Aaj fir, aastaan pai kiskaa naqsh-e-paa hai, 'abd'!

by abdbundeli on February 04, 2013, 10:30:14 AM
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Aaj fir, aastaan pai kiskaa naqsh-e-paa hai, 'abd'!
Aaj lagtaa hai mujhey, yeh bhi mudd’aa hai, 'abd'!
 
Koun hai, joki, meyrey dar pai aakey loutaa hai?
Ajeeb meyree zindagee kaa faisalaa hai, ‘abd’!

Roshani kee bisaat ab bhee yahaan baaqee hai:
Jaan’naa chaahtaa hun, us mein kyaa chhupaa hai, 'abd'!

Kis sey puuchhuun, ki, loutney ki kyaa wajah hogee?
Unkaa auroun sey bhi, lagtaa hai, raabtaa hai, ‘abd’!

Dastakeyn deykey bulaatey to pahunchtaa dourhaa;
Mujhko maaluum nahin, meyree kyaa khataa hai, ‘abd’!

Aaj mashriq sey hawa leykey namee aayee hai:
Yeh kisee aur wasl-e-nou kee ibtidaa hai, ‘abd’!

Aaj kuchh gair-sey kyoun hain gul-e-gulbun hamko?
Kaash, batlaaye koyi, kis pai ab fidaa hai, 'abd'!

                          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2013, 11:11:15 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2013, 11:25:28 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2013, 11:35:36 AM »
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Abd Sahaab Aadaab!



WaaH waaH waaH janab kia kahne behad umdaa aur behad khoobsurat aur
gehre ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai janab... Usual Smile


Aakher ke chaar ashaar hume behad khoob aur asardar lage... Humari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2013, 11:45:13 AM »
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Waah waah bahut khoob likha hai aapne abdbundeli jee
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2013, 12:09:14 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
As usual beautiful composition abd bundeli jee. dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2013, 04:05:01 PM »
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kuch kehne ke lie alfaaz hi nhi milte  aapki Ghazalon par Sirji

bas
thanx for dis

god bless u
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2013, 06:27:17 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on February 04, 2013, 11:11:15 AM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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Quote from: prashad on February 04, 2013, 11:25:28 AM
wah

Shukriyah, 'prasad' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2013, 06:31:07 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 04, 2013, 11:35:36 AM
Abd Sahaab Aadaab!

WaaH waaH waaH janab kia kahne behad umdaa aur behad khoobsurat aur
gehre ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai janab... Usual Smile

Aakher ke chaar ashaar hume behad khoob aur asardar lage... Humari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khudaa Hafez... Usual Smile

Namaskaar! Shukriyah, 'Parwaaz' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2013, 06:33:13 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on February 04, 2013, 11:45:13 AM
Waah waah bahut khoob likha hai aapne abdbundeli jee

Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2013, 06:34:18 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 04, 2013, 12:09:14 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
As usual beautiful composition abd bundeli jee. dheron daad

Shukriyah, 'Aqsh' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2013, 06:36:04 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on February 04, 2013, 04:05:01 PM
kuch kehne ke lie alfaaz hi nhi milte  aapki Ghazalon par Sirji

bas
thanx for dis

god bless u

Shukriyah, 'sarfira' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah! God Bless You!
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2013, 03:35:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2013, 05:02:27 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on February 05, 2013, 03:35:00 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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