AAJ PAN'GHAT PE .................................... HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 22, 2013, 05:21:11 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 23, 2013, 06:08:07 PM »
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वाह....वाह...क्या बात है हसन जी, हर एक शेर लाज़वाब रहा बेमिसाल रहा, ढेर सारी दाद और मुबारकबाद
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«Reply #16 on: February 23, 2013, 06:10:20 PM »
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WWAH WAAH HASAN SIR BOHUT KHUBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB
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«Reply #17 on: February 23, 2013, 06:16:37 PM »
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Bazm  meiN   teri  kiska   naam   na  thha ,
Sirf   shaamil   yahi   Ghulaam   na  thha


Faiz - yaaboN  mein   sab  se   aage  thhe ,
Jin ka  Fehrist  mein  bhi  naam  na  thha


Zikr    thha    parde   ki   Fazeelat   ka ,
Parda - daaroN   ka   intizaam    na   thha


Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha


Inkisaari    ko    woh     ghalat    samjha  ,
Woh   diya  ,  jo   mera   muqaam   na  thha


Uss   ko   Quaaid    banaa   diya   sab   ne  ,
Jo    Numaainda - e - Awaam     na    thha


Maikada  ,  Shaikh  !  ,  kaise   aana   hua  ,
Aap  ka   yaaN   to   koi   kaam   na   thha


Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha


Tishna - lab   is  liye   raha   main  'Hasan' ,
Maye   thhi   ifraat  , khaali  jaam   na  thha







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Faizyaab = Beneficiary ;  Fehrist = List ;  Fazeelat = Value ;
Inkisaari = Modesty ; Muqaam = Place/Position ; quaaid = Leader
Numainda e awaam = People's representative; Tishna - lab = Pyasa


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«Reply #18 on: February 23, 2013, 07:28:21 PM »
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RAJAN  KONDAL  JI , BAHUT  SHUKRIYA  AUR  DUAAEIN.
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«Reply #19 on: February 23, 2013, 07:46:53 PM »
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NANDBAHU JI , SHUKRIYA  VA  AADAAB .
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«Reply #20 on: February 23, 2013, 07:50:14 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai hasan ji...............behad khoobsurati se likhi hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: February 23, 2013, 10:32:07 PM »
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Bahut hee khubsurat qalaam tarif ke liye alfaz hee nahi hai sir..... Kaise tareef ki jaye
soudagar ji , shukriya aur duaaein.
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«Reply #22 on: February 24, 2013, 12:25:17 AM »
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As usual hasan ji.Bahut bahut umda peshkash. Ek se badhke ek sher. Kiski tareef karoon aur kiski na karoon. yeh hamari khushkismati hai ki hame aapki kalaam padhne ko milti hai. Bahut bahut mubarak ho aapko.
aqsh , duaaein . aapki pyari se tabsire ke liye bahut shukriya. khush rahye.
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«Reply #23 on: February 24, 2013, 01:35:20 AM »
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SARFIRA JI , HAUSLA AFZAI KE LIYE BAHUT SHUKRIA
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«Reply #24 on: February 24, 2013, 01:20:16 PM »
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sir, aadab,

bohut khoob bohut khoob , marhaba marhaba,

 

Poochho mat kyuuN Udaas hai Radha ,

Aaj Pan'ghat pe sab thhe , Shyaam na thha



is shair ki masoomiyat ke liye aapke haath choomne ko jee chahta hai kya baat hai. hazaaroN daad qubool kareN . har shair ghazal ka shair hai,
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AARISH , DUAAEIN . HAMESHA  KI  TARAH  AAP  KE  
MOHABBART   BHARE   TABSIRE  KE   LIYE   BAHUT  
SAHUKRIYA  . HASAN
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«Reply #25 on: February 24, 2013, 03:08:00 PM »
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वाह....वाह...क्या बात है हसन जी, हर एक शेर लाज़वाब रहा बेमिसाल रहा, ढेर सारी दाद और मुबारकबाद
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bahut shukriya , amit ji . duaaaein .
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«Reply #26 on: February 24, 2013, 05:01:33 PM »
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saahill ji , bahut shukriya .khush rahye.
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«Reply #27 on: February 24, 2013, 05:04:41 PM »
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wonderful ghazal,sir
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«Reply #28 on: February 24, 2013, 09:49:42 PM »
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Adil baechain saheb , zarranawazi ke liye bahut shukriya aur adaab.
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«Reply #29 on: February 24, 2013, 10:00:11 PM »
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Bazm  meiN   teri  kiska   naam   na  thha ,
Sirf   shaamil   yahi   Ghulaam   na  thha
  Clapping Smiley

Faiz - yaaboN  mein   sab  se   aage  thhe ,
Jin ka  Fehrist  mein  bhi  naam  na  thha    Thumbs UP

Zikr    thha    parde   ki   Fazeelat   ka ,
Parda - daaroN   ka   intizaam    na   thha                wah wah

Waqt   par   woh  hi   shakhs   kaam   aaya  ,
Jis   se   koi    Dua - Salaam    na   thha 
  Bahut khoob

Inkisaari    ko    woh     ghalat    samjha  ,
Woh   diya  ,  jo   mera   muqaam   na  thha   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Uss   ko   Quaaid    banaa   diya   sab   ne  ,
Jo    Numaainda - e - Awaam     na    thha    Applause Applause

Maikada  ,  Shaikh  !  ,  kaise   aana   hua  ,
Aap  ka   yaaN   to   koi   kaam   na   thha   Waaaah

Poochho    mat   kyuuN   Udaas   hai   Radha ,
Aaj  Pan'ghat  pe  sab  thhe , Shyaam  na  thha  Sabhashhhh  Thumbs UP

Tishna - lab   is  liye   raha   main  'Hasan' ,
Maye   thhi   ifraat  , khaali  jaam   na  thha    Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Excellant .... Tarif k liye alfaz kam hua. waise to aapka sab ghazal umda hai aur aapka likha yeh ghazal ...subanallah... bahut bahut khoob hasan sb. bahut bahut daad.
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