aaNkh main ashkon kaa seilaa.b aayaa hai,..........

by laaiba on February 26, 2014, 02:45:28 AM
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ek ajab toofaaN zeii re aa.b aayaa hai
behre dil mein phir iztiraa.b aayaa hai,

too.t ker saahil se gale milli lehreiN
phr samandar seh kar ataa.b aayaa hai

chot kha ker ab tak sanbhal nahin paayaa
keisa toote dil par azaa.b aayaa hai,

aayi  jo yaaden  chand beete lamhon ki
aankh men ashkon ka seilaa.b aaya hai

jo hawaa ke hathon bheja uuse maine
aa.j uss khat kaa bhi jawaa.b aayaa hai

bhool ker jisko man nahin kabhee  bhoolee
yaad jaane kyon be hisaab aayaa hai

,laaiba shah,
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2014, 02:58:08 AM »
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ek ajab toofaaN zeii re aa.b aayaa hai
behre dil mein phir iztiraa.b aayaa hai,

too.t ker saahil se gale milli lehreiN
phr samandar seh kar ataa.b aayaa hai

chot kha ker ab tak sanbhal nahin paayaa
keisa toote dil par azaa.b aayaa hai,

aayi  jo yaaden  chand beete lamhon ki
aankh men ashkon ka seilaa.b aaya hai

jo hawaa ke hathon bheja uuse maine
aa.j uss khat kaa bhi jawaa.b aayaa hai

bhool ker jisko man nahin kabhee  bhoolee
yaad jaane kyon be hisaab aayaa hai

,laaiba shah,


Waah waah kya bat hai,,,,,,
Bahut khoob Laaiba Jee.
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2014, 03:03:58 AM »
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ek ajab toofaaN zeii re aa.b aayaa hai
behre dil mein phir iztiraa.b aayaa hai,

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too.t ker saahil se gale milli lehreiN
phr samandar seh kar ataa.b aayaa hai

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chot kha ker ab tak sanbhal nahin paayaa
keisa toote dil par azaa.b aayaa hai,

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aayi  jo yaaden  chand beete lamhon ki
aankh men ashkon ka seilaa.b aaya hai

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jo hawaa ke hathon bheja uuse maine
aa.j uss khat kaa bhi jawaa.b aayaa hai

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

bhool ker jisko man nahin kabhee  bhoolee
yaad jaane kyon be hisaab aayaa hai

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

,laaiba shah,


Waah Laaiba jee..Bahut achha hai..bahut hi achha hai..
Laajwab..Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2014, 03:22:52 AM »
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ek ajab toofaaN zeii re aa.b aayaa hai
behre dil mein phir iztiraa.b aayaa hai,

too.t ker saahil se gale milli lehreiN
phr samandar seh kar ataa.b aayaa hai

chot kha ker ab tak sanbhal nahin paayaa
keisa toote dil par azaa.b aayaa hai,

aayi  jo yaaden  chand beete lamhon ki
aankh men ashkon ka seilaa.b aaya hai

jo hawaa ke hathon bheja uuse maine
aa.j uss khat kaa bhi jawaa.b aayaa hai

bhool ker jisko man nahin kabhee  bhoolee
yaad jaane kyon be hisaab aayaa hai

,laaiba shah,



wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2014, 08:00:18 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2014, 08:44:46 AM »
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wonderful dheron daad rau ke saath
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2014, 09:52:44 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2014, 10:55:22 AM »
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ek ajab toofaaN zeii re aa.b aayaa hai
behre dil mein phir iztiraa.b aayaa hai,

chot kha ker ab tak sanbhal nahin paayaa
keisa toote dil par azaa.b aayaa hai,

aayi  jo yaaden  chand beete lamhon ki
aankh men ashkon ka seilaa.b aaya hai

bahut umdah Laaiba jee
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2014, 12:18:02 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat pesh kash hai , Laaiba ji . Tah e dil se mubarakbad.
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2014, 12:31:22 PM »
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too.t ker saahil se gale milli lehreiN
phr samandar seh kar ataa.b aayaa hai

chot kha ker ab tak sanbhal nahin paayaa
keisa toote dil par azaa.b aayaa hai,

bahut khubsoorat....behtareen kalam hai Laaiba ji..dili mubarakbad pesh hai.
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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2014, 02:47:16 PM »
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वाह...वाह....बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल....ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद....

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«Reply #11 on: February 26, 2014, 04:27:54 PM »
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aayi  jo yaaden  chand beete lamhon ki
aankh men ashkon ka seilaa.b aaya hai

jo hawaa ke hathon bheja uuse maine
aa.j uss khat kaa bhi jawaa.b aayaa hai

bhool ker jisko man nahin kabhee  bhoolee
yaad jaane kyon be hisaab aayaa hai


Lajawaab Ghazal. Mujhe yeh teen sher behad pasand aaye hain.

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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2014, 04:45:39 PM »
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ek ajab toofaaN zeii re aa.b aayaa hai
behre dil mein phir iztiraa.b aayaa hai,

too.t ker saahil se gale milli lehreiN
phr samandar seh kar ataa.b aayaa hai

chot kha ker ab tak sanbhal nahin paayaa
keisa toote dil par azaa.b aayaa hai,

aayi  jo yaaden  chand beete lamhon ki
aankh men ashkon ka seilaa.b aaya hai

jo hawaa ke hathon bheja uuse maine
aa.j uss khat kaa bhi jawaa.b aayaa hai

bhool ker jisko man nahin kabhee  bhoolee
yaad jaane kyon be hisaab aayaa hai

,laaiba shah,


Justttttt Beautiful Laaiba Jee..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab

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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2014, 05:36:52 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2014, 10:09:57 PM »
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ek ajab toofaaN zeii re aa.b aayaa hai
behre dil mein phir iztiraa.b aayaa hai,

too.t ker saahil se gale milli lehreiN
phr samandar seh kar ataa.b aayaa hai

chot kha ker ab tak sanbhal nahin paayaa
keisa toote dil par azaa.b aayaa hai,

aayi  jo yaaden  chand beete lamhon ki
aankh men ashkon ka seilaa.b aaya hai

jo hawaa ke hathon bheja uuse maine
aa.j uss khat kaa bhi jawaa.b aayaa hai

bhool ker jisko man nahin kabhee  bhoolee
yaad jaane kyon be hisaab aayaa hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause 

wah wah wah bohut hi umda umda
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