AAJ BHAR AAYEE AANKHEN.............MKV

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«Reply #15 on: October 12, 2012, 07:34:58 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji... !!!
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«Reply #16 on: October 13, 2012, 03:03:48 AM »
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mausam bhi kahan ek sa hota hai..isliye khumaar ke baad ye dard.
dard ko khumaar se chupaane ki naakaamyaab koshish bhi ho sakti hai.
aapki rangbirangi reply dekhkar bahut khushi hui..aapne is baar pahli reply di. bahut accha laga
serious post hote hue bhi aapke mazahiya andaaz ne ise aur bhi khoobsurat bana diya. par last ke comment ne ise dard ke daayre se baahar nahi nikalne diya.
bahut bahut shukriya bhai.
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«Reply #17 on: October 13, 2012, 03:06:05 AM »
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MUKESH JI KYA BAAT HAI BAHUT HI UMDA AUR DARD SE BHARA QALAAM WITH  GREAT FEELING TOUCH...... BAHUT HI ZABARDAST 

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«Reply #18 on: October 13, 2012, 01:10:11 PM »
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Wah Wah Mukesh Ji Kamal Ka Likha Hai Bahut Khub Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: October 13, 2012, 06:49:31 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi umda mukeshji
Thanks aqsh jee
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«Reply #20 on: October 13, 2012, 08:15:33 PM »
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waah waah mkv ji bohat acha kalaam ........bohat c daad.....
Thanks laaiba jee
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«Reply #21 on: October 13, 2012, 08:34:53 PM »
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Aaj bhar aai  aaNkhe tujhe yaad kar, jaane kyoN tum gaye ho ye dil todkar
Ajnabee ban gayaa teri najroN meN maiN, ab udaasi ki chaadar rahuN odhkar
acha hai koi to mujhe is tarah bhi yaad karta hai varna koi bhi nahin puchta mujhe.thank u ji. per main glaas tak sambhaal kar rakhti hoon ghar pe dil kaise tod doon gi ab aisi bhi nadaan nahin hoon. ye to bus tumhaare dimaag ki khalal hai ji. ajnabi nahin ho jaan boojh kar ignore karti hoon tumhein zaraa sataane mein mazaa aataa hai ...na. paas mein kambal nahin hai tahndh pad rahi hogi .chaader se thandh nahin jaaye gi janaab Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Chot mujhko lagee yaad aayee  teree, ab dawaa bhi naheeN kaam kartee koee
Haath hi tera kaafi thaa rakh dete jo, kyoN bhalaa tum gaye mujhse muNh modkar
kya kahne mujhe to jab chot lagti hai ammi ko pukaarti hoon .dawaa ko bhi pataa hoga ki tumharaa ilaaj unke paas nahin mere paas hai.main apna haath to tumhaare paas nahin chhod sakti na. itni himmat nahin hai paas mere . thik hai aati hoon intezaar karo mera Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Tum jo hote mere paas itnaa yaqeen,  meri duniyaa na veeraan hotee sanam
Ud gayaa ek jhoNke meN sab kuch meraa, aashiyaana banaaya tha ik jodkar
main koi duniya chhod kar thodi gayi hoon ki roye pade ho tum. arrey babaa kaam se baahar gayi hoon vapas aa jaao.n gi. ab ye bhoot bangla mat bana kar rkho apne ghar ko varna koi churail ka dil tum pe aa jaaye gaa  samjhe buddhoo Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Ik qasam roktee hai kadam mere ab, tumne dee thee mujhe vo naheeN bhooltee
Apna vaada bhulauN bhalaa kaise maiN, tum bhale hee gayee ho mujhe chodkar
achi baat hai main qasam vaapas leti hoon. ab khush ho jaao. haan phir se padosan ki ladki ke peeche mat padna varna ab ki aisi qasam doon gi ki 7 janmo.n to vapas nahin loon gi Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Laakh maine manaaya na maane sanam, Kho chukaa mai bharosaa tumhaaraa sanam,
Jee ke kyaa maiN karunga tumheeN jab naheeN,  MaiN chala jaaunga ye jahaan chodkar
na baba na aisa ghazab na karna main vaapas aayi to phir main kaise akele rahoon gi. vaise kis flight se jaao ge iss jahaan se bataa dena . see off karne aa joo.n gi Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Raaz seene meN kab tak rahega mere, maiN naheeN jaanta  Jee bahut maiN chukaa
Zindgee se pareshaan ‘mukesh’ tanhaa, door sab jaa chuke hai use chodkar

 tum jhoote ho. tumne sab ko chhod rakha hai sirf mere liye arrey pagal mohabbat to jeena seekhati hai marna nahin jaao vapas mummy daay ke paas dekho kaise pareshaan hain tumhaare liye. maine kahaa naa ...main aao.n gi waqt ka intezaar karo. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased


mkv ji just superb................!
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«Reply #22 on: October 13, 2012, 08:36:16 PM »
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bro. bahut ache comments lage tumhaare
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«Reply #23 on: October 14, 2012, 03:55:22 PM »
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MKV Jee Aadaab!


bahut khoob janab.. Kafi badi bher ka istemaal kiya hai..
par behad khoobi se nibhaya bhi hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.... Ahsaas ki baat kareN toH bhai
yeH dard e gham meiN bhi aap ne khoob kalaam kahi hai daad.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad Kabul kijiye.... Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye...  Shad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Thanks parwaaz bhai
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«Reply #24 on: October 14, 2012, 06:05:39 PM »
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ULTIMATE,ABSOLUTE,PERFECT,SUPERB,BEAUTIFUL,SPEECHLESS
sab aapka asheerwaad hai sir
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«Reply #25 on: October 15, 2012, 08:02:43 AM »
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MUKESH JI . BAHUT  DARD  BHARI  ,  KHUBSURAT  PESHKASH  HAI .
BADI BAHR KO BHI KHOOB ISTEMAAL  KIYA  AUR  KHUBSURAT  ANDAZ 
MEIN  APNI  BAAT  KAHI  HAI . BAHUT  MUBARAK  HO.
Thanks sir
Bahr me likhne ka asli shyreya to aapko hai.
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«Reply #26 on: October 15, 2012, 08:22:08 AM »
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boht khub mukesh ji
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«Reply #27 on: October 15, 2012, 05:38:44 PM »
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Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause
shukriya saraswat jee
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«Reply #28 on: October 16, 2012, 04:33:09 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut khoob  Applause
thanks anmol
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«Reply #29 on: October 16, 2012, 07:17:23 PM »
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bahut dard hai very very touching. bahut acha likha hai aapne mkv jee
shukriya aapka
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