Aa gaye hain sanam: dard key din gaye!

by abdbundeli on May 13, 2009, 07:08:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 13, 2009, 01:33:36 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 13, 2009, 12:32:31 PM
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Bohat khoob Adb ji

Bohat khoob Sajid ji ,,Celmira sis..
Thanks honeyrose! Thanks a lot!
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«Reply #16 on: May 13, 2009, 01:36:37 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 13, 2009, 12:51:45 PM
Uncle ji yeh gazal kuch alag se hai magar behtarin hai..Padkar bahut accha laga ji Thumbs UP..
Shukriyah Roja! Lot many thanks!
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«Reply #17 on: May 13, 2009, 07:03:50 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 13, 2009, 11:08:41 AM

Talat bitia!

Tasawwuraat key saayon mein roz jeetey hain!
Tamaam lamhey saath, yuun hi naheen beetey hain?
Aab-e-kousar ki jagah, zahr ataa hotaa hai:
Ham kabhi zeest mein aab-e-wafaat peetey hain!!

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Kuch Baatain Puraani Manzar Pe Aa Gayin,
Yaad Aa Gayin Aa Ke, Aankhain Chalka Gayin,

Har Lamha Har Pal Kho Jaata Hai Is Tarah
Ban Jaata Hai Phir Yoon Yaadon Ka Silsila
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«Reply #18 on: May 14, 2009, 04:17:16 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 13, 2009, 07:03:50 PM

Kuch Baatain Puraani Manzar Pe Aa Gayin,
Yaad Aa Gayin Aa Ke, Aankhain Chalka Gayin,

Har Lamha Har Pal Kho Jaata Hai Is Tarah
Ban Jaata Hai Phir Yoon Yaadon Ka Silsila

Talat bitia!

Jagat ki milansaar jeewan-dagar par,
Mileyngey hazaaroun; abhi kyaa huaa hai!
Satat urwaraa bhoomi par pushhp mukulit,
Khileyngey hazaaroun; abhi kyaa huaa hai!

Abhi sey na socho: "Kisey yaad kar leyn!"
Abhi sey na socho: "Kisey bhool jaayen!!"
Yahee hai hrudaya ki aboojhee paheylee:
"Kisey yaad kar leyn! Kisey bhool jaayen!!"

                         - Ramwatiya
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«Reply #19 on: May 14, 2009, 03:36:18 PM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Babu Ji...behad achcha hai Applause Applause Applause


Abhi kya hua hai, ye jivan hai baaqi,
Kai subah aayengi, shaamain hain baaqi,
Badhte rahe iss dagar par abhi hum,
Kai lamhe judne yaadon main, baaqi
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«Reply #20 on: May 14, 2009, 03:43:00 PM »
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Wah wah.. bahut khoob dear Talat and uncle ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #21 on: May 14, 2009, 03:47:18 PM »
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Thanks Roja Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: May 15, 2009, 10:46:57 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 14, 2009, 03:36:18 PM
Bohot bohot khoob Babu Ji...behad achcha hai Applause Applause Applause


Abhi kya hua hai, ye jivan hai baaqi,
Kai subah aayengi, shaamain hain baaqi,
Badhte rahe iss dagar par abhi hum,
Kai lamhe judne yaadon main, baaqi
Talat bitia! Thanks!

Yah sab us key kheyl hain;
Ham hain maatra nimitta!
Uttam ho yadi isee mein,
Wicharey apnaa chitta!!

          - Ramwatiya
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«Reply #23 on: May 15, 2009, 10:49:43 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 14, 2009, 03:43:00 PM
Wah wah.. bahut khoob dear Talat and uncle ji  Thumbs UP

Shukriyah Roja: 'The Poetess'!
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«Reply #24 on: December 21, 2010, 10:25:10 AM »
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very nice creation ......abd ji
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«Reply #25 on: December 22, 2010, 10:21:37 AM »
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Quote from: ek_tamanna on December 21, 2010, 10:25:10 AM
very nice creation ......abd ji

Thanks, 'ek_tamanna' ji!

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«Reply #26 on: April 02, 2013, 02:40:31 AM »
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V.Nice.
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«Reply #27 on: April 02, 2013, 01:44:19 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 02, 2013, 02:40:31 AM
V.Nice.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah! Mujhey khushee hai, ki, aap meyrey kalaam mein itnee 'ruchi' ley rahey hain! Punah dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #28 on: April 23, 2013, 03:21:30 AM »
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ur welcome.
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«Reply #29 on: April 23, 2013, 03:02:01 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 23, 2013, 03:21:30 AM
ur welcome.

Thanks!
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