aaKhRee khat bhee jaLaa lun toh chaluN,............

by laaiba on December 16, 2014, 04:57:07 PM
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aa.g paanee meN laGaa lun toh chaluN
DaR.d koh dil meN baSaa lun toh chaluN

 
dil ke chehrey par hein gham kee silvaten
maslahat mein sab chuPaa lun toh chaluN..


ab kisee bhee mou.d per milnaa nahiN
roo.h aur dil koh bataa lun toh chaluN...

 
baa.t dil kee maa.n lee hy jub main ney....
hAq mohabbat kaa chuKaa lun toh chaluN

  
ab koyee waadaa waFaa karnaa na tum
sab Ahad dil se miTaa luN toh chaluN...

laf.z meiRey ghumzada reh jaayen geN...
aaKhRee khat  bhee jaLaa lun toh chaluN

Laaibaa shah
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2014, 05:10:29 PM »
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Behtreen peshkash
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2014, 05:31:32 PM »
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waah bahut khoob.
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waaaah waaaah
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2014, 08:41:10 PM »
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Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab .. !

Bahut khoob jee soz e gham meiN dube huye in ahsaas ke kia kahne ...
Badi achchi kalaam pesh ki hai aapne ...
Sabhi sher behad khoob rahe ...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Aapki kalaam se rubaru huye to chaNd ashaar humare zahen meiN bhi jawaban ban pade so aapki nazar ...


Khalis marz e ishq se naata todkar jaana
Achcha nahi hota youN sab ko chodkar jaana

Mil jaaye koyiN raah meiN kaifiyat le bhi lete hai
Seekha nahi buzurgoN se ke muh modkar jaana

Woh kia jaane surat e mohobbat hoti kia hai
Jisne sikha ho diloN ko bus todkar jaana


Likhte rahiye bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...
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bahut khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2014, 04:56:37 AM »
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अति दुंदर,बहुत खूब लाजबाब -आर के रस्तोगी
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bahut khub
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«Reply #9 on: December 17, 2014, 06:59:48 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

khub laaibaji........
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2014, 07:40:29 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 16, 2014, 04:57:07 PM

aa.g paanee meN laGaa lun toh chaluN
DaR.d koh dil meN baSaa lun toh chaluN

 
dil ke chehrey par hein gham kee silvaten
maslahat mein sab chuPaa lun toh chaluN..


ab kisee bhee mou.d per milnaa nahiN
roo.h aur dil koh bataa lun toh chaluN...

 
baa.t dil kee maa.n lee hy jub main ney....
hAq mohabbat kaa chuKaa lun toh chaluN

 
ab koyee waadaa waFaa karnaa na tum
sab Ahad dil se miTaa luN toh chaluN...

laf.z meiRey ghumzada reh jaayen geN...
aaKhRee khat  bhee jaLaa lun toh chaluN

Laaibaa shah

Mohtarma laaiba sahiba! salam

buhat shandaar ghazal hay... is k radeef ne isay buhat khoobsurti bakhshi hay... hamaari taraf se bharpoor daad qabool kejay...

ek-do ash'aar se mutaliq kuch khayalaat hen so pesh hen, ummeed hay k waja-e-naaraazgi na banen gay...

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baa.t dil kee maa.n lee hy jub main ney....
hAq mohabbat kaa chuKaa lun toh chaluN

mandarja-baala sher k pehlay misra men "jub main ney (212)" ki "main (1)" ki adaaigi giraaN guzarti hay... aap chaahen tu isay "main ne jub (212)" bhi ker sakti hen..
..........

ab koyee waadaa waFaa karnaa na tum
sab Ahad dil se miTaa luN toh chaluN...

mandarja-bala sher k doosray misra men "Ahad" ka talaffuz aap ne durst nahi baandhaa hay... aap chaahen tu "sab ahad (221)" ko "Ahd sab (212)" ker sakti hen...
............

naacheez ki gustaakhi muaaf farmaiyay ga...

ghazal per aik baar phir bharpoor daad k saath

dua-go
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bohat shuqria aa.p sabhee kaa ,
parwaaz g bohat shuqria aapke jawaban alfaz kaa,
vb gee bohat shuqria aapki tawaja or tym dene ko,
aa.p sabhee khush or salamt raheN
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2014, 11:22:42 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
ek rau ke saath dheron daaaaaaad laaiba ji
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2014, 12:50:56 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 16, 2014, 04:57:07 PM

aa.g paanee meN laGaa lun toh chaluN
DaR.d koh dil meN baSaa lun toh chaluN

 
dil ke chehrey par hein gham kee silvaten
maslahat mein sab chuPaa lun toh chaluN..


ab kisee bhee mou.d per milnaa nahiN
roo.h aur dil koh bataa lun toh chaluN...

 
baa.t dil kee maa.n lee hy jub main ney....
hAq mohabbat kaa chuKaa lun toh chaluN

  
ab koyee waadaa waFaa karnaa na tum
sab Ahad dil se miTaa luN toh chaluN...

laf.z meiRey ghumzada reh jaayen geN...
aaKhRee khat  bhee jaLaa lun toh chaluN

Laaibaa shah


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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2014, 03:09:51 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 16, 2014, 04:57:07 PM

aa.g paanee meN laGaa lun toh chaluN
DaR.d koh dil meN baSaa lun toh chaluN

 
dil ke chehrey par hein gham kee silvaten
maslahat mein sab chuPaa lun toh chaluN..


ab kisee bhee mou.d per milnaa nahiN
roo.h aur dil koh bataa lun toh chaluN...

 
baa.t dil kee maa.n lee hy jub main ney....
hAq mohabbat kaa chuKaa lun toh chaluN

 
ab koyee waadaa waFaa karnaa na tum
sab Ahad dil se miTaa luN toh chaluN...

laf.z meiRey ghumzada reh jaayen geN...
aaKhRee khat  bhee jaLaa lun toh chaluN

Laaibaa shah
waah waah bohut umda ghazal hai laaiba jee.

Pur dard purasar .

Dheron daad ek Rau bhi saath .
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