A'adatan ham ney sanwaaraa hai unhain!

by abdbundeli on September 12, 2009, 06:46:24 AM
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Roja_malar
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«Reply #45 on: January 14, 2010, 11:58:11 AM »
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Waah!

Tinkaa-tinkaa jorh kar,
Bantey aganit neerh!
Eik-eik kar key sabhee,
Ban jaatey hain bheerh!!

          - 'Ramwatiya'

Babulon-si yahan amrayiyan hai
Lapat ke dastaqat purvayiyan hai

Yahan se hai shuru seema shehar ki
Yahan se humsafar tanhayiyan hai

Dakhi hai jo madhur sambodanon se
Hamare beech mein vo khayiyan hai

Huyi kilkariyan jab se sayani
Bahut sehmi huyi angnayiyan hai

Kisse jakar naman de mandiron mein
Hamari hi wahan perchayiyan hai

Vinayipatri hamari her bhivaayi
Badan ki juriyan choupayiyan hai...


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abdbundeli
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«Reply #46 on: January 14, 2010, 12:58:16 PM »
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Babulon-sin yahan amrayiyan hain
Lapat ke dastakhat purvayiyan hain

Yahan se hai shuru seema shehar ki
Yahan se hamsafar tanhayiyan hain


Dhakin hain jo madhur sambodhanon se
Hamare beech mein vo khayiyan hain

Huyin kilkariyan jab se sayani
Bahut sehmi huyin angnayiyan hain

Kise jakar naman dein mandiron mein
Hamari hi wahan perchhayiyan hain


Vinayipatri hamari her bhivaayi
Badan ki jhuriyan - choupayiyan hain...


Bhai waah Roja_malar ji! Bahut khoob!!

Are you some other Roja or the same with whom I've been interacting a few months before? This poem appears to be a reflection of former Roja's style!
Any way, you're welcome! Why not you're joining 'yoindia'?


Parchhayeen ho puraatan
Kisee sneyh kee supt!
Kab tak ghoonghat mein dhhakey
Usey rakhogee gupt?

         - abd bundeli

  
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Roja_malar
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«Reply #47 on: January 15, 2010, 04:37:41 AM »
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Bhai waah Roja_malar ji! Bahut khoob!!

Are you some other Roja or the same with whom I've been interacting a few months before? This poem appears to be a reflection of former Roja's style!
Any way, you're welcome! Why not you're joining 'yoindia'?


Dear Uncle, I am the same old Roja with whome you are interacting thru these shayaries Usual Smile Regaring Joining Yoindia..... It is the curtosy of our dear Admin, that I appearing before you as guest... Giggle

It is only because of your sweet shayaries, i feel like replying to your creations. Nothing more dear. Take care Keep replying to my replies in your ghazal. Pray and Bless me always uncle. Love...... Roja  Usual Smile
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Roja_malar
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«Reply #48 on: January 15, 2010, 04:59:15 AM »
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Parchhayeen ho puraatan
Kisee sneyh kee supt!
Kab tak ghoonghat mein dhhakey
Usey rakhogee gupt?
         - abd bundeli

Mai, mitti, sangeet, hawa ya ek chehra
Raat gaye tak, diwaron per kaun raha

Maine un sab chidiyon ke per kaat diye
Jinko apne andar udte dekha tha

Muhar lagi hai meri band kitabon per
Lafzon ke bahar hai gehra sannata

Chalte-chalte din aur raat kahan khoye
Waqt ko kiske haaton ne takseem kiya

Ghar se bahar, ghar ke andhar ek hi rang
Ek hi khwayish, ek safar aur ek sada

Neend se bhojal aankhein hai, per neend hai dhur
Socho mai hai din ki aamad(aagman) ka khadshaa(aashanka)

Is basti ki god mein koyi phool nahi
In shehron mein koyi nahi hai us jaisa

Kiske des ki dhuri naap rahi hu mai?
Ulaj raha hai aankhon mein khud shehar mera

Ek lamhe ke itne dukh, itne ehsaas
Meri is choti-si umr ka sermaya.....

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«Reply #49 on: January 15, 2010, 07:15:35 AM »
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Dear Uncle, I am the same old Roja with whome you are interacting thru these shayaries Usual Smile Regaring Joining Yoindia..... It is the curtosy of our dear Admin, that I appearing before you as guest... Giggle

It is only because of your sweet shayaries, i feel like replying to your creations. Nothing more dear. Take care Keep replying to my replies in your ghazal. Pray and Bless me always uncle. Love...... Roja  Usual Smile

Mai, mitti, sangeet, hawa ya ek chehra
Raat gaye tak, diwaron per kaun raha

Maine un sab chidiyon ke per kaat diye
Jinko apne andar udte dekha tha

Muhar lagi hai meri band kitabon per
Lafzon ke bahar hai gehra sannata

Chalte-chalte din aur raat kahan khoye
Waqt ko kiske haaton ne takseem kiya

Ghar se bahar, ghar ke andhar ek hi rang
Ek hi khwayish, ek safar aur ek sada

Neend se bhojal aankhein hai, per neend hai dhur
Socho mai hai din ki aamad(aagman) ka khadshaa(aashanka)

Is basti ki god mein koyi phool nahi
In shehron mein koyi nahi hai us jaisa

Kiske des ki dhuri naap rahi hu mai?
Ulaj raha hai aankhon mein khud shehar mera

Ek lamhe ke itne dukh, itne ehsaas
Meri is choti-si umr ka sermaya.....



Roja!
I know not what went wrong in between you and the 'yoindia' Administration! Any way, I'm happy you are continuing on this 'site' as a guest!

Naatey-rishtey sab yaheen
Rah jaatey hain chhoot!
Rooheyn adab-o-ishq keen,
Paateen magar na toot!!

       - abd bundeli



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«Reply #50 on: January 28, 2010, 05:31:56 PM »
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Naatey-rishtey sab yaheen
Rah jaatey hain chhoot!
Rooheyn adab-o-ishq keen,
Paateen magar na toot!!

       - abd bundeli


Peche-peche hasraton ka kafila,
Aage-aage hai pareshani meri..!!

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«Reply #51 on: January 29, 2010, 10:44:26 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Abd ji,Shally ji ,Cara ji,very touching n mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot, Madhu!

           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #52 on: January 29, 2010, 10:56:18 AM »
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Peechhe-peechhe hasraton ka kafila,
Aage-aage hai pareshani meri..!!



Koun naheen hai pareyshaan,
Is duniyaa mein gair?
Pahiley walaa pyaar bhee,
Aagey lagtaa bair!!

    - abd bundeli
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