Aankhein hain jaise puraani sharaab.............................IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on August 14, 2012, 10:02:18 PM
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Tuloo’o  pe  hai  unka   ye  husn-o-shabaab
Chehra    hai     jaise      ke    khilta   gulaab

Dekh ke unki aankho.n mein chaaya suroor
Aankhei.n  hain     jaise    puraani   sharaab

Lams   se   inke     gulzaar     mera   chaman
Lab   hain   tere   ya    hain   warq-e-gulaab

Tanhaa   shahar     mein     na   jaaya   karo
Zamaana   aye   jaanam   bada  hai kharaab

Kar   chukaa    intezaar,   bahut    ‘Iftakhar’
Ab  to  aye    jaanam    hataa   do   naqaab



*Tuloo'o: Chadhaaw, charam
*Suroor: Nashaa/halka nashaa
*Lams: Touch, chuuan
*Gulzaar: Khila, hara bhara
*Warq-e-gulaab: Gulaab ke patto.n ki sheet
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2012, 10:55:42 PM »
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Tuloo’o  pe  hai  unka   ye  husn-o-shabaab
Chehra    hai     jaise      ke    khilta   gulaab

Dekh ke unki aankho.n mein chaaya suroor
Aankhei.n  hain     jaise    puraani   sharaab

Lams   se   inke     gulzaar     mera   chaman
Lab   hain   tere   ya    hain   warq-e-gulaab

Tanhaa   shahar     mein     na   jaaya   karo
Zamaana   aye   jaanam   bada  hai kharaab

Kar   chukaa    intezaar,   bahut    ‘Iftakhar’
Ab  to  aye    jaanam    hataa   do   naqaab



*Tuloo'o: Chadhaaw, charam
*Suroor: Nashaa/halka nashaa
*Lams: Touch, chuuan
*Gulzaar: Khila, hara bhara
*Warq-e-gulaab: Gulaab ke patto.n ki sheet



gud one---------I.A
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2012, 12:47:28 AM »
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boht khub ahmed sahab
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Tuloo’o  pe  hai  unka   ye  husn-o-shabaab
Chehra    hai     jaise      ke    khilta   gulaab

Dekh ke unki aankho.n mein chaaya suroor
Aankhei.n  hain     jaise    puraani   sharaab

Lams   se   inke     gulzaar     mera   chaman
Lab   hain   tere   ya    hain   warq-e-gulaab

Tanhaa   shahar     mein     na   jaaya   karo
Zamaana   aye   jaanam   bada  hai kharaab

Kar   chukaa    intezaar,   bahut    ‘Iftakhar’
Ab  to  aye    jaanam    hataa   do   naqaab



*Tuloo'o: Chadhaaw, charam
*Suroor: Nashaa/halka nashaa
*Lams: Touch, chuuan
*Gulzaar: Khila, hara bhara
*Warq-e-gulaab: Gulaab ke patto.n ki sheet

Bahut bahut khoob itikhar ji kya madhosi bhari gazal likhi hai apne  dheron daad qabool kariye
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2012, 12:56:55 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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Bahut Khub Iftakhar Ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2012, 08:38:58 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob iftakhar ji... Usual Smile
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 14, 2012, 10:55:42 PM

gud one---------I.A
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boht khub ahmed sahab
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2012, 10:14:24 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob, ek dum zabardasssstttt likha hai aapne Iftakhar ji....!!!
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bohut khoob ahmed bhai , bohut umda, mubarak bad qubool kareN
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Bahut bahut khoob itikhar ji kya madhosi bhari gazal likhi hai apne  dheron daad qabool kariye
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Shukriya Pankaj bhai.
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waah waah bahut khoob
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