Aa giya hon mai Laqt-e-Jigar choor ke ( Qadeertoopchi )

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Yaara ne bazm Salam ,, Khuch misre zahn me tarteeb paaye to suncha apke huzoor rakh don ...Umid hai Apni ara se nawazenge ...



Apni basti aur apna ye ghar choor ke
Jaa rahe hain parinde shajar choor ke

unse pucho watan ki judai ka gham
muflisi me chale hain jo ghar choor ke

har bala se khuda usko mahefoz rakh
aa giya hun mai laqt-e-jigar choor ke

haar jayengi usse sabhi taqaten
tham lega qalam jo tabar choor ke

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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2012, 02:58:29 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya kehne Qadeer Bhai...Har Ek A'shaar laajwaab!!!

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob!!!!!

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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2012, 03:07:44 PM »
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diwaana hoon aapki Ghazalon ka Qadir sahab

behtareen ghazal

thnx for dis
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2012, 04:08:59 PM »
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Qadeer saheb, AOA. Bahut khushi ho rahi hai
eik arse baad aap ka kalaam padh kar.Bahut
mubarak ho.Zara matlay per nazar e saani kar
ijiye.Mujhe kuch shak ho raha hai.Duago,Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2012, 04:31:23 PM »
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Bhai Hasan Sahib Salam Masnoon ,,

Bhai is per abhi kaam karna hai ,,,Misra Zubaan se rawan ho gaye to suncha yahan laga don ....Waise Matle me Kahan shak hai apko ...Lafz Aur ? Apko Sher pasand aaye shukriya ..

Bara-e-maherbaani Bataye.N ,,

Allah Apko khush rakhe ..

Dua go

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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2012, 05:38:21 PM »
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Qadeer saheb, Jeehaan lafz 'aur' per hi shak hai.
Agar sahi hai to meri rahnumai karein ,mashkoor hoonga.Hasan
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2012, 07:18:57 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 17, 2012, 05:38:21 PM
Qadeer saheb, Jeehaan lafz 'aur' per hi shak hai.
Agar sahi hai to meri rahnumai karein ,mashkoor hoonga.Hasan

Azeezam Hasan Sahab ...Apka khat Massarat Ka baaic Bana ....Bhai Mai apki rahenumai kyun kar karne laga ....Bus Apne pucha hai to mai taqti kiye deta hun Apka mutafiq hona koi zarori nahi kyun ke mai galat bhi ho sakta hun ....

Faaelun Faaelun Faaelun Faaelun

Apni Bas Faaelun ...ti au rap Faaelun ..na ye ghar Faaelun,,Chor ke Faaelun ..

Jahan tak maine parha hai ..Lafz Apna ka wazn felun hi hai jo ke 4 harfi hai ...Ab Apko kahin aitraz ho to bara-e-maherbani Inkesaari se kaan na len..Meri rahenumai farmaye.N ,,Allah apko khush rakhe ...eak baar phir apke huzoor sarapa sipaas hun ..

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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2012, 07:35:26 PM »
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Qadeer saheb .bahut shukriya.'na YE ghar' kar ke aapne tasheeh kar li hai lekin matle mein  YE lafz barha bhi dijiye warna ghalti badastuur qaaim rahegi kyuunki aapka misra abhi bhi istarah hai :


Apni basti aur apna ghar choor ke


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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2012, 07:43:36 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 17, 2012, 07:35:26 PM
Qadeer saheb .bahut shukriya.'na YE ghar' kar ke aapne tasheeh kar li hai lekin matle mein  YE lafz barha bhi dijiye warna ghalti badastuur qaaim rahegi kyuunki aapka misra abhi bhi istarah hai :


Apni basti aur apna ghar choor ke




Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha Bhai badi nawazish .......Ha ha ha ha ha.....Has has ke pet me ball parh gaai hai ....Log sahi kahete hain shair aur pagal me koi farq nahi ....Dekho meri akhl taherir hi be bhr ... ...ha ha ha ha ha ha ..bhai nawazish ...Mai tashakkur ke liye alfazon se qaasir hon ,,,,Bhai Wahan dimaq is liye bhi nahi daura ke Apne kaha lafz aur pe apko shak hai ..badi nawazish apki ...SHukriyah ..

Dua go

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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2012, 08:01:09 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on January 17, 2012, 02:52:22 PM
Yaara ne bazm Salam ,, Khuch misre zahn me tarteeb paaye to suncha apke huzoor rakh don ...Umid hai Apni ara se nawazenge ...



Apni basti aur apna ye ghar choor ke
Jaa rahe hain parinde shajar choor ke

unse pucho watan ki judai ka gham
muflisi me chale hain jo ghar choor ke

har bala se khuda usko mahefoz rakh
aa giya hun mai laqt-e-jigar choor ke

haar jayengi usse sabhi taqaten
tham lega qalam jo tabar choor ke

Qadeertoopchi


bahoot Bahoot Umda Likha hai Aapne Qadeer Ji.. bahoot lajawaab.Har sher bahoot Umda hai !!



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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2012, 04:49:44 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2012, 07:59:57 AM »
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Bahut khoob Junaid ji
khoob seekhne ko mila hame..
Applause Applause Applause
Hasan sahab apka bhi shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2012, 09:34:50 AM »
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Qadeer Bhaijaan As salaam walekum!


Badi masarrat huyi BHaijaan ke aapne is bazm ko apni kalaam
se nawaaza ... Usual Smile

Kafi umdaa aur gazab ki gehrai liye hai aapki yeH gazal.. iske
pase manzar tak pahuNch paayeN itni to salaahiyat shayad hum meiN
nahi par jahaaN tak pahuNche hai waqai dil se jism tak ke roNgte
khade ho gaye.. ..

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob aur umdaa rahe Bhaijaan.. Usual Smile
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye.. khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Quote from: qadeer_junaid on January 17, 2012, 02:52:22 PM
Yaara ne bazm Salam ,, Khuch misre zahn me tarteeb paaye to suncha apke huzoor rakh don ...Umid hai Apni ara se nawazenge ...



Apni basti aur apna ye ghar choor ke
Jaa rahe hain parinde shajar choor ke

Waah waah Bhaijaan Gazab ka Matlaa kaha hai.. behad
khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile

unse pucho watan ki judai ka gham
muflisi me chale hain jo ghar choor ke

Kia baat hai aapse hi puch lete haiN aur jawaabaN aapke
tasuraat se bhi waqif haiN Usual Smile achche jazbaat ko bayaaN kiya hai daad Usual Smile

har bala se khuda usko mahefoz rakh
aa giya hun mai laqt-e-jigar choor ke


Waah waah waah Masha Allaah kia kahne BHaijaan bahut umdaa
behad pyaara aur dilkash sher kaha hai hazaaroN daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye
is umdaa ashaar par ..  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

haar jayengi usse sabhi taqaten
tham lega qalam jo tabar choor ke


Waah kia kahne bahut khoob achcha khayaal aur umdaa
gehraai hai daad Usual Smile


Qadeertoopchi


Bhaijaan Yeh kia adhuri si kalaam pesh ki aapne..
Maqtaa kahaaN gaya gazal kaa ..  Is it SO! jaldi se kalaam ko mukammal karke
post kar dijiye... aur bhi apni khub aur umdaa kalaamoN se bazam ko
roshan karte rahiye..

Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2012, 10:52:34 AM »
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Qadeer miyan salamat raho

Fikr Mashaallah achchi hai lekin Matla agar main sochta to (aap se maazrat ke saath) kuch aise...

Uth gaya dana-pani to ghar chod ke
Uood gaye sab parinde shajar chod ke

Muafi ka khwahastgaar

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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2012, 11:05:34 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on January 17, 2012, 02:52:22 PM
Yaara ne bazm Salam ,, Khuch misre zahn me tarteeb paaye to suncha apke huzoor rakh don ...Umid hai Apni ara se nawazenge ...



Apni basti aur apna ye ghar choor ke
Jaa rahe hain parinde shajar choor ke

unse pucho watan ki judai ka gham
muflisi me chale hain jo ghar choor ke

har bala se khuda usko mahefoz rakh
aa giya hun mai laqt-e-jigar choor ke

haar jayengi usse sabhi taqaten
tham lega qalam jo tabar choor ke

Qadeertoopchi

bahut khoob...........!
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