Aa gaye ho, to, baahuoun ko khush karo fir se!

by abdbundeli on August 10, 2016, 05:24:02 AM
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Aa gaye ho, to, baahuoun ko khush karo fir se!
Aik aagaaz zindagi ka ho nayaa fir se!

Yuun to lamhon ko ji rahe hain, abhi zindah hain;
Wasl ke lamhe hon mushtaaq surkhroo fir se!!

Na main ehsaan-faraamosh hun, na tum aise;
Ta’aanukon mein, kyon na, rang-e-nou bharen fir se!

Dagmagaate hain qadam, sach hai, par kahaan pee hai?
Do sahaaraa, ki, usee raah par chaluun fir se!

Hazaar baar giraa hun, magar, uthaa bhi hun:
Mujhe yaqeen hai, ‘abd’, ki, uthuungaa fir se!
- abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2016, 05:42:20 AM »
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BOHUT KHUB LIKHA HAI AAPNE WAAH
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BOHUT KHUB LIKHA HAI AAPNE WAAH

Shukriyah, Saahil ji!
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Thanks,Sps!
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bahut bahut khoob waah waah waaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2016, 10:44:35 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2016, 09:19:49 AM »
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Aa gaye ho, to, baahuoun ko khush karo fir se!
Aik aagaaz zindagi ka ho nayaa fir se!

Yuun to lamhon ko ji rahe hain, abhi zindah hain;
Wasl ke lamhe hon mushtaaq surkhroo fir se!!

Na main ehsaan-faraamosh hun, na tum aise;
Ta’aanukon mein, kyon na, rang-e-nou bharen fir se!

Dagmagaate hain qadam, sach hai, par kahaan pee hai?
Do sahaaraa, ki, usee raah par chaluun fir se!

Hazaar baar giraa hun, magar, uthaa bhi hun:
Mujhe yaqeen hai, ‘abd’, ki, uthuungaa fir se!
- abd bundeli


bahut khoob... very nice ghazal.. daad abd sir ji

kafi dino k baad aapki yeh ghazal kahi likha hua sher yaad aa gaya..

Ek waqt tha jab baatein khatam nahi hua karti thi..

Aaj sab khtam ho gaya perr baat nahi hoti..

Missed your shayaries sir
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bahut bahut khoob waah waah waaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriyah, Surindarn ji!
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«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2016, 03:47:54 AM »
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bahut khoob

SHUKRIYAH!
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2016, 03:53:27 AM »
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bahut khoob... very nice ghazal.. daad abd sir ji

kafi dino k baad aapki yeh ghazal kahi likha hua sher yaad aa gaya..

Ek waqt tha jab baatein khatam nahi hua karti thi..

Aaj sab khtam ho gaya perr baat nahi hoti..

Missed your shayaries sir


Suman ji, namaskaar! Aaj kal kam hi gazlen likh paa rahaa hun! Futkar asha'ar bagairah hi jiyaadah likh rahaa hun! FB par milenge! Garg Ram Prakash ke naam se!
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