तिरंगा उन्हीं की सुनाता कहानी***सतीश शुक्ला '

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शहीदे वतन का नहीं कोई सानी
वतन वालों पर उनकी है मेहरबानी

वतन पर निछावर किया अपना सब कुछ
लड़कपन का आलम, बुढ़ापा, जवानी

किया दिल से हर फ़ैसला ज़िंदगी का
कोई बात समझी, न बूझी, न जानी

लड़े खून की आख़िरी बूँद तक वो
लहू की नदी भी पड़ी है बहानी

कफ़न की कसम, “हो हिफाज़त वतन की”
वसीयत शहीदों की है मुँहज़बानी

वतन के लिए जो फ़ना हो गए हैं
तिरंगा उन्हीं की सुनाता कहानी

'रक़ीब' उनका क्यों ज़िक्र दो दिन बरस में
वो हैं जाविदाँ ज़िक्र भी जाविदानी
 
         --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2011, 09:17:42 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2011, 09:19:38 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2011, 09:31:55 AM »
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Satish saheb,Shaheedaan-e-watan ko kya khoobsurat khiraj-e-aqeedat pesh ki hai.Khaas taur se 3rd she'r aur maqte mein to kamaal ki baat kah dee.Hum sabhi Hindustaani inn shaheedon ke qarzdaarhain.Peshkash ke liye dil se mubarakbaad.Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: August 14, 2011, 11:01:30 AM »
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aadab ,,

adab ka jama utar ke kahon to pataka hai pataka apka tarana ,,,aabdaar bhi hai taabdaar bhi hai ,,kaatdhaar hai to dhaardaar bhi hai ,,pur lutf hai to purmaghaz bhi hai ,,,pur acar hai to por sooz bhi hai ,,,,filhal mai alfazon se khaasir hon ,,,dil ki tamamtar gaheraiyun se dad khubool kare.N ,,Allah apko khush rakhe ,,Apko shahinshah-e-jazbat kahon to baat galat nahi hogi ,,,apki maujodgi yaqeenan bazm ki khushnaseebi hai ,,,


Dua go

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«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2011, 11:59:16 AM »
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शहीदे वतन का नहीं कोई सानी
वतन वालों पर उनकी है मेहरबानी

वतन पर निछावर किया अपना सब कुछ
लड़कपन का आलम, बुढ़ापा, जवानी

किया दिल से हर फ़ैसला ज़िंदगी का
कोई बात समझी, न बूझी, न जानी

लड़े खून की आख़िरी बूँद तक वो
लहू की नदी भी पड़ी है बहानी

कफ़न की कसम, “हो हिफाज़त वतन की”
वसीयत शहीदों की है मुँहज़बानी

वतन के लिए जो फ़ना हो गए हैं
तिरंगा उन्हीं की सुनाता कहानी

'रक़ीब' उनका क्यों ज़िक्र दो दिन बरस में
वो हैं जाविदाँ ज़िक्र भी जाविदानी
 
         --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'




Waah Waah waah!!!!

Satish Ji,kya kehne Aapke..Sach Mein Lajawaab!!!!!

aapka Likha Har Ek A'shaar Dil par Asar karta Hua mehsoos Hua..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Kalaam!!!!

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«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2011, 01:56:53 PM »
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Satish bhai kash mein hindi padh sakta
tau aap ki poetry padhta.Asghar
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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2011, 08:28:27 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!

Badi khoob kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne bazm ko..
Jash e aazaadi ke is mahoul meiN behad khoob
khayaal kahe hai aapne.. " Haan hume un shahidoN
ko hargiz nahi bhulnaa chahiye " Usual Smile
Jinhone apne khoon se is zameen ko siNcha hai Usual Smile

Is khub khayaal aur purasar kalaam par dil ki
gehrai se daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

         




शहीदे वतन का नहीं कोई सानी
वतन वालों पर उनकी है मेहरबानी

Behad Umdaa Matlaa kaha hai daad Usual Smile         

वतन पर निछावर किया अपना सब कुछ
लड़कपन का आलम, बुढ़ापा, जवानी

किया दिल से हर फ़ैसला ज़िंदगी का
कोई बात समझी, न बूझी, न जानी

YeH sher bhi bada pyaara kaha hai daad Usual Smile         

लड़े खून की आख़िरी बूँद तक वो
लहू की नदी भी पड़ी है बहानी

कफ़न की कसम, “हो हिफाज़त वतन की”
वसीयत शहीदों की है मुँहज़बानी

bahut khoob janab behad umdaa sher hai daad
daad daad Usual Smile badi gehri baat hai ... Usual Smile         


वतन के लिए जो फ़ना हो गए हैं
तिरंगा उन्हीं की सुनाता कहानी

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob behad umdaad Usual Smile         

'रक़ीब' उनका क्यों ज़िक्र दो दिन बरस में
वो हैं जाविदाँ ज़िक्र भी जाविदानी
 
Masha Allah janab ... Kia sahiN baat kahi hai..
bahut khoob bahut umdaa daad daad daad Usual Smile         


         --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'


Raqeeb Sahaab aik baar phir se is
umdaa kalaam par dili daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Aate rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2011, 11:36:00 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Nazm padhne aur pasand karne ka
bahut bahut shukriya.

Raqeeb
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2011, 11:41:19 AM »
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Janab Abdul Qadeer Sahab,

Aazaadee ke din pooree aazaadee! bas
tarannum barqraar rakhne ki koshish
ki hai.

Nazm padhne aur jawab dene ka bahut bahut
shukriya..

Raqeeb
 
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2011, 11:43:56 AM »
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khwaish ji,

Aapka jawab aur pratikriyaayen
bahut achchhee lagti hain..

Shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2011, 11:46:39 AM »
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ASGHAR SAHAB,

AAPKEE KHWAISH POORI HO GAYEE
HAI AB YAH POST ROMAN MEIN POST
KAR DEE HAI.

RAQEEB LUCKNOWI
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2011, 11:50:40 AM »
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ParwaaZ Ji,

Nazm se jiyada khoobsoorat aapke comments
hain..bahut bahut shukriya..jawab dene ke
liye.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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bahut umda likha hai aap ne satish ji...
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waah waah
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