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«Reply #60 on: August 31, 2012, 03:27:29 PM » |
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«Reply #61 on: August 31, 2012, 06:26:30 PM » |
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ye policewaale ki zindagi thriller hoti hai utni dukhi aur busy rehne waali bhi  ...abhi abhi karan khush huya tha fhir bichara serious ho gaya...kya zindagi hai ? anways story going really exciting Maine Karan ko hazar baar manaa kiyaa kee police kee nokree mat kar par maanaa hee nahee ab pareshaan ho rahaa hai... By the way thanks |
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«Reply #62 on: September 01, 2012, 04:12:41 PM » |
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Time dene kaa sukriyaa. Aage bhee good hee chalegee bas aap saath dete rahe |
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«Reply #63 on: September 02, 2012, 12:55:38 AM » |
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Karan chup-chaap bike chalaa rahaa thaa. Chiraag bhee Karan ke piche chup baithaa thaa. Karan ne apnee bike The Monish Park ke paas rookee. Park me jyaadaa bheed nahee thee. Bas kuch hee loog bench pe baithe baatoo me lage huye the. Karan ne chaaroo aour nazre dooraai gaas pe koi nahee baithaa thaa. Karan gaas pe hee baith gayaa jahaaN aas-paas koi nahee baithaa thaa. We sahee tarah se baith bhee nahee paaye the kee Karan kaa mobile vibrate hoone lagaa. Karan ne apnee jeb se mobile nikaalaa. Call Sikandar kee thee.
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" Hello "Karan ne kahaa.
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" Hello, sir " Udhar se Sikandar kee purjosh aawaaj aayee.
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" Kuch maloom huaa " Karan ne edhar-udhar kee baat me time jaayaa kiye binaa pochaa
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" sir, ye number Kamal kaa hai aour hairaanee kee baat ye hai kee Kamal wo hee shakhas hai jo subah hame khandhar me maraa huaa milaa thaa " Sikandar kee aawaaj fir aayee.
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" OH " Karan ke moonh se niklaa fir Karan boolaa..." Main aour chiraag The Monish Park me tumhaaraa intizaar kar rahe hai. Tum jaldee yahaaaN aao " Karan ne phone kaat diyaa aour mobile me time dekhaa 11:15PM ho rahe the. Karan ne mobile apnee jeb me rakhkhaa aour gahree sooch me doob gayaa. Chiraag uljhee-uljhee nigaahoo se Karan ko dekhe jaa rahaa thaa.
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«Reply #64 on: September 02, 2012, 01:00:24 AM » |
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«Reply #65 on: September 02, 2012, 01:26:40 AM » |
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Karan sooch rahaa thaa. ........."Kaun hai jo Kamal ke number se Call kar rahaa hai aour wo chaahtaa kyaa hai. Kyaa Kamal kaa hee koi saathee hai. Yaa fir kamal kaa koi dushman jisne Kamal ko maaraa ho aour wo Kamal ke gang ko tabaah karnaa chaahtaa hoo" Karan kee kuch samajh nahee aa rahaa thaa.. Wo har pahluN pe gaur karnaa chaahtaa thaa par jitnaa wo sooch rahaa thaa utnaa hee ulajhataa jaa rahaa thaa...."Agar Kamal ke kisee dushman ne use maraa thaa to fir Shaan ke kaproo pe wo khoon kiyooN lagaa thaa. Kyaa Shaan ne Kamal ko nahee maaraa hai. Agar nahee maaraa to uske kapro pe kiskaa khooon lagaa thaa. Ab es caal karne waale ko kahaaN se talaash karooN." karan ke dil me hazaar sawaal uth rahe the..."Kamal ke finger print Raaj bhaagwat kee party waalee jagah se paaye gaye hai. Eskaa matlab uskaa taalluk Raaj kesh se hai. Ho saktaa hai usne hee Shani ka murder kiyaa ho aour Shani kee ID se party attend kee ho. Par Shani ke murder waalee jagah se Shaan kaa Locket milnaa. Shaan kaa Locket wahaaN kis tarah pahoonchaa. Aour ek aour hairat me daal dene waalee baat Raaj party me shareek nahee ho paayaa fir uske finger print wahaaN se kiyooN mile. Jis waqat party start huyee thee wo to city hospital me thaa aour wahaaN hee dimaag kee nas fatne se uskee maut hoo gayee " Karan naa jaane kitnee der sooch me doobaa rahtaa kee use saamne se Sikandar aataa huaa dikhaai diyaa. Karan ne ek thandee sans lee. Sikandar unke kareeb aakr baith gayaa. Karan ne time dekhaa 11:26PM hoo rahe the unhe jo bhee karnaa thaa sirf 34 minute me karnaa thaa.
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«Reply #66 on: September 02, 2012, 01:52:13 AM » |
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Karan ne ek nazar Apne paas baithe Chiraag aour Sikandar pe daalee fir boolaa......"Ab se kuch der pahle 10:30PM pe kisee anjaan number se mujhe call aayee usne Safed Bonglow ka adress bataa kar kahaan kee aaj 12:00PM pe wahaaN Karan ke chaar(4) saathee jamaa ho rahe haiN.. Ham chaahe to unhe arrest kar sakte hai... Abhee kuch der pahle maloom huaa wo number Kamal kaa thaa.. Aour Kamal to shaayad kal raat hee es duniyaa se rukhsat ho chukaa hai fir mujhe call kisne kee " Karan uljhaa huaa thaa.
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"Sir jeetnee be-rahmee se Kamal ko maaraa gayaa hai. Wo jaroor bhoot ban chukaa hoogaa. Aour uskaa bhoot chahtaa hogaa kee use maarne waalo ko sajaa mile. Esliye wo hame call kar rahaa hoogaa" Chiraag shaahab ne apnee akal ke goode dooraaye.
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"Sir mujhe lagtaa hai.. Kamal kaa hee koi saathee hai jisne Kamal ko maraa hai. Ab es dar se kee uske saathee use nuksaan naa pahooNchaaye. Unhe arrest karwaanaa chaahtaa hai" Sikandar kee baat me waakaai dam thaa.
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"Wo kaun hai kaun nahee ... baad me soochege.. Sawaal ye he kee ab hame kyaa karnaa chaahiye" Karan ne apnaa sawaal unke saamne rakhaa. Chiraag yaa Sikandar kuch kah paate usse pahle hee Karan ke number pe kisee kee call aane lagee...
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«Reply #67 on: September 02, 2012, 02:36:56 AM » |
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Call Rajesh kee thee...
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"Sir abhee abhee black Scorpio lekar ek aadmee aayaa hai. Scorpio safed bonglow ke aage kharee hai. Wo aadmee bonglow ke andar gayaa hai" Rajesh kee aawaj aayeee
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"OK. Tum abhee hamare aane tak bonglow se door hee rahoo. Koi aour bonglow me aaye to mujhse contect karo" Karan ne etnaa kahkar phone kaat diyaa.
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"Haa btaaao ab ham kyaa kare" Karan ne fir waheeN sawaal Chiraag aour Sikandar ke saamne rakhkhaa
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"Sir agar we sachmooch Kamal ke saathee hai to unme se koi bhee bachkar nahee jaanaa chaahiye. Es kesh me we hamaare bahoot kaam aa sakte hai" Chiraag ne apnee raai saamne rakhkhee
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"Haa sir Chiraag sahee kah rahaa hai... Aour hame jald se jald safed bonglow pahonchnaa chaahiye" Sikandar ne kahaa
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Karan kuch boolnaa hee chaahtaa thaa kee Rajesh kee call ek baar aour aa gayee. Rajesh ne bataayaa kee ek aour aadmee safed bonglow me aa chukaa hai. Karan ne time dekhaa 11:38PM hoo chuke the.
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«Reply #68 on: September 02, 2012, 03:06:03 AM » |
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Kuch hee der baad Karan apnee team ke paas pahoonch gayaa. Usne dekhaa uske saathee jagah jagah chupe Safed Bonglow kee nigraanee kar rahe hai. Karan ne time dekhaa 11:57PM hoo rahe the tab hee ek red colour kee car safed bonglow ke paas aakr rukee jahaaN pahle se hee do cars kharee thee. Usme se do aadmee utarkar safed bonglow me chale gaye. Karan ne apne sabhee saathiyoo ko ishaare se apne paas bulaayaa.
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"Main safed bonglow me jaaongaa, mujhe cover karte huye Chirag mere piche aayegaa" aour apne 3 saathiyooN kee aour ishaaraa karte huye bolaa.. "Tum teeno ek doosre ko cover karte huye hamare piche aanaa " aour apne do saathiyooN kee aour ishaaraa karte huye boolaa.."Tum unkee gaadeeyooN ke paas cheepe rahnaa. Aour sikandar tum yahaaN cheep jaao. Aour Rajesh tum us taraf cheep jaao" Karan ne Sikandar ko bonglow ke es side aour Rajesh ko doosree side me chipne kaa order diyaa.
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"Ham par baahar se hamlaa ho saktaa hai. Agar aesaa huaa to unse sidhe bhirne kee bajaye.. Tum loogooN ko unhe bas ye dhayaan rakhnaa hai kee koi bhee bonglow me daakhil naa ho paaye.. Andar maiN sab samhaal loongaa" Karan sans lene ke liye rukaa fir bolaa..."chalo sab jaldee jaldee apnee position le lo" Karan ke kahne kee der thee sab harkat me aa gaye..
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«Reply #69 on: September 02, 2012, 03:28:26 AM » |
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Karan ne apnee rivolver nikaal ke apne haath me le lee. Uske sab saathee thooree der pahle hee ye kaam kar chuke the.. Karan ne apne kadam safed bonglow kee aour baraa diye uske piche-piche uske saathee ak doosre ko cover karte huye chal rahe the. Ab we sab bonglow ke gate ke saamne pahoonch chuke the. Karan ne dekhaa bonglow kaa darwaajaa ander se lock nahee thaa. Karan ne darvaajaa khoolaa.. Bonglow ke dring-room se aawaaje aa rahee thee. Karan ne apne ek saathee ko gate ke paas hee rukne kaa ishaaraa kiyaa. Aour chaaroo aage bade. Dring room kaa darwaajaa andar se lock nahee thaa Karan ne ek jordaar laat maaree aour sab room me daakhil ho gaye... Dring-room me chaar loog sofe pe baithe huye batte kar rahe the.. Unke dekhkar hadbadaakar khare hoo gaye. Aour unme se ek boolaa ...
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"Abhee maloom ho jayegaa .. Pahle apne baare me to kuch btaao" Karan ne kahaa... Tab hee Chiraag kee rivolver se ek goolee niklee jo ek sakhas ke hath me lagee jo rivolver haath me liye huye thaa. Rivolver uske haath se chootke door jaa giree aour wo apnaa haath pakad ke chillaane lagaa..
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«Reply #70 on: September 02, 2012, 05:39:37 PM » |
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«Reply #71 on: September 04, 2012, 07:47:45 AM » |
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thrilling story
Besak trilling story hai. Bus thora sa love hai thoree mystry. |
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«Reply #72 on: September 04, 2012, 03:30:48 PM » |
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:claps: zabardast story hai
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«Reply #73 on: September 05, 2012, 04:49:54 AM » |
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:claps: zabardast story hai
Really jabardast hai yaa aeweiye kah rahe hoo. By the way thanks for reading and comment. |
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«Reply #74 on: September 05, 2012, 05:04:09 AM » |
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jabardast..sach me
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on eTI community..
