Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

by livingbytheday on January 22, 2013, 05:53:12 PM
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Kaam kuch nayaa kiyaa  jaaye
Aaj unkaa naam  na liyaa jaaye

Din tabaah hue bahut yaadon mein
Raaton ko toh bachaa liyaa jaaye

Katra katra hi mil raha hain mujhe
Katra katra hi jee liyaa jaaye

Koi khamoshi sun rahaa hoga
Thoda sa shor kar liyaa jaaye

Saari tasveerein dhundhti hain jise
 chehra wo bhi mila liyaa jaaye

Khaali mann khoob awaaj karta hai
Kuch saamaan bhar liyaa jaaye

Darr ke uss paar milegi azaadi
Aaj yeh housla kiyaa jaaye

“Deepak” yeh sochtey hai hunarwale
Waqt rehtey bhanjaa liyaa jaaye
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2013, 05:55:29 PM »
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Kaam kuch nayaa kiyaa  jaaye
Aaj unkaa naam  na liyaa jaaye

Din tabaah hue bahut yaadon mein
Raaton ko toh bachaa liyaa jaaye

Katra katra hi mil raha hain mujhe
Katra katra hi jee liyaa jaaye

Koi khamoshi sun rahaa hoga
Thoda sa shor kar liyaa jaaye

Saari tasveerein dhundhti hain jise
chehra wo bhi mila liyaa jaaye

Khaali mann khoob awaaj karta hai
Kuch saamaan bhar liyaa jaaye

Darr ke uss paar hogi azaadi
Aaj yeh housla kiyaa jaaye

“Deepak” yeh sochtey hai hunarwale
Waqt rehtey bhanjaa liyaa jaaye
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 06:14:17 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Deepak jee, khaas taur pe- "Katra Katra" aur "Darr ke uss paar" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 06:26:16 PM »
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bahut sundar kavita kahi hai bhai . aapko bahut badhai deta hoon.
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2013, 02:33:41 AM »
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bohut khoob deepak jee qatra qatra aur hausla wale ashaar bohut khoob rahe daadddd quboool kareN
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2013, 04:35:55 AM »
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bahut sunder ehsaas deepak ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2013, 04:45:56 AM »
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bahoot khoob livingbytheday ji!!!

Nice work!!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2013, 11:49:49 AM »
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Deepak Jee Aadaab!


Badi achchi nazm rahi janab... aur behad khoob ahsaas O khayaal
waaH jee kia kahne... umda khayaaloN ko lafzoN meiN baNdha hai
aapne... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2013, 11:59:00 AM »
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bohut khub deepak ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2013, 02:49:06 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 22, 2013, 06:14:17 PM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Deepak jee, khaas taur pe- "Katra Katra" aur "Darr ke uss paar" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.

iftakhar ji, iss izzat ka bahut bahut shukriyaa, aapne mere ghazal ke liye itne pyare shabd kahe, mai aap ka shukraguzaar hu, thank you sir
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2013, 03:59:47 PM »
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Quote from: sharqi on January 22, 2013, 06:26:16 PM
bahut sundar kavita kahi hai bhai . aapko bahut badhai deta hoon.

thank you
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