AAJ HUM NE DIL KA SAUDA KAR LIYA ................ HASAN

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Khud . ko . un.ka ,,, un.ko . apna . kar . liya
Aaj . Hum . ne ., Dil . ka . Sauda . kar . liya
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Kar'waan - e - Dil . yahee'n . par . ruk . gaya
Bus . tere . Kooche . mei'n . Dera . kar . liya
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Uff ! ,, Zameendaraana . chaalei'n .. Husn . ki
Baithe - Baithe . Dil . pe . Qabza . kae . liya
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Kahte ., the .. tum ..apna . Aa'eena .. hamei'n
Kya . hua . jo . Hum . se . pardah . kar . liya
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Hum . se . abb . Shikwe - Shikayat . kis . liye
Tumne .  khud . jab . tark . Rishta . kar . liya  
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Hum . se . kahte  , Hum . badal . lete . Makaa'n
Tum . ne . kyuu'n . tabdeel . Rasta . kar . liya
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Dekhte . hi . Humko , Bhounhei'n . tan . gayee'n  
Bus , kamaa'n . par . teer . seedha . kar . liya
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Yaad . aayi . Maa'n , Jabee'n . kham . ho . gayee
Yuu'n . laga . Jannat . mein . Sajda . kar . liya
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Kya . Usoolo'n . se . mila ., tum . ko . ' Hasan '
Zindagi . mei'n ., khud . ko . tanha . kar . liya
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- Hasan . Shamsi -                           
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2015, 06:59:09 AM »
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ek rau ke saath daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hasan ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2015, 07:03:59 AM »
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speechless sir ji...i am not able to use my rau for this.. sorry for this but this truely deserve 1000 raus
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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2015, 12:41:59 PM »
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bahut khoob sir..
Hamesha ki terah
Ek Rau ++
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«Reply #5 on: March 18, 2015, 01:02:55 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 18, 2015, 02:50:16 PM »
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Uff ! ,, Zameendaraana . chaalei'n .. Husn . ki
Baithe - Baithe . Dil . pe . Qabza . kae . liya
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ghazab kaa sher daad hazir hai
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«Reply #7 on: March 18, 2015, 03:28:23 PM »
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अति सुंदर बहुत खूब -आपने किससे दिल का सौदा कर लिया कृपया करके बताये तो सही
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2015, 04:16:52 PM »
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ek rau ke saath daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad hasan ji
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Thanks a lot aur dheron duaaein , Suresh Sangwan ji . God b less you
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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2015, 04:21:06 PM »
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speechless sir ji...i am not able to use my rau for this.. sorry for this but this truely deserve 1000 raus
Thanks Praachi ji for your very nice words of appreciation . I am indeed elated . Your words are more precious than a 1000 raus . God bless you .
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«Reply #10 on: March 18, 2015, 04:59:30 PM »
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Mohtaram F.H.Siddiqui saheb,

    bahut hi umda ghazal kahi hai, sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hain, is nayaab ghazal ke liye meri daad qubool farnayein.
                               Syed Mohd Mahzar
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2015, 08:33:04 PM »
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Waah Janaab waah dheron dheron daad. bas mazaa aagayaa parh ke, baar baar parhne ko jee chahtaa hai, bahut khoob.
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bahut khoob sir..
Hamesha ki terah
Ek Rau ++

Thanks a lot Nakul ji . Salamat rahye . God bless you ,
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