Aalam-e-Tanhai....."Sahal"

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              Aalam-e-Tanhai....."Sahal"

Unki mehrbani bhi hai aur nazar-e-karam bhi hai,
Paas thode khushiyaan bhi hain,thode gham bhi hain.

Saleeqa jeene ka sikha hi diya waqt ne humko saahib ,
Honton pe muskan bhi hai aur ye aankhein nam bhi hain.

Daur wo bhi guzar gaya hai ,daur ye bhi guzar jayega,
Yaaron ki mehfil thi kabhi aaj tanhaai ka alam bhi hai.

Kaun si fitrat se tujhe main apnaon samjh me nahi aata,
wafa mein teri jaana ulfat bhi aur zulm-o-sitam bhi hai.

Mukhtalif lage mujhe Guftugu teri din-ba-din ishq mein,
Lehja ye tera khud zakhm bhi hai to khud marham bhi hai.

Hurf  milta nahi lafz banta nahi jane kyun “Sahal” warna,
Likhne ko ghazal paas apne kaghaz bhi aur kalam bhi hai.
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2013, 02:55:10 PM »
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Daur wo bhi guzar gaya hai ,daur ye bhi guzar jayega,
Yaaron ki mehfil thi kabhi aaj tanhaai ka alam bhi hai

Bahut khoob Sahal jee
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2013, 03:15:29 PM »
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Daur wo bhi guzar gaya hai ,daur ye bhi guzar jayega,
Yaaron ki mehfil thi kabhi aaj tanhaai ka alam bhi hai

Bahut khoob Sahal jee
Thankyou ! MKV ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2013, 03:28:01 PM »
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kya baat hai kya baat hai,,,, bahot khoob, sidhi sadhi pur asar ghazal rahi Sahal bhai - bas daaad hi daaad aur waaah hi waaaaaah...
Hurf  milta nahi lafz banta nahi jane kyun “Sahal” warna,
Likhne ko ghazal paas apne kaghaz bhi aur kalam bhi hai.
is sher par to main lut gaya Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2013, 03:30:30 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2013, 03:31:51 PM »
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kya baat hai kya baat hai,,,, bahot khoob, sidhi sadhi pur asar ghazal rahi Sahal bhai - bas daaad hi daaad aur waaah hi waaaaaah...
Hurf  milta nahi lafz banta nahi jane kyun “Sahal” warna,
Likhne ko ghazal paas apne kaghaz bhi aur kalam bhi hai.
is sher par to main lut gaya Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah kya baat hai! aaj to tareefon ke flyover banre hai iqtedar bhai,

bohut bohut shukriya  nawaazish ,,apne waqt nikal kar padha aur ise
aur khoobsurat bana diya ...

Thankyou !
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2013, 03:32:28 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
Thankyou ! Dr. sahab
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2013, 03:38:53 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on September 26, 2013, 03:31:51 PM
waah kya baat hai! aaj to tareefon ke flyover banre hai iqtedar bhai,

bohut bohut shukriya  nawaazish ,,apne waqt nikal kar padha aur ise
aur khoobsurat bana diya ...

Thankyou !
Aesi baat nahi hai bhai... ye ghazal hai hi itni achi aur simple zuban may ke padhte hi dil dimagh par chap chod jaye... warna kabhi kabhi alfaaz itne mushkil hote hain ke sher ko padh kar samajhna sher ka saamna karne ke barabar hota hai Usual Smile
phir ek baar - ye ghazal aapki mujhe bahot achi lagi Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2013, 04:46:48 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on September 26, 2013, 02:29:55 PM


              Aalam-e-Tanhai....."Sahal"

Unki mehrbani bhi hai aur nazar-e-karam bhi hai,
Paas thode khushiyaan bhi hai,thode gham bhi hai.

Kya baat hai....

Saleeqa jeene ka sikha hi diya waqt ne humko saahib ,
Honton pe muskan bhi hai aur ye aankhein nam bhi hai.

Yeh bhi khoooooooob raha sahal.........

Daur wo bhi guzar gaya hai ,daur ye bhi guzar jayega,
Yaaron ki mehfil thi kabhi aaj tanhaai ka alam bhi hai.

Bahut khoooooooooob............

Kaun si fitrat se tujhe main apnaon samjh me nahi aata,
wafa mein teri jaana ulfat bhi aur zulm-o-sitam bhi hai.

Is sher ke liye ek rau.....

Mukhtalif lage mujhe Guftugu teri din-ba-din ishq mein,
Lehja ye tera khud zakhm bhi hai to khud marham bhi hai.

Behad khooooooob.........

Hurf  milta nahi lafz banta nahi jane kyun “Sahal” warna,
Likhne ko ghazal paas apne kaghaz bhi aur kalam bhi hai.

waaaaaaaaaaaaah.....

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Bahut khoooooooooob sahal mujhe tumhari yeh ghazal behad pasand aayi.. har sher khooooooob hai.. hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaad  daaaaaaaaaaad  daaaaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #9 on: September 26, 2013, 05:26:09 PM »
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Sahal saheb , Bahut khubsurat ghazal kahi hai ,
sabhi sher bahut pyaare  hain .  Tah e dil se
mubarakbaad .
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«Reply #10 on: September 26, 2013, 05:45:45 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2013, 06:08:06 PM »
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Aesi baat nahi hai bhai... ye ghazal hai hi itni achi aur simple zuban may ke padhte hi dil dimagh par chap chod jaye... warna kabhi kabhi alfaaz itne mushkil hote hain ke sher ko padh kar samajhna sher ka saamna karne ke barabar hota hai Usual Smile
phir ek baar - ye ghazal aapki mujhe bahot achi lagi Usual Smile
ye qubool karte hain apki baat sar aankhon per , iqtedar bhai ,

bohut bohut shukriya ,jazakAllah,

tareef us RAB ki jis ne is qabil banaya hai.

appreciated
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2013, 06:15:11 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoooooooooob sahal mujhe tumhari yeh ghazal behad pasand aayi.. har sher khooooooob hai.. hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaad  daaaaaaaaaaad  daaaaaaaaaad..

bohut bohut shukriya Aqsh ji ,
ap logon ki hosla afzai se likhne ka jazba milta hai,
mere khamiyon ko nazar andaaz karke ise saraha apne ,
bohut shukriya ...
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2013, 06:18:56 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 26, 2013, 05:26:09 PM
Sahal saheb , Bahut khubsurat ghazal kahi hai ,
sabhi sher bahut pyaare  hain .  Tah e dil se
mubarakbaad .
Hasab sahab ,apne waqt nikal ise padha ,
aur hosla afzai ke liye tah e dil se mashkoor hun,
apki mubarakbaad qubool karta hun.
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2013, 06:25:28 PM »
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Quote from: Miraj. on September 26, 2013, 05:45:45 PM
Bahut bahut khoob........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thankyou ! miraj ...appreciated.
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