Why did leaf depart?? -Panna 2:General Stories

pyarikudi1983

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«Reply #15 on: July 02, 2005, 11:09:03 AM »

Quote from: "natural"

Thanks Rishi........ For understanding my feelings abt ur story. I will be eagerly waiting for ur new stories..

Dard kuch ghatataa nahin hai , kya karain,
Dil kahin lagtaa nahin hai , kya karain .

Raat kaalee syaah itnee der thee,
Din main kuchh dikhta nahi hai kyaa karain.

Baandh tha jo sabr ka barson talak,
baarh aa kar dha gayi hai kya karain.

Khwab - khali the , bahut khaamosh the,
Koi chham se aa gayi hain kya karain.

Dekh kar ek baar unko roo ba roo,
Khat se jee bharata nahin hai kya karain.

hey naturals Puzzled !

....cant ya plz write sum short shayeries.........coz i dnt hav da patience ta read such a long 1.......write sum short 1s 4 ppl like me na yaarrrrrrrrrrr plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :wink: :wink: :wink:

lolzzzzzzz kiddin yaar....da shayeri was kwel :wink: sumtimes due ta lack of patience u miss da most beautiful writings of ppl.......... :wink:


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Rishi Soumya

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Why did leaf depart??

«Reply #16 on: July 03, 2005, 12:59:01 PM »

.....Nice thought Pyari....Very nice thought...This really reflects the reality of life.............


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pyarikudi1983

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«Reply #17 on: July 03, 2005, 01:07:24 PM »

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.....Nice thought Pyari....Very nice thought...This really reflects the reality of life.............

Aap jese doston se sikha hai zindagi haas ke jeena
Aap jese doston se sikha hai ye zindagi-a-dosti nibhana
ab aap kya tarif karte ho hum nacheez ki.............
ye likhayi tho hai dil mein base dosti ka pyaar bhaara fasana :lol: :lol: {yepeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee mein tho shayar ban gayi.. :oops: }


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Rishi Soumya

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«Reply #18 on: July 03, 2005, 01:42:44 PM »

Congrats Pyari.....Aap to ek bahut ache shayar ban gayi....Send in your creations


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natural

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«Reply #19 on: July 04, 2005, 08:29:10 AM »

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Rishi Soumya

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«Reply #23 on: July 05, 2005, 04:24:30 AM »

Are aisi koi baat nahi hai. Agar tum mere feelings hurt karte to mein tumse keh deti. Actually I ahve not got any nice stories so I cant post any story. I hope U wont mind waiting,,,,,please. And U please continue to post your short but sweet poems. Stop crying.


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«Reply #24 on: July 05, 2005, 05:12:17 AM »

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Rishi Soumya

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«Reply #25 on: July 06, 2005, 12:58:51 AM »

Main Hoo Na ka bhooth abhi bhi chada hai? Huh?

??But Thank God u r your nornal . But I wish I was your tear.......Born in your eyes.....live on your cheek and die on your lips......... :cry:


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«Reply #26 on: July 26, 2005, 12:47:22 PM »

If you were my tear I would never weep coz I can'nt loose you,
After all it has taken me years in order to choose you.............

Hum shayer to nahi hai per dil ki baatein kehna jaantey hai.............
Doston ki kami iss dil mein itni hai ki dost ko hi rab maantey hain............
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Rishi Soumya

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«Reply #27 on: July 27, 2005, 10:01:00 AM »

Wow!!!!!So nice. U have really a lovely way to express your views.... Tussi bad great ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :oops:


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natural

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«Reply #28 on: July 27, 2005, 10:52:52 AM »

Rishi kuchh clear nahi hua.........................

Assi BAD han ke GREAT........................ Huh?

? :? :?

Waisey tussi bare great ho...........Your posts with important lessons in them are really so cute that I can't describe.............

Tussi Likhdey Thora hon per Likhdey Changa hon.................

Me eagerly waiting for your new posts......................


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Rishi Soumya

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«Reply #29 on: July 28, 2005, 01:57:03 PM »

I meant to say.........Tussi Bade great ho!!!!! Thanx Natu ji.....for appreciating me so much. I will surely send in some nice posts...I am so happy :cry: (Ye ansu khushi ke hai)


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