राख़ से लिपटी हुई, सर्द सी आहें

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राख़ से लिपटी हुई, सर्द सी आहें
जाने कौन से अरमान, सेकना चाहें

खामोशीयों से ऐसी आवाजें उठ रही है
जैसे की हसतें हसतें कोई ले रहा कराहें

बरसों से ताकती है एक राह कोठरी से
चौखट बनी हुई है तरसी हुई निगाहें

अब के बरस न आया, उम्मीद छोड़ देंगे
ग़म लगा के सीने, भर लेंगे हम ये बाहें

किस्मत की बेवफाई रुकी नहीं कहीं भी
भटके हुए मुसाफिर को मिलतें रहे चौराहें

उसके ही हौसलों में कमजोरी थी जो भटका
मंज़िल तलक तो वरना पहुंचा ही देती राहें
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2013, 07:58:33 PM »
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bahut badiya hain sir jee


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Quote from: livingbytheday on April 10, 2013, 07:42:35 PM
राख़ से लिपटी हुई, सर्द सी आहें
जाने कौन से अरमान, सेकना चाहें

खामोशीयों से ऐसी आवाजें उठ रही है
जैसे की हसतें हसतें कोई ले रहा कराहें

बरसों से ताकती है एक राह कोठरी से
चौखट बनी हुई है तरसी हुई निगाहें

अब के बरस न आया, उम्मीद छोड़ देंगे
ग़म लगा के सीने, भर लेंगे हम ये बाहें

किस्मत की बेवफाई रुकी नहीं कहीं भी
भटके हुए मुसाफिर को मिलतें रहे चौराहें

उसके ही हौसलों में कमजोरी थी जो भटका
मंज़िल तलक तो वरना पहुंचा ही देती राहें


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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2013, 08:08:13 PM »
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Very good.
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2013, 08:13:27 PM »
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bahut khoob...waah waah waah..dheron daad...
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Bahut badhiya deepak jee.
Applause Applause
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Bahut hi khoob Deepak jee, aakhiri she'r khususann bahut pasand aaya.
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2013, 02:32:32 AM »
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So Nice.
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ahchi kosish hai saaheb, yuNhi kosish karte raheN...
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Quote from: varun girdhar on April 10, 2013, 07:58:33 PM
bahut badiya hain sir jee


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shukriyaa varun ji
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 10, 2013, 08:03:53 PM
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on April 10, 2013, 08:08:13 PM
Very good.

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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on April 10, 2013, 08:13:27 PM
bahut khoob...waah waah waah..dheron daad...

shukriyaa
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Quote from: mkv on April 10, 2013, 08:31:07 PM
Bahut badhiya deepak jee.
Applause Applause

thank you sir
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 11, 2013, 01:47:42 AM
Bahut hi khoob Deepak jee, aakhiri she'r khususann bahut pasand aaya.

thank you sir
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