biswas on August 28, 2012, 03:51:24 PM

thriller with romance story ko bahut acchi se kheech rahe ho... notworthy

intezaar rahegaa agli update...

Aage bhee es hee tarah likhne kee kosis kee jaayegee. Thanks


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #50 on: August 30, 2012, 07:20:35 AM »

Quote from: asif biswas on August 28, 2012, 03:51:24 PM

thriller with romance story ko bahut acchi se kheech rahe ho... notworthy

intezaar rahegaa agli update...

Aage bhee es hee tarah likhne kee kosis kee jaayegee. Thanks


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #51 on: August 30, 2012, 03:20:38 PM »

Quote from: mkv on August 28, 2012, 03:59:29 PM

sukriyaa bhaai


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masoom shahjada

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«Reply #52 on: August 31, 2012, 06:03:00 AM »

Update 14 :- Part 1

Raat apnaa andheraa failaa chukee hai. Karan apne bedroom me akelaa baithaa kisee gahree sooch me gum hai. Uskee patnee Sanjanaa apne mayke doosre shahar gayee hui hai. Karan tahai ke es jangal me sochoo ke ped ke niche naa jaane kitnee der aour baithaa rahtaa kee uske mobile pe musalsal bajte song "Tu jo nahee hai to kuch bhee nahee hai.. ..Ye maanaa kee mahfil ha.nsee hai jawaa hai...." ne uskaa dhayaan apnee aour keench liyaa..... Karan ne bed pe rakhaa mobile haath baraa kar uthaayaa, screen pe likhaa number dekhkar muskuraate huye mobile apne kaano se lagaayaa....
" Hello Sanjanaa.. Kaisee ho " Karan ne apne lahje se pareshaanee door karne kee bahoot koshis ke par kar naa paayaa..
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" Hi, mai theek hooN ... Par meraa pyaaraaa pyaaraa sa baby pareshaan lag rahaa hai " Sanjanaa kee khilkhilaatee huyee aavaaj aaayee. Akele me Sanjnaa aksar Karan ko baby kahkar bulaatee thee aour jab usko jyaadaa pyaar aataa thaa to Raajaa kahkar bulaatee thee.

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(Jaaree)


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masoom shahjada

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«Reply #53 on: August 31, 2012, 06:36:58 AM »

Update 14 :- Part 2

"Tum paas nahee ho to Dil nahee lag rahaa...... Tum aa jaao naa " Karan ne use apnee baatooN me fasaanaa chaahaa
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" Arre re re mere baby ko meree etnee yaad aa rahee hai... Ke yaad me tadap tadap ke jhoot boolaa jaa rahaa hai.... Chaloo ab ye nautankee band karoo aour sach-sach bataao kiyaa baat hai.. Pareshaan kiyooN hoo " Sanjanaa ne pahle pyaar se daantaa fir serious hote huye boolee
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" Yaar pooraa jamaanaa meree baate maan letaa hai.. Par tum ho ki..... "
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" Ye bekaar kee baate kabhee saath baith kar karege. Ab bataao baat kiyaa hai " Sanjanaa uskee baat beech me hee kaat'te huye boolee.
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" Deevaaro ke bhee kaan hote hai. Wo sab mai tumhe nahee bataa saktaa " Karan ne saafgoyee se kahaa.
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" Achchaa jee... Aesaa hai kyaa " Sanjanaa chahkee
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" Tumse ek kaam hai... Karoogee " Karan kuch soochte huye bolaa
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" Baby.. Tumhaaraa ak kyaa saare kaam karne ko tayyar hooN.. Par etnee door se kaise karooN . Majboor hooN " Sanjanaa rohansepan kaa naatak karte huye boolee.
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" Main tumhe lene ke liye Shaan ko bhejugaa... Tum kisee bhee tarah use 8-10 din apne paas rooke rakhnaa. Uske baad uske saath aa jaanaa " Karan ne sanjeedagee se kahaa
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" Aour koi hukm mere Sartaaz " Sanjanaa kee ye baat bahoot achchee thee kee wo Karan kee har baat ko binaa jyaadaa sawaal kiye maan letee thee
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" Aour use ye bhee mat bataanaa kee.. Maine tumhe use aesaa karne ko kahaa hai "
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" Shak bhee nahee hone dungee...oh... Mammee bulaa rahee hai baad me call karugee...bye......aour haa baby khaanaa time pe khaate rahnaa, Baahar kee talee bhoonee cheeje mat khaanaa.. Beemar pad gaye to buree tarah naraj ho ja.nogee " Sanjanaa phone rakhne se pahle biwi kaa farz nibhaanaa nahee bhoolee.
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Karan ne apnaa mobile bed pe fenk diyaa aour nahaane kaa iraadaa kartaa huaa baathroom tak aayaa. Tab hee uskaa mobile fir " Tu jo nahee.... " kee duhaai dene lagaa...

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(Jaareee)


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masoom shahjada

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«Reply #54 on: August 31, 2012, 08:47:27 AM »

Update 15

...... Tab hee uskaa mobile " Tu jo nahee hai.... " kee duhaai dene lagaa....
Wo muskuraate huye bed tak aayaa aour haath baraakar mobile uthaa liyaa. Call kisee unjaan number se aa rahee thee... Karan ne OK ka button press kiyaa aour mobile kaan se lagaane ke baad boolaaa .. " hello "
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" Mr. Karan meree baat ko dhayaan se suno.... Raat ke 12:00 baje abc me galee number 2 , bonglow number 10 me Kamal Ke 4 saathee ikaththe hone waale hai. Tum chaahoo to unhe arrest kar sakte ho. Bunglow ka rang safed hai..... Bye " Mobile pe non-stop aavaaj aatee rahee aour apnee baat khatam karke phone rakh diyaa. Aour karan Hello....Hello ... Hello ... Kartaa rah gayaa.
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Karan ne mobile kaan se hataayaa hee thaa kee us par message aane kee tone bajee. Karan ne jaldee se SMS read kiyaa. SMS usee number se aayaa thaa jisse abhee call aayee thee.. SMS me usne wo hee address likh ke bhejaa thaa jo abhee kuch der pahle call karke bataayaa thaa.
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Karan ne us sms ko parkar .. Jis number se call aayee thee uspe call lagayee .. " Jis vodafone number se aap sampark karnaa chaahte hai unhone apnaa mobile band kar rakhkhaa hai. Kripiyaa thooree der baad koshis kare " ...... Karan ne fir 5-6 baar aour wo number try kiyaa par har baar wo number switched off hee aayaa.......
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Karan ne mobile bed pe fekaa aour sochne lagaa kiyaa kiyaa jaaye. Usne deevar pe tangee clock pe najar dalee 10:30PM hoo rahe the .. Use jo bhee karnaa thaa sirf 1 hour and 30 minute me hee karnaa thaa..
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Wo kuch der tak sochtaa rahaa fir apnaa haath bed pe abhee kuch der pahle feke gaye mobile kee aour badaa diyaa...

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(Jaaree)


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mkv

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #55 on: August 31, 2012, 09:17:01 AM »

interesting


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asif biswas

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #56 on: August 31, 2012, 10:39:32 AM »

ye policewaale ki zindagi thriller hoti hai utni dukhi aur busy rehne waali bhi sad10

...abhi abhi karan khush huya tha fhir bichara serious ho gaya...kya zindagi hai ? anways story going really exciting


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masoom shahjada

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«Reply #57 on: August 31, 2012, 11:52:11 AM »

Update 16

..... Wo kuch der sochtaa rahaa fir apnaa haath bed pe abhee kuch der pahle feke gaye mobile kee aour badaa diyaa..... Karan ne Sikandar kaa number dial kiyaa...
" Hello, Good Evening Sir " Sikandar kee aawaaj aayee.
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" Hi Sikandar.. MaiN tumhe ek number send kar rahaa hooN. Uske baare me detail information nikalwaao. Aour ho sake to location bhee trace kar loo "
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" Jee sir , aap number send keejiye "
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" ho sake to ek Hour ke andar andar mujhe detail de denaa "
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" Jee main koshis kartaa hooN " sikandar kee aavaaj me confidence jhalak rahaa thaa jaise wo es kaam ko aour jaldee kar legaa.
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" OK maiN rakhtaa hooN " Karan ne kahkar line disconnect kar dee aour fir Chiraag ka number dial kiyaa...
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" Hello "
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" Hello Sir, raat ko hamaaree yaad kaise aa gayee " Chiraag kee sookh see aawaj sunaayee dee
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" Abhee abhee mujhe info milee hai... abc me kisee safed bonglow pe Kamal ke chaar shaathee jamaa ho rahe hai . unhe arrest karnaa hai "
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" OK sir, par ye kamal kaun hai... Aour usne kiyaa kyaa hai. Jo hamaaree raatoo kee neend udaa rahaa hai "
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" Wahee jiske finger print mile the "
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" oh ... To es naacheej ko kyaa karnaa hai " Chiraag thooraa sa hairaan huaa fir boolaa
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" Tum team ko lekar xyz road pe meraa intizaar karo. 30 minute me mai wahee pahoonchtaa hooN. Aour haa sab saade kaproo me aanaa aour koi bhee police kee gaadee mat laanaa... Jis bike pe police likhaa hoo use bhee mat laanaa aour haa shoes bhee police waale mat pahan ke aanaa " Karan kisee anjaan shakas kee wajah se wahaaN jaa rahaa thaa. Esliye wo koi bhee risk nahee lenaa chaahtaa thaa.
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" Aour koi order sir " Chiraag kee aawaaj aayee.
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" Nahee mere aane tak sab wahaaN pahoonch jaane chaahiye... OK ab maiN phone rakhtaa hooN "
Karan me line disconnect karke mobile jeb me rakhkhaa. Apnaa rivolver uthaayaa, voolet uthaayaa aour apnee bike kee key uthaayee aour apne ghar ko lock kiyaa aour bike start karke ek taraf ko daudaa dee.... Uskaa rookh abc kee aour thaa...

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(Jaaree)


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masoom shahjada

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«Reply #58 on: August 31, 2012, 12:42:28 PM »

Update 17

... Uskaa rookh abc kee aour thaa ..... Wo wahaaN pahoonch kar location dekhnaa chaahtaa thaa. Bahoot saree baato ko wo ignore nahee kar saktaa thaa .. Jaise hoo saktaa thaaa kisee ne uskaa bewakoof banaayaa ho yaa koi wahaa bulaakar unko marnaa chaahtaa ho. Yaa fir wo unkee hee gang kaa koi shakhas hoo jo bagavat pe utar aayaa hooN. Karan ke dimaag me sab baate ghoom rahee thee......
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Karan ab abc me pahoonch chukaa thaa. Usne apnee bike ko galee number 2nd me le aayaa .. Es galee kee dono sides bonglow bane huye the.. Wo galee bilkul saant thee koi bhee road pe nahee ghoom rahaa thaa. Karan door se kharaa bonglow kaa mu'aaa'enaa kartaa rahaa fir apnee bike start kee aour us white bonglow kee taraf aahistaa aahistaa dooda dee . Usne dekhaa uske gate pe lock lagaa huaa thaa.. Karan ne ab apnee bike kee speed tej kar dee aour abc se baahar nikalkar apnee bike kaa rokh xyz road kee aour kar diyaa . JahaaN uskee team uskaa intizaar kar rahee thee.
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Karan thooree hee der me apnee team ke paas pahoonch gaayaa . Usne dekhaa sab saade kapro me khare uskaa inizaar kar rahe the. Karan ne unke paas jake apnee bike rookee..
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Aour ek nazar sabpe daaltaa huaa boolaa " Rajesh apnaa mobile mujhe do "
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Sab hairaanee se Karan ko dekh rahe the. Rajesh aage badaa aour apnaa mobile use thamaa diyaa. Karan kuch der tak mobile pe kuch type kartaa rahaa fir Mobile Rajesh ko thamaataa huaa boolaa.. " Tum 3 aadmiyooN ko lekar es address pe pahoo.nchoo. Aour Binaa kisee ko shak kraaye es bonglow kee nigraanee karte rahoo. Ham kuch der me wahaaN pahoo.nchte hai"
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" theek hai sir aour kuch " Rajesh mobile me us address ko dekhte huye bolaa
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" Koi bhee us bonglow me aaye yaa usse jaaye. Turant mujhe report karnaa. Aour agar koi us bonglow se nikal kar kaheeN jaaye to binaa uskee najro me aayaa uskaa pichaa karnaa " Karan ne order diyaa
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Rajesh ne 3 saathiyo ko liyaa aour jaane hee waalaa thaa tab hee Karan bolaa... " Sab apne Mobile ko vibration pe kar lo... "
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Karan kee baat sunkar sabne apne apne mobile ko vibration pe kiyaa aour Rajesh aour uskee team ke 3 member chale gaye
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Rajesh ke jaane ke baad Karan ne apnee bike start kee aour Chiraag ko apnee bike pe baithne kaa ishaaraa karte huye bolaa ...
" Tum loog yaheeN intizaar karo ham abhee aate hai "
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Karan ne bike ek taraf ko daudaa dee. Uskee team ke 3 member wahee khare hokar Karan ke lautne kaa intizaar karne lage.

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(Jaaree)


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Unknown Target...........masoom

«Reply #59 on: August 31, 2012, 02:46:48 PM »

Quote from: mkv on August 31, 2012, 09:17:01 AM

interesting

Thank you brother


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