Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

by livingbytheday on January 22, 2013, 05:53:12 PM

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Kaam kuch nayaa kiyaa jaaye
Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

Din tabaah hue bahut yaadon mein
Raaton ko toh bachaa liyaa jaaye

Katra katra hi mil raha hain mujhe
Katra katra hi jee liyaa jaaye

Koi khamoshi sun rahaa hoga
Thoda sa shor kar liyaa jaaye

Saari tasveerein dhundhti hain jise
chehra wo bhi mila liyaa jaaye

Khaali mann khoob awaaj karta hai
Kuch saamaan bhar liyaa jaaye

Darr ke uss paar milegi azaadi
Aaj yeh housla kiyaa jaaye

“Deepak” yeh sochtey hai hunarwale
Waqt rehtey bhanjaa liyaa jaaye


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livingbytheday

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Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2013, 05:55:29 PM »

Kaam kuch nayaa kiyaa jaaye
Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

Din tabaah hue bahut yaadon mein
Raaton ko toh bachaa liyaa jaaye

Katra katra hi mil raha hain mujhe
Katra katra hi jee liyaa jaaye

Koi khamoshi sun rahaa hoga
Thoda sa shor kar liyaa jaaye

Saari tasveerein dhundhti hain jise
chehra wo bhi mila liyaa jaaye

Khaali mann khoob awaaj karta hai
Kuch saamaan bhar liyaa jaaye

Darr ke uss paar hogi azaadi
Aaj yeh housla kiyaa jaaye

“Deepak” yeh sochtey hai hunarwale
Waqt rehtey bhanjaa liyaa jaaye


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 06:14:17 PM »

Waaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Deepak jee, khaas taur pe- "Katra Katra" aur "Darr ke uss paar" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.


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sharqi

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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 06:26:16 PM »

bahut sundar kavita kahi hai bhai . aapko bahut badhai deta hoon.


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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2013, 06:49:58 PM »

too good.. enjoyed at fullest.. seriously awesome creation ji.. lovely.. beautiful superb.. excellent.. outstanding.. fabulous.. and many more.. Usual Smile

words are less to praise this work Usual Smile


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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2013, 02:33:41 AM »

bohut khoob deepak jee qatra qatra aur hausla wale ashaar bohut khoob rahe daadddd quboool kareN


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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2013, 04:35:55 AM »

bahut sunder ehsaas deepak ji


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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2013, 04:45:56 AM »

bahoot khoob livingbytheday ji!!!

Nice work!!!


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aqsh

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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2013, 10:11:00 AM »

just beautiful...


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2013, 11:49:49 AM »

Deepak Jee Aadaab!

Badi achchi nazm rahi janab... aur behad khoob ahsaas O khayaal
waaH jee kia kahne... umda khayaaloN ko lafzoN meiN baNdha hai
aapne...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez...


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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2013, 11:59:00 AM »

bohut khub deepak ji


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livingbytheday

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Re: Aaj unkaa naam na liyaa jaaye

«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2013, 02:49:06 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 22, 2013, 06:14:17 PM

Waaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Deepak jee, khaas taur pe- "Katra Katra" aur "Darr ke uss paar" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.

iftakhar ji, iss izzat ka bahut bahut shukriyaa, aapne mere ghazal ke liye itne pyare shabd kahe, mai aap ka shukraguzaar hu, thank you sir