Aalam-e-Tanhai....."Sahal"

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«Reply #15 on: September 26, 2013, 07:14:47 PM »
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«Reply #16 on: September 26, 2013, 07:57:50 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on September 26, 2013, 02:29:55 PM


              Aalam-e-Tanhai....."Sahal"

Unki mehrbani bhi hai aur nazar-e-karam bhi hai,
Paas thode khushiyaan bhi hain,thode gham bhi hain.

Saleeqa jeene ka sikha hi diya waqt ne humko saahib ,
Honton pe muskan bhi hai aur ye aankhein nam bhi hain.

Daur wo bhi guzar gaya hai ,daur ye bhi guzar jayega,
Yaaron ki mehfil thi kabhi aaj tanhaai ka alam bhi hai.

Kaun si fitrat se tujhe main apnaon samjh me nahi aata,
wafa mein teri jaana ulfat bhi aur zulm-o-sitam bhi hai.

Mukhtalif lage mujhe Guftugu teri din-ba-din ishq mein,
Lehja ye tera khud zakhm bhi hai to khud marham bhi hai.

Hurf  milta nahi lafz banta nahi jane kyun “Sahal” warna,
Likhne ko ghazal paas apne kaghaz bhi aur kalam bhi hai.


nice,sir.correct the highlighted if you can since instead of hai there will be hain.
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«Reply #17 on: September 26, 2013, 11:02:01 PM »
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              Aalam-e-Tanhai....."Sahal"

Unki mehrbani bhi hai aur nazar-e-karam bhi hai,
Paas thode khushiyaan bhi hain,thode gham bhi hain.

Saleeqa jeene ka sikha hi diya waqt ne humko saahib ,
Honton pe muskan bhi hai aur ye aankhein nam bhi hain.

Daur wo bhi guzar gaya hai ,daur ye bhi guzar jayega,
Yaaron ki mehfil thi kabhi aaj tanhaai ka alam bhi hai.

Kaun si fitrat se tujhe main apnaon samjh me nahi aata,
wafa mein teri jaana ulfat bhi aur zulm-o-sitam bhi hai.

Mukhtalif lage mujhe Guftugu teri din-ba-din ishq mein,
Lehja ye tera khud zakhm bhi hai to khud marham bhi hai.

Hurf  milta nahi lafz banta nahi jane kyun “Sahal” warna,
Likhne ko ghazal paas apne kaghaz bhi aur kalam bhi hai.

Bahot achha hai.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: September 26, 2013, 11:54:02 PM »
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waah  ! kyaa kahen Sahal ji hum iski taarif mein, khoobsoorat jasbaat, aur utni hi khoobsoorat bayaani, ek ek shabd jaise jaadu saa ghol rahaa ho, doob gayaa aapke is rachna ke nashe mein, ek baar padhaa, do baar padhaa, fir kai baar padhaa, aur jitni baar padhaa mazaa badhtaa gayaa, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai, sach mein bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne, isliye bas.........

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«Reply #19 on: September 27, 2013, 12:25:12 AM »
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Waah waah waah khoobsurat ghazal Sahal ji .....waqai lutf aaya parhkar ...., dheron daad
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«Reply #20 on: September 27, 2013, 01:16:48 AM »
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Bahut Khub Sahal Ji.
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«Reply #21 on: September 27, 2013, 02:07:28 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on September 26, 2013, 02:29:55 PM


              Aalam-e-Tanhai....."Sahal"

Unki mehrbani bhi hai aur nazar-e-karam bhi hai,
Paas thode khushiyaan bhi hain,thode gham bhi hain.

Saleeqa jeene ka sikha hi diya waqt ne humko saahib ,
Honton pe muskan bhi hai aur ye aankhein nam bhi hain.

Daur wo bhi guzar gaya hai ,daur ye bhi guzar jayega,
Yaaron ki mehfil thi kabhi aaj tanhaai ka alam bhi hai.

Kaun si fitrat se tujhe main apnaon samjh me nahi aata,
wafa mein teri jaana ulfat bhi aur zulm-o-sitam bhi hai.

Mukhtalif lage mujhe Guftugu teri din-ba-din ishq mein,
Lehja ye tera khud zakhm bhi hai to khud marham bhi hai.

Hurf  milta nahi lafz banta nahi jane kyun “Sahal” warna,
Likhne ko ghazal paas apne kaghaz bhi aur kalam bhi hai.

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bhut khub
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«Reply #22 on: September 27, 2013, 04:47:37 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on September 26, 2013, 02:29:55 PM


              Aalam-e-Tanhai....."Sahal"

Unki mehrbani bhi hai aur nazar-e-karam bhi hai,
Paas thode khushiyaan bhi hain,thode gham bhi hain.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Saleeqa jeene ka sikha hi diya waqt ne humko saahib ,
Honton pe muskan bhi hai aur ye aankhein nam bhi hain.
 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Daur wo bhi guzar gaya hai ,daur ye bhi guzar jayega,
Yaaron ki mehfil thi kabhi aaj tanhaai ka alam bhi hai.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kaun si fitrat se tujhe main apnaon samjh me nahi aata,
wafa mein teri jaana ulfat bhi aur zulm-o-sitam bhi hai.
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))confuse ho gaye ...na
Mukhtalif lage mujhe Guftugu teri din-ba-din ishq mein,
Lehja ye tera khud zakhm bhi hai to khud marham bhi hai.
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))complete puzzled ho gaye tum.isliye kaha aag se khelo ge jalaaye gi sahi istemaal karo ge to kaam aaye gi
Hurf  milta nahi lafz banta nahi jane kyun “Sahal” warna,
Likhne ko ghazal paas apne kaghaz bhi aur kalam bhi hai.
ye to qudrati den hai .isliye ghazal likhna chhodo koi aur kaam karo jis se do paise mil jaayein Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #23 on: September 28, 2013, 01:31:08 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 26, 2013, 07:57:50 PM
nice,sir.correct the highlighted if you can since instead of hai there will be hain.
Thankyou ! MB ji
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«Reply #24 on: September 28, 2013, 02:19:48 PM »
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Bahot achha hai.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: September 28, 2013, 03:01:26 PM »
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waah  ! kyaa kahen Sahal ji hum iski taarif mein, khoobsoorat jasbaat, aur utni hi khoobsoorat bayaani, ek ek shabd jaise jaadu saa ghol rahaa ho, doob gayaa aapke is rachna ke nashe mein, ek baar padhaa, do baar padhaa, fir kai baar padhaa, aur jitni baar padhaa mazaa badhtaa gayaa, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai, sach mein bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne, isliye bas.........

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!  Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
Alhamdulillah , Meri ye ghazal padhker aap logon khushi dekhker, mujhe likhne ka aur hosla mila hai,
Hriday ji apke comments dekher bohut khushi hui hai aur aankhein nam bhi hui hain, apne is waqt diya aur bar bar padhker ise kamyaab banaya hai,
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Quote from: sahal on September 28, 2013, 02:20:45 PM
Thankyou ! Saman ji
Frndship me no sorry and no thnku jii...
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«Reply #28 on: September 28, 2013, 03:18:50 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on September 28, 2013, 03:14:58 PM
Frndship me no sorry and no thnku jii...
thik hai jee nahi kehte . magar ye to mera rule hain
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Quote from: sahal on September 28, 2013, 03:18:50 PM
thik hai jee nahi kehte . magar ye to mera rule hain
Achha.. Usual Smile
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