Aankhen kya huee bandh, koi sooraj nigal gaya

by livingbytheday on June 14, 2012, 04:19:00 PM
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Aankhen kya huee bandh, koi sooraj nigal gaya
Din bhi raat odhkar andhere mein dhal gaya

Kagaz ki naaw dekh kar, baarish ke paani mein
Bachpan ke  jaise kuch mere  dil mein uchal gaya

Andhere mein jo  diya kabhi  roshan hua kahin
Bacche kitaab padhne lage sab kuch badal gaya

Qismet ki bewafaai ke shikaar hum bhi hain
Kashti ko chod aaye toh toofan tal gaya

Insaan hum pehle nahi, hain hindu, musalman
Rago mein magar khoon kyu ek rang chal gaya

Jo na kehna chahtey tey, wo bhi keh gaye
Chubhkar rahega teer jo kamaan se nikal gaya
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2012, 04:41:33 PM »
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bahut badhiya lajawab.... dhero daad .... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2012, 03:26:07 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2012, 04:37:50 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2012, 12:19:25 PM »
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Aadaab Janab!

bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade hi khoobsurat khayaalat
aur umdaa ahsaas bayaaN kiye hai... kafi achche ashaar rahe..

Is khoobsurat kalaam par hamuari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise hi kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2012, 02:16:12 PM »
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Jabardast gazal.
Aapki gazal ki jitni tareef kee jaye utni kam hee hoogi.
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2012, 05:05:09 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 14, 2012, 04:41:33 PM
bahut badhiya lajawab.... dhero daad .... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you sir
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2012, 05:05:49 PM »
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Quote from: kamlesh.yadav001 on June 15, 2012, 03:26:07 AM
nice

thank you sir
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2012, 05:07:37 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 15, 2012, 04:37:50 AM
waah waah bahut khoob dheron daad aur ek rau

thank you sir apke housley se iraada badhta hain
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2012, 05:08:53 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 15, 2012, 12:19:25 PM
Aadaab Janab!

bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade hi khoobsurat khayaalat
aur umdaa ahsaas bayaaN kiye hai... kafi achche ashaar rahe..

Is khoobsurat kalaam par hamuari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise hi kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


thank you sir for kind words
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2012, 05:09:38 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on June 15, 2012, 02:16:12 PM
Jabardast gazal.
Aapki gazal ki jitni tareef kee jaye utni kam hee hoogi.


thank you sir
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2012, 08:55:31 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on June 14, 2012, 04:19:00 PM
Aankhen kya huee bandh, koi sooraj nigal gaya
Din bhi raat odhkar andhere mein dhal gaya

Kagaz ki naaw dekh kar, baarish ke paani mein
Bachpan ke  jaise kuch mere  dil mein uchal gaya

Andhere mein jo  diya kabhi  roshan hua kahin
Bacche kitaab padhne lage sab kuch badal gaya

Qismet ki bewafaai ke shikaar hum bhi hain
Kashti ko chod aaye toh toofan tal gaya

Insaan hum pehle nahi, hain hindu, musalman
Rago mein magar khoon kyu ek rang chal gaya

Jo na kehna chahtey tey, wo bhi keh gaye
Chubhkar rahega teer jo kamaan se nikal gaya



Andhi sukho ki barish muhabto ki, ya khuda zami par dai shayro ko.
Sushil Bansal (Sheel Didi)
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«Reply #12 on: July 23, 2012, 08:58:15 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on June 14, 2012, 04:19:00 PM
Aankhen kya huee bandh, koi sooraj nigal gaya
Din bhi raat odhkar andhere mein dhal gaya

Kagaz ki naaw dekh kar, baarish ke paani mein
Bachpan ke  jaise kuch mere  dil mein uchal gaya

Andhere mein jo  diya kabhi  roshan hua kahin
Bacche kitaab padhne lage sab kuch badal gaya

Qismet ki bewafaai ke shikaar hum bhi hain
Kashti ko chod aaye toh toofan tal gaya

Insaan hum pehle nahi, hain hindu, musalman
Rago mein magar khoon kyu ek rang chal gaya

Jo na kehna chahtey tey, wo bhi keh gaye
Chubhkar rahega teer jo kamaan se nikal gaya



bahut bahut umda gazal lilkhi hai LBD ji dheron daad aur mubarakbaad qabool kariye meri taraf se...
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«Reply #13 on: July 23, 2012, 02:47:20 PM »
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Quote from: sushilbansal on July 23, 2012, 08:55:31 AM
Andhi sukho ki barish muhabto ki, ya khuda zami par dai shayro ko.
Sushil Bansal (Sheel Didi)

waah waah, bahut khoob
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