"aaj kehne ko nahi kuch sunne ko jee karta hai"

by aaina on June 02, 2009, 10:33:28 AM
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aaj kehne ko nhi kuch sunne ko jee karta hai
teri baho.n mai behekne ko jee karta hai

bhut udaas hai ey mere saman dil mera
tujh mai toot ke bikhrne ko jee karta hai

tu agr khush hai to uzhaar bhi to kar uska
tere labo pe hasi daikhe ko jee karta hai

 raat ko pehloo mai bikhanre ki ijazat de do
banke tara tere daman mai uthrne ko jee karta hai

manzil na humwaar pe qadam aahita uthaun magr
tum agr sath ho to kahan sambhlne ko jee karta hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2009, 11:49:51 AM »
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good one aslam bhai....bahut hi khoobsurati se khwahisho ka izhaar kiya hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2009, 12:13:52 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 02, 2009, 10:33:28 AM
aaj kehne ko nhi kuch sunne ko jee karta hai
teri baho.n mai behekne ko jee karta hai

bhut udaas hai ey mere saman dil mera
tujh mai toot ke bikhrne ko jee karta hai

tu agr khush hai to uzhaar bhi to kar uska
tere labo pe hasi daikhe ko jee karta hai

 raat ko pehloo mai bikhanre ki ijazat de do
banke tara tere daman mai uthrne ko jee karta hai

manzil na humwaar pe qadam aahita uthaun magr
tum agr sath ho to kahan sambhlne ko jee karta hai



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah bohut umda ghazal likha hai aapne Aslam ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2009, 12:26:33 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 02, 2009, 10:33:28 AM
aaj kehne ko nhi kuch sunne ko jee karta hai
teri baho.n mai behekne ko jee karta hai

bhut udaas hai ey mere saman dil mera
tujh mai toot ke bikhrne ko jee karta hai

tu agr khush hai to uzhaar bhi to kar uska
tere labo pe hasi daikhe ko jee karta hai

 raat ko pehloo mai bikhanre ki ijazat de do
banke tara tere daman mai uthrne ko jee karta hai

manzil na humwaar pe qadam aahita uthaun magr
tum agr sath ho to kahan sambhlne ko jee karta hai


Subhanallah
too good Aslam ji
bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2009, 12:33:17 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 02, 2009, 10:33:28 AM
aaj kehne ko nhi kuch sunne ko jee karta hai
teri baho.n mai behekne ko jee karta hai

bhut udaas hai ey mere saman dil mera
tujh mai toot ke bikhrne ko jee karta hai

tu agr khush hai to uzhaar bhi to kar uska
tere labo pe hasi daikhe ko jee karta hai

 raat ko pehloo mai bikhanre ki ijazat de do
banke tara tere daman mai uthrne ko jee karta hai

manzil na humwaar pe qadam aahita uthaun magr
tum agr sath ho to kahan sambhlne ko jee karta hai


Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal hai ye aapki .... Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2009, 03:35:36 PM »
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Wow .. Aslam Ji its so Beautiful..so Romantic.. Usual Smile
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Sammual
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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2009, 07:17:35 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Aslam Ji. Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aapne
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aaina
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2009, 10:21:20 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on June 02, 2009, 11:49:51 AM
good one aslam bhai....bahut hi khoobsurati se khwahisho ka izhaar kiya hai

bhut shukriya sahil
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2009, 10:22:44 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on June 02, 2009, 12:13:52 PM

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah bohut umda ghazal likha hai aapne Aslam ji
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thnxxxxx so much honeyrose
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2009, 10:29:14 PM »
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Quote from: -Kashish- on June 02, 2009, 12:26:33 PM
Subhanallah
too good Aslam ji
bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause

thnxxxxxx kashish thnxxxx so much for ur appriciation
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2009, 10:31:02 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 02, 2009, 03:35:36 PM
Wow .. Aslam Ji its so Beautiful..so Romantic.. Usual Smile

thnxxxxxxxxxxxx sophi ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2009, 10:32:43 PM »
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Quote from: Sammual on June 02, 2009, 07:17:35 PM
Bahut Khoob Aslam Ji. Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aapne

bhut bhut shukriya sammual
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2009, 10:34:11 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 02, 2009, 12:33:17 PM
Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal hai ye aapki .... Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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bhut shukriya celmira ji
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