AAJ PAN'GHAT PE .................................... HASAN

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Bazm  meiN   teri  kiska   naam   na  thha ,
Sirf   shaamil   yahi   Ghulaam   na  thha


Faiz - yaaboN  mein   sab  se   aage  thhe ,
Jin ka  Fehrist  mein  bhi  naam  na  thha


Zikr    thha    parde   ki   Fazeelat   ka ,
Parda - daaroN   ka   intizaam    na   thha


Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha


Inkisaari    ko    woh     ghalat    samjha  ,
Woh   diya  ,  jo   mera   muqaam   na  thha


Uss   ko   Quaaid    banaa   diya   sab   ne  ,
Jo    Numaainda - e - Awaam     na    thha


Maikada  ,  Shaikh  !  ,  kaise   aana   hua  ,
Aap  ka   yaaN   to   koi   kaam   na   thha


Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha


Tishna - lab   is  liye   raha   main  'Hasan' ,
Maye   thhi   ifraat  , khaali  jaam   na  thha







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Faizyaab = Beneficiary ;  Fehrist = List ;  Fazeelat = Value ;
Inkisaari = Modesty ; Muqaam = Place/Position ; quaaid = Leader
Numainda e awaam = People's representative; Tishna - lab = Pyasa
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«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2013, 05:40:22 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2013, 05:51:35 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,
              Aadaab!

Waah waah kya baat hai.....

Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha

bahut khoob...

Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha
 
Waaaaaah....

Hamari janib se dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen...

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2013, 05:54:55 AM »
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Aadaab Sir
behatreen ghazal,, umda ashaar

par in ashaaro ka javaab naheen


Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha


Inkisaari    ko    woh     ghalat    samjha  ,
Woh   diya  ,  jo   mera   muqaam   na  thha


Uss   ko   Quaaid    banaa   diya   sab   ne  ,
Jo    Numaainda - e - Awaam     na    thha


Maikada  ,  Shaikh  !  ,  kaise   aana   hua  ,
Aap  ka   yaaN   to   koi   kaam   na   thha


Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha

Raadha ka dard..shyaam bin..
dil ko choone vaala sher..
Par log kahte hai..ki zamaana badal gaya hai..aaj ke zamaane me aisa sochna bhi theek nahee..kya pata.
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«Reply #4 on: February 22, 2013, 03:26:14 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Gazab ki gazal kahi hai janab waaH dilshaad ho gaya... bade hi pur asar aur
gehre ashaar rahe... behad umdaa gazal kahi hai jee... Usual Smile


Kisi aik ashaar ki tareef kar nikal jaauN munaseeb nahi hai... har ashaar
behad umdaa raha... Usual Smile
Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 22, 2013, 05:38:21 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2013, 07:17:26 PM »
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Bahut hee khubsurat qalaam tarif ke liye alfaz hee nahi hai sir..... Kaise tareef ki jaye
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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2013, 08:40:12 PM »
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As usual hasan ji.Bahut bahut umda peshkash. Ek se badhke ek sher. Kiski tareef karoon aur kiski na karoon. yeh hamari khushkismati hai ki hame aapki kalaam padhne ko milti hai. Bahut bahut mubarak ho aapko.
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2013, 11:17:11 PM »
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saini saheb , bahut shukriya aur aadaab.
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«Reply #10 on: February 23, 2013, 01:11:28 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 22, 2013, 05:21:11 AM
Bazm  meiN   teri  kiska   naam   na  thha ,
Sirf   shaamil   yahi   Ghulaam   na  thha


Faiz - yaaboN  mein   sab  se   aage  thhe ,
Jin ka  Fehrist  mein  bhi  naam  na  thha


Zikr    thha    parde   ki   Fazeelat   ka ,
Parda - daaroN   ka   intizaam    na   thha


Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha


Inkisaari    ko    woh     ghalat    samjha  ,
Woh   diya  ,  jo   mera   muqaam   na  thha


Uss   ko   Quaaid    banaa   diya   sab   ne  ,
Jo    Numaainda - e - Awaam     na    thha


Maikada  ,  Shaikh  !  ,  kaise   aana   hua  ,
Aap  ka   yaaN   to   koi   kaam   na   thha


Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha


Tishna - lab   is  liye   raha   main  'Hasan' ,
Maye   thhi   ifraat  , khaali  jaam   na  thha







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Faizyaab = Beneficiary ;  Fehrist = List ;  Fazeelat = Value ;
Inkisaari = Modesty ; Muqaam = Place/Position ; quaaid = Leader
Numainda e awaam = People's representative; Tishna - lab = Pyasa
waaaaaah waaaaah Hasan sir
aapki ghazal padhkar ek ajab sa sukoon milta hai mujhe
thanx for dis ghazal sirji
Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 23, 2013, 11:36:34 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on February 22, 2013, 05:51:35 AM
Hasan Sahab,
              Aadaab!

Waah waah kya baat hai.....

Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha

bahut khoob...

Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha
 
Waaaaaah....

Hamari janib se dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen...

Raqeeb Lucknowi

Satish ji,Adaab. Ghazal  padhne aur  hausla afza  tabsire ke liye
bahut shukr guzar hoon . Aap ke zariye ghazal ki pazeerai yaqeenan
mere liye eik khaas ahmiyat rakhti hai. Duago,Hasan
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«Reply #12 on: February 23, 2013, 12:08:43 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 22, 2013, 05:21:11 AM
Bazm  meiN   teri  kiska   naam   na  thha ,
Sirf   shaamil   yahi   Ghulaam   na  thha


Faiz - yaaboN  mein   sab  se   aage  thhe ,
Jin ka  Fehrist  mein  bhi  naam  na  thha


Zikr    thha    parde   ki   Fazeelat   ka ,
Parda - daaroN   ka   intizaam    na   thha


Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha


Inkisaari    ko    woh     ghalat    samjha  ,
Woh   diya  ,  jo   mera   muqaam   na  thha


Uss   ko   Quaaid    banaa   diya   sab   ne  ,
Jo    Numaainda - e - Awaam     na    thha


Maikada  ,  Shaikh  !  ,  kaise   aana   hua  ,
Aap  ka   yaaN   to   koi   kaam   na   thha


Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha


Tishna - lab   is  liye   raha   main  'Hasan' ,
Maye   thhi   ifraat  , khaali  jaam   na  thha







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Faizyaab = Beneficiary ;  Fehrist = List ;  Fazeelat = Value ;
Inkisaari = Modesty ; Muqaam = Place/Position ; quaaid = Leader
Numainda e awaam = People's representative; Tishna - lab = Pyasa

sir, aadab,

bohut khoob bohut khoob , marhaba marhaba,

 

Poochho mat kyuuN Udaas hai Radha ,

Aaj Pan'ghat pe sab thhe , Shyaam na thha


is shair ki masoomiyat ke liye aapke haath choomne ko jee chahta hai kya baat hai. hazaaroN daad qubool kareN . har shair ghazal ka shair hai,
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«Reply #13 on: February 23, 2013, 03:22:46 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 22, 2013, 05:54:55 AM
Aadaab Sir
behatreen ghazal,, umda ashaar

par in ashaaro ka javaab naheen


Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha


Inkisaari    ko    woh     ghalat    samjha  ,
Woh   diya  ,  jo   mera   muqaam   na  thha


Uss   ko   Quaaid    banaa   diya   sab   ne  ,
Jo    Numaainda - e - Awaam     na    thha


Maikada  ,  Shaikh  !  ,  kaise   aana   hua  ,
Aap  ka   yaaN   to   koi   kaam   na   thha


Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha

Raadha ka dard..shyaam bin..
dil ko choone vaala sher..
Par log kahte hai..ki zamaana badal gaya hai..aaj ke zamaane me aisa sochna bhi theek nahee..kya pata.



MUKESH JI , GHAZAL PASAND KARNE AUR  KHUBSURAT TABSIRE KE LIYE BAHUT SHUKRIYA , AUR  DUAAEIN .
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«Reply #14 on: February 23, 2013, 05:10:36 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 22, 2013, 03:26:14 PM
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Gazab ki gazal kahi hai janab waaH dilshaad ho gaya... bade hi pur asar aur
gehre ashaar rahe... behad umdaa gazal kahi hai jee... Usual Smile


Kisi aik ashaar ki tareef kar nikal jaauN munaseeb nahi hai... har ashaar
behad umdaa raha... Usual Smile
Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
PARWAAZ  SAHEB , HAMESHA  KI  TARAH , KHUBSURAT  TABSIRE  KE  LIYE  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA . KHUSH  RAHYE .
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