Aaj tanha hoon main (by vb)

by vb on November 19, 2012, 02:52:56 PM
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Aaj tanhaa hun main, duniya men mera koi nahi
Is say barh kar kya mohabbat ki saza koi nahi?

Haayay! Kis sheher men layay hen mujhay, khaab meray
Ehl-e-dil kitnay, magar ehl-e-wafaa koi nahi

Geet murjha say gayay hen meray, tumhaaray baad
Aysa lagta hay yahan, mujh say buraa koi nahi

Dil ki duniya men tumharay siva aye jaan-e-ada’a
Ba-khuda koi nahi hay, ba-khuda koi nahi...

Kis say maangoon teri baanhon k sahaaray, jaanaan!
Log kehtay hen k vb ka khuda koi nahi



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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2012, 03:49:42 PM »
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very nice......... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2012, 04:07:43 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2012, 04:41:44 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2012, 04:53:27 PM »
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Behad khubsurat ghazal hai vb ji. Parhte parhte dil kahin kho sa jata hai. Dil ki nazuq ragen tutne ka ahsas hota hai.
Hamesha ki tarah munfarid aur muassar kalaam. Daad aur rau pesh hai.
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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2012, 05:11:31 PM »
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Aaj tanhaa hun main, duniya men mera koi nahi
Is say barh kar kya mohabbat ki saza koi nahi?  Applause Applause Bahut khoob

Haayay! Kis sheher men layay hen mujhay, khaab meray
Ehl-e-dil kitnay, magar ehl-e-wafaa koi nahi  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Geet murjha say gayay hen meray, tumhaaray baad
Aysa lagta hay yahan, mujh say buraa koi nahi  Thumbs UP laajavaab..wah wah

Dil ki duniya men tumharay siva aye jaan-e-ada’a
Ba-khuda koi nahi hay, ba-khuda koi nahi...  Applause Applause Applause

Kis say maangoon teri baanhon k sahaaray, jaanaan!
Log kehtay hen k vb ka khuda koi nahi  Applause Applause Applause



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bahut bahut umda kalaam
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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2012, 08:30:19 PM »
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VB Jee Aadaab!


WallaaH janab kia kahne aapke is umdaa gazal ke behad pur asar
asharoN meiN dilfareb gazal kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Har ashaar meiN gazab ki gehrai aur umdaa khayaal nazar aaye..
Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kjiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahite ... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile               

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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2012, 05:07:38 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2012, 07:41:40 AM »
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shukriya aap sub ka...
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