Aaj Bhii Wo Jakhm, NishaaN KyuN Hai...

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on December 07, 2013, 09:30:59 PM
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Ek Aur Chotii Si Koshish...

212 212 1222

Chhut Jaaye Jo KarwaaN KyuN Hai...
Ye Mohabbat Bhii BadgumaaN KyuN Hai...

Tod De Jo Kali Chahe Wo To...
Dunya, Lachaar BagbaaN KyuN Hai...

Do Ghadii De Raha KyuN Marte Ko...
Aaj Tu Waqt MeharbaaN KyuN Hai...

Qatl bhii Saamne Kiya Karte...
Koii Na De Raha BayaaN KyuN Hai...

Waqt To Beet Gaya "Musaahib" Ab...
Aaj Bhii Wo Jakhm, NishaaN KyuN Hai...


YahaN maine kuch words ke wazan gira kar use kiye hain, jaise "Dunya" ko 21 or "bhii" ke liye 1 liya hai.
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2013, 09:37:54 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2013, 09:38:16 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2013, 09:41:20 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on December 07, 2013, 09:37:54 PM
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 07, 2013, 09:38:16 PM
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2013, 10:25:52 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on December 07, 2013, 09:30:59 PM
Ek Aur Chotii Si Koshish...

212 212 1222

Chhut Jaaye Jo KarwaaN KyuN Hai...
Ye Mohabbat Bhii BadgumaaN KyuN Hai...

Tod De Jo Kali Chahe Wo To...
Dunya, Lachaar BagbaaN KyuN Hai...

Do Ghadii De Raha KyuN Marte Ko...
Aaj Tu Waqt MeharbaaN KyuN Hai...

Qatl bhii Saamne Kiya Karte...
Koii Na De Raha BayaaN KyuN Hai...

Waqt To Beet Gaya "Musaahib" Ab...
Aaj Bhii Wo Jakhm, NishaaN KyuN Hai...


YahaN maine kuch words ke wazan gira kar use kiye hain, jaise "Dunya" ko 21 or "bhii" ke liye 1 liya hai.


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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2013, 10:30:03 PM »
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bahut khub musaahib jee....

waise toh har sher mein baat alag hi thi par mujhe aapka yeh sher bahut pasand aaya..

Do Ghadii De Raha KyuN Marte Ko...
Aaj Tu Waqt MeharbaaN KyuN Hai...
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2013, 01:02:52 AM »
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umdaa ghazal janaab
daad daad daad
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2013, 02:27:18 AM »
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Nice jannab
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2013, 04:28:16 AM »
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Ye koshish bhi bahaut achchhe rahi Musaahib ji .... Daad aur mubaarakbaad !!!
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2013, 09:37:06 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2013, 10:26:41 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: December 08, 2013, 09:47:42 PM »
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bahut khoob....
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«Reply #13 on: December 08, 2013, 10:24:01 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on December 07, 2013, 09:30:59 PM
Ek Aur Chotii Si Koshish...

212 212 1222

Chhut Jaaye Jo KarwaaN KyuN Hai...
Ye Mohabbat Bhii BadgumaaN KyuN Hai...

Tod De Jo Kali Chahe Wo To...
Dunya, Lachaar BagbaaN KyuN Hai...

Do Ghadii De Raha KyuN Marte Ko...
Aaj Tu Waqt MeharbaaN KyuN Hai...

Qatl bhii Saamne Kiya Karte...
Koii Na De Raha BayaaN KyuN Hai...

Waqt To Beet Gaya "Musaahib" Ab...
Aaj Bhii Wo Jakhm, NishaaN KyuN Hai...


YahaN maine kuch words ke wazan gira kar use kiye hain, jaise "Dunya" ko 21 or "bhii" ke liye 1 liya hai.


bahut umda peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: December 09, 2013, 08:01:07 PM »
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Bahut achchi koshish bishwajeet ji... aur bahut hi achchci kalaam... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaad...
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