Aaj Uss Gham ke Kharidaar Kya Hue???

by khwaish on January 18, 2010, 03:45:59 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 22, 2010, 10:12:55 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahut Zabardast Ghazal Likhi Hai APnay
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«Reply #16 on: January 25, 2010, 08:19:09 AM »
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Mai Bhi kuch Likhna Chahata tha Aap Logo Ne Itna Achha Likha Ki Kuch Likhna Bhi Gustakhi Lag Raha Hai
Fir Bhi Likh Raha Hun, Galtiyon Pe Maf Kijiyega

Haste the jo kal tak meri har baat pe...
Aaj vo hi mere gam ke talabgar huye...

Sar jhukaye ham aaj ye sochte rahe...
Kis khata ke liye ham unke gunahgaar huye...

Tham jati thi jinkii sanse me ashk bahne pe...
Aaj vo hi mere gam ke kharidaar huye...
~pank~

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pankji..Kya Likha Hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Teh Dil se shukriya Jo Aap Yahan Phir Aaye,Aur Humein Kuch Acha Padhne Ka Mauka Mika..Shukriya
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«Reply #17 on: January 25, 2010, 08:23:13 AM »
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Wah very touching and lovely gazal.Khwaish ji,Pooja ji,Pank ji,aap sabhi ne bahut khoobsurti se likha.keep it up. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thankyou Soooooooo Much madhu..Thanks A Lot For Always Reading And Appreciating!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: January 25, 2010, 08:35:02 AM »
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Waah Waah Kta baat hai Khwaish Ji .. Bahoot Umda Bahoot Khoob ! Applause Applause Applause


Pooja di and Shivam ji.. Kya kahiye.. Mashallah Bahoot Khoob Likha hai  Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: January 25, 2010, 12:30:26 PM »
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wah kya baat hai    khwaish ji....

JO MERI TARAF UTTHEY DUNIYA BAR KE TOOFANO SEY LARDA KARTE THEY
JO MERE LIYE HI APNI ZINDAGI JEEYEA KARTE THEY
AAJ US TARAFDAAR NE HI MERI ZINDAGI BARBAAD KAR DIYA.

JO MERE HAR DUKH DARD DEKHKAR MERI KHUSHIYON KE KHAATIR
MERE HAR GAM KHARIDA KARTE THEY
AAJ US KHARIDAAR NE MERI HAR KHUSHIYAN KHARID KAR DIYA...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Caraji..

Aur Aapne Bhi Acha Likha Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: January 26, 2010, 03:50:44 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob bhaiya, pooja di, dear pank and cara ji
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«Reply #21 on: January 29, 2010, 09:02:05 AM »
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Bahut khoon Khwaish Ji

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajeshji..
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«Reply #22 on: January 29, 2010, 09:20:23 AM »
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khwaish bro
bhasha pe aapki majboot pakad aur har sher me ek kahani......lajwab dono ghazlon ke liye.....tah-e-dil se wah wah.......bahoot khoob.....

@pooja ji
chand shabdon me bahoot kuch kah diya aapne....bahoot khoob
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«Reply #23 on: February 05, 2010, 03:17:20 PM »
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Bahut SUndar likha hai Khwaish Ji And Nice Response Pooja Ji and Pank Bro

Bahut bahut Shukriya Rishiji
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«Reply #24 on: February 09, 2010, 02:24:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish ji behad achi rachna hai aapki
bahut hi achhe ashaar  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji jo aapne is Rachna Ko Iss Kadar pasand Kiya..Teh dl se shukriya aapka.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: March 22, 2010, 09:57:54 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahut Zabardast Ghazal Likhi Hai APnay

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Janaab Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: March 22, 2010, 10:06:35 AM »
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bahut acha likha hai ...very nice
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«Reply #27 on: March 25, 2010, 03:18:23 PM »
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Waah Waah Kta baat hai Khwaish Ji .. Bahoot Umda Bahoot Khoob ! Applause Applause Applause


Pooja di and Shivam ji.. Kya kahiye.. Mashallah Bahoot Khoob Likha hai  Applause Applause


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sophi..
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«Reply #28 on: March 25, 2010, 03:30:05 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob bhaiya, pooja di, dear pank and cara ji


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja
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«Reply #29 on: July 29, 2010, 09:24:59 AM »
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khwaish bro
bhasha pe aapki majboot pakad aur har sher me ek kahani......lajwab dono ghazlon ke liye.....tah-e-dil se wah wah.......bahoot khoob.....

@pooja ji
chand shabdon me bahoot kuch kah diya aapne....bahoot khoob

Bahut bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro..

Aapke Comments Aate hi Khud Par garv mehsoos hone lagta hai..

Aapka teh dil se abhaari hoon.. icon_flower
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