AAJ BHAR AAYEE AANKHEN.............MKV

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Aaj bhar aai  aaNkhe tujhe yaad kar, jaane kyoN tum gaye ho ye dil todkar
Ajnabee ban gayaa teri najroN meN maiN, ab udaasi ki chaadar rahuN odhkar

Chot mujhko lagee yaad aayee  teree, ab dawaa bhi naheeN kaam kartee koee
Haath hi tera kaafi thaa rakh dete jo, kyoN bhalaa tum gaye mujhse muNh modkar

Tum jo hote mere paas itnaa yaqeen,  meri duniyaa na veeraan hotee sanam
Ud gayaa ek jhoNke meN sab kuch meraa, aashiyaana banaaya tha ik jodkar

Ik qasam roktee hai kadam mere ab, tumne dee thee mujhe vo naheeN bhooltee
Apna vaada bhulauN bhalaa kaise maiN, tum bhale hee gayee ho mujhe chodkar

Laakh maine manaaya na maane sanam, Kho chukaa mai bharosaa tumhaaraa sanam,
Jee ke kyaa maiN karunga tumheeN jab naheeN,  MaiN chala jaaunga ye jahaan chodkar

Raaz seene meN kab tak rahega mere, ye naheeN jaanta  hai ye paagal 'mukesh'
Zindgee se pareshaan naakhush hai voh, door sab jaa chuke hai use chodkar
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2012, 08:26:26 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 12, 2012, 07:48:47 AM
Aaj bhar aai  aaNkhe tujhe yaad kar,
ye aankho ne dekhne ka dhandha band karke yaad karna kab se suru kar diya.
jaane kyoN tum gaye ho ye dil todkar
Oh! To ye baat hai, kisee ne dil tor diya hai janaab ka.
Ajnabee ban gayaa teri najroN meN maiN
aoh tauba tauba etna baraa gunaah, chorna mat
, ab udaasi ki chaadar rahuN odhkar
Bhaai abhi garmi ho rahi hai, ye chaadar waadar mat uraa karo, warna kuch ulta-sidha ho jaayega
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aapki shaan ne ek sher pesh karta huN...
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Unke kadmo me jabee ne bandagee rakh dee.
Tumhara kya, hamaari cheej thi chaahe jahaaN rakh di.
Hamne unse dil mangaa to wo bole jra thahro.
Jraa see cheej hai, khuda jaane kahaaN rakh dee.

Chot mujhko lagee yaad aayee  teree
Teacher pe crush huaa tha kyaa.
, ab dawaa bhi naheeN kaam kartee koee
ab aap sadak chaap doctors se dawaa loge to ye hi hoga. Meri maano AIMS me admit ho jaao
Haath hi tera kaafi thaa rakh dete jo, kyoN bhalaa tum gaye mujhse muNh modkar
Address do maiN kaan pakar ke waapis laata huN use.

En lines ke liye ek sher..
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Koi ptta hile, hawa to chaleN.
Kaun apna hai pata to chaleN,

Tum jo hote mere paas itnaa yaqeen,  meri duniyaa na veeraan hotee sanam
Jab bhi dekho us bechari ki hi galti nikalte rahte ho.
Ud gayaa ek jhoNke meN sab kuch meraa
Jab peeskar hawa'ao me rakhoge to aur kya hoga
, aashiyaana banaaya tha ik jodkar
Kaagaj kaa ghar banaya tha kya

ek sher en lines ke liye...
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Taash ke patto se meenaar banaataa kiyoN hai.
Aur ilzaam hawa'ao pe lagaata kiyoN hai.

Ik qasam roktee hai kadam mere ab
Kaun see kasam rokti hai bhayyaa jee
, tumne dee thee mujhe vo naheeN bhooltee
Ek baar bhabhi ji se bataa diya na ye sab to, kasam-wasam sab bhool jaaoge
Apna vaada bhulauN bhalaa kaise maiN, tum bhale hee gayee ho mujhe chodkar
Hi re es aawargi ne aaj ki generation ko bigar rakhkha hai.
Laakh maine manaaya na maane sanam, Kho chukaa mai bharosaa tumhaaraa sanam,
Sab kuch gavaaN do bhaai par bharosha mat gavaao
Jee ke kyaa maiN karunga tumheeN jab naheeN
Ham to hai na
,  MaiN chala jaaunga ye jahaan chodkar
Taange tor dunga agar aage se aesi baat ki to
Raaz seene meN kab tak rahega mere, maiN naheeN jaanta  Jee bahut maiN chukaa
Zindgee se pareshaan ‘mukesh’ tanhaa, door sab jaa chuke hai use chodkar
nice

Par bhaai romantic gazals likhte-likhte aaj ye etni sad gazal likhne ka khayaal kiyoN aaya
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2012, 09:02:07 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi umda mukeshji
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2012, 09:44:44 AM »
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Aaj bhar aai  aaNkhe tujhe yaad kar, jaane kyoN tum gaye ho ye dil todkar
Ajnabee ban gayaa teri najroN meN maiN, ab udaasi ki chaadar rahuN odhkar

Chot mujhko lagee yaad aayee  teree, ab dawaa bhi naheeN kaam kartee koee
Haath hi tera kaafi thaa rakh dete jo, kyoN bhalaa tum gaye mujhse muNh modkar

Tum jo hote mere paas itnaa yaqeen,  meri duniyaa na veeraan hotee sanam
Ud gayaa ek jhoNke meN sab kuch meraa, aashiyaana banaaya tha ik jodkar

Ik qasam roktee hai kadam mere ab, tumne dee thee mujhe vo naheeN bhooltee
Apna vaada bhulauN bhalaa kaise maiN, tum bhale hee gayee ho mujhe chodkar

Laakh maine manaaya na maane sanam, Kho chukaa mai bharosaa tumhaaraa sanam,
Jee ke kyaa maiN karunga tumheeN jab naheeN,  MaiN chala jaaunga ye jahaan chodkar

Raaz seene meN kab tak rahega mere, maiN naheeN jaanta  Jee bahut maiN chukaa
Zindgee se pareshaan ‘mukesh’ tanhaa, door sab jaa chuke hai use chodkar

waah waah mkv ji bohat acha kalaam ........bohat c daad.....
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2012, 10:07:40 AM »
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MKV Jee Aadaab!


bahut khoob janab.. Kafi badi bher ka istemaal kiya hai..
par behad khoobi se nibhaya bhi hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.... Ahsaas ki baat kareN toH bhai
yeH dard e gham meiN bhi aap ne khoob kalaam kahi hai daad.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad Kabul kijiye.... Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye...  Shad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2012, 10:19:41 AM »
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ULTIMATE,ABSOLUTE,PERFECT,SUPERB,BEAUTIFUL,SPEECHLESS
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2012, 11:54:10 AM »
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MUKESH JI . BAHUT  DARD  BHARI  ,  KHUBSURAT  PESHKASH  HAI .
BADI BAHR KO BHI KHOOB ISTEMAAL  KIYA  AUR  KHUBSURAT  ANDAZ  
MEIN  APNI  BAAT  KAHI  HAI . BAHUT  MUBARAK  HO.
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2012, 12:21:13 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 12, 2012, 07:48:47 AM
Aaj bhar aai  aaNkhe tujhe yaad kar, jaane kyoN tum gaye ho ye dil todkar
Ajnabee ban gayaa teri najroN meN maiN, ab udaasi ki chaadar rahuN odhkar

Chot mujhko lagee yaad aayee  teree, ab dawaa bhi naheeN kaam kartee koee
Haath hi tera kaafi thaa rakh dete jo, kyoN bhalaa tum gaye mujhse muNh modkar

Tum jo hote mere paas itnaa yaqeen,  meri duniyaa na veeraan hotee sanam
Ud gayaa ek jhoNke meN sab kuch meraa, aashiyaana banaaya tha ik jodkar

Ik qasam roktee hai kadam mere ab, tumne dee thee mujhe vo naheeN bhooltee
Apna vaada bhulauN bhalaa kaise maiN, tum bhale hee gayee ho mujhe chodkar

Laakh maine manaaya na maane sanam, Kho chukaa mai bharosaa tumhaaraa sanam,
Jee ke kyaa maiN karunga tumheeN jab naheeN,  MaiN chala jaaunga ye jahaan chodkar

Raaz seene meN kab tak rahega mere, maiN naheeN jaanta  Jee bahut maiN chukaa
Zindgee se pareshaan ‘mukesh’ tanhaa, door sab jaa chuke hai use chodkar

Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2012, 01:14:18 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2012, 01:16:48 PM »
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Aaj bhar aai  aaNkhe tujhe yaad kar, jaane kyoN tum gaye ho ye dil todkar
Ajnabee ban gayaa teri najroN meN maiN, ab udaasi ki chaadar rahuN odhkar

Chot mujhko lagee yaad aayee  teree, ab dawaa bhi naheeN kaam kartee koee
Haath hi tera kaafi thaa rakh dete jo, kyoN bhalaa tum gaye mujhse muNh modkar

Tum jo hote mere paas itnaa yaqeen,  meri duniyaa na veeraan hotee sanam
Ud gayaa ek jhoNke meN sab kuch meraa, aashiyaana banaaya tha ik jodkar

bahut dard hai very very touching. bahut acha likha hai aapne mkv jee
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2012, 02:01:45 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2012, 02:07:53 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 12, 2012, 07:48:47 AM
Aaj bhar aai  aaNkhe tujhe yaad kar, jaane kyoN tum gaye ho ye dil todkar
Ajnabee ban gayaa teri najroN meN maiN, ab udaasi ki chaadar rahuN odhkar

Chot mujhko lagee yaad aayee  teree, ab dawaa bhi naheeN kaam kartee koee
Haath hi tera kaafi thaa rakh dete jo, kyoN bhalaa tum gaye mujhse muNh modkar

Tum jo hote mere paas itnaa yaqeen,  meri duniyaa na veeraan hotee sanam
Ud gayaa ek jhoNke meN sab kuch meraa, aashiyaana banaaya tha ik jodkar

Ik qasam roktee hai kadam mere ab, tumne dee thee mujhe vo naheeN bhooltee
Apna vaada bhulauN bhalaa kaise maiN, tum bhale hee gayee ho mujhe chodkar

Laakh maine manaaya na maane sanam, Kho chukaa mai bharosaa tumhaaraa sanam,
Jee ke kyaa maiN karunga tumheeN jab naheeN,  MaiN chala jaaunga ye jahaan chodkar

Raaz seene meN kab tak rahega mere, maiN naheeN jaanta  Jee bahut maiN chukaa
Zindgee se pareshaan ‘mukesh’ tanhaa, door sab jaa chuke hai use chodkar


excellant  sir
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2012, 04:49:48 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 12, 2012, 07:48:47 AM
Aaj bhar aai  aaNkhe tujhe yaad kar, jaane kyoN tum gaye ho ye dil todkar
Ajnabee ban gayaa teri najroN meN maiN, ab udaasi ki chaadar rahuN odhkar
Mukesh ji lajbab peshkash....bdhayi aur daad kabul kijiye....

Chot mujhko lagee yaad aayee  teree, ab dawaa bhi naheeN kaam kartee koee
Haath hi tera kaafi thaa rakh dete jo, kyoN bhalaa tum gaye mujhse muNh modkar

Tum jo hote mere paas itnaa yaqeen,  meri duniyaa na veeraan hotee sanam
Ud gayaa ek jhoNke meN sab kuch meraa, aashiyaana banaaya tha ik jodkar

Ik qasam roktee hai kadam mere ab, tumne dee thee mujhe vo naheeN bhooltee
Apna vaada bhulauN bhalaa kaise maiN, tum bhale hee gayee ho mujhe chodkar

Laakh maine manaaya na maane sanam, Kho chukaa mai bharosaa tumhaaraa sanam,
Jee ke kyaa maiN karunga tumheeN jab naheeN,  MaiN chala jaaunga ye jahaan chodkar

Raaz seene meN kab tak rahega mere, maiN naheeN jaanta  Jee bahut maiN chukaa
Zindgee se pareshaan ‘mukesh’ tanhaa, door sab jaa chuke hai use chodkar

MUKESH JI LAJBAB PESHKASH....DAAD AUR BADHAYI KABOOL KIJIYE....
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«Reply #13 on: October 12, 2012, 04:58:39 PM »
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very very very very niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.......
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Gehre ehsasaat...mayush se alfaaj...kalam se kaagaz pe likhe kuch gehre tallukaat...ye andaaz nya...hme bahot psnd aaya hai mere yaar...
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