AANKHON MEIN ABB NAMI NAHI HOTI ................HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: March 11, 2012, 07:52:13 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah waah...bahut khoob...
kya hahne..maza aa gaya..

Dosti mausami naheeN hoti...laajwaab

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #16 on: March 11, 2012, 01:00:16 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Janaab Hasan Saheb...

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab
Bahut  bahut  shukriya , Shihab  saheb .
Aap  bhi  shaad o abaad rahein . Duago ,Hasan
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«Reply #17 on: March 11, 2012, 01:06:35 PM »
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AankhoN   meiN  abb   nami   naheeN   hoti  ,
Kaifiyat   shabnami   naheeN   hoti
dard sahne ki gar aadad ho jaaye to aisa hi hota hai. khoob kaha Applause Applause Applause
Aazmaaye   Tabeeb - e - Dil   saare  ,
Dard - e - Dil   meiN   kami   naheeN   hoti
wah wah. kis doctor ko dikhaya hai iss namurad dil ko ji Laughing hard Laughing hard
Aur   rahte   zara   Woh   pahloo   meiN  ,
Gar   yeh   Baarish   thami   naheeN   hoti
kaisi kaisi khawahish rakhte hai log dekho to Giggle Giggle
Baat   karte   jo   saaf   dil   say   Tum  ,
Lahje   meiN   Barhami   naheeN   hoti
bahut bahut bahut khoob.......! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Achha   hota   agar   yeh   Khud - gharzi  ,
Khaslat - e - Aadmi   naheeN   hoti
phir to sabhi farishte ho jaate hun Usual Smile Usual Smile
Karna   hai   to   sada   nibhao   bhee  ,
Dosti   mausami   naheeN   hoti
kya khoob kaha hai hasan sahab Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Koi   hastee   bajuzz   Khuda   ke  'Hasan'  ,
Baa-khuda    Daaimi   naheeN   hoti
haqeeqt hai








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Kaifiyat=condition  ;  Tabeeb - dil = Heart-specialist(doctor) ; Barhami = Anger/arrogance
Khaslat = Nature ; Bajuzz = Except ;Daaimi = Perpetual/Eternal/Immortal ; Baakhuda = By God

bahut khoob........!
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«Reply #18 on: March 11, 2012, 01:46:10 PM »
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Siddiqui sahaab aadaab!

Janab itni deri se aapki kalaam par aana hua uske liye mazarrat
chahate haiN ... Usual Smile
aik to waqt ki kami aur dusra yeH trafik ke kia padheN
aur kis par reply kareN yeh bhi samaj nahi aata sad5

Khair behad achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile
sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janaab... par aapki woh dhaar
woh alag pan nazar nahi aaya...

ummid hai aagaami kalaamoN meiN wohi baat nazar aaye... Usual Smile

aate rahiye... likhte rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
khuda hafez... Usual Smile



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«Reply #19 on: March 12, 2012, 09:48:46 AM »
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Applause Applause waah waah bahut khoob ek behtreen kalaam jis par dheron daad
Saini  saheb , Adab . Bahut  mashkoor  
hoon  ki  aap  ne  ghazal pasand  ki  aur  
naacheez  ki  hausla  afzai  ki .  Abb  
inshaallah  jaldi  jaldi baat  hoti  rahegi .
                            Duago , Hasan

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«Reply #20 on: March 12, 2012, 10:47:01 AM »
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"AankhoN   meiN  abb   nami   naheeN   hoti  ,
 Kaifiyat   shabnami   naheeN   hoti"
      *                      *                    *
"Aur   rahte   zara   Woh   pahloo   meiN  ,
 Gar   yeh   Baarish   thami   naheeN   hoti"
      *                       *                   * 
"Koi   hastee   bajuzz   Khuda   ke  'Hasan'  ,
 Baa-khuda    Daaimi   naheeN   hoti "
      *                        *                   *   
 Applause Applause Applause
बहुत अच्छे ख्याल | बहुत अच्छी ग़ज़ल | होली की शुभकामनायें |
-अरुण मिश्र.   

Arun  ji ,  Bahut  shukriya .  Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #21 on: March 13, 2012, 08:48:46 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Adil saheb ,Thhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaannnnnnnnnnnkkkkkkkkkkssssssssss a lot !
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«Reply #22 on: March 13, 2012, 03:43:41 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah! Hasan saheb Kya khoob kaha hai, Dosti mausami nahin hoti.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Ushaji,Ghazal pasand karne aur hausla afzai
ke liye bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #23 on: March 13, 2012, 07:04:48 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah waah...bahut khoob...
kya hahne..maza aa gaya..

Dosti mausami naheeN hoti...laajwaab

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Satish ji . Aap  ka  bahut  bahut  shukriya . Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #24 on: March 14, 2012, 08:47:48 AM »
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bahut khoob........!
Ash'aar  se  zyada   khoobsurat  tabsiron  
ke  liye  shukriya . Khush  rahiye , Hasan
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«Reply #25 on: March 14, 2012, 12:06:49 PM »
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Siddiqui sahaab aadaab!

Janab itni deri se aapki kalaam par aana hua uske liye mazarrat
chahate haiN ... Usual Smile
aik to waqt ki kami aur dusra yeH trafik ke kia padheN
aur kis par reply kareN yeh bhi samaj nahi aata sad5

Khair behad achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile
sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janaab... par aapki woh dhaar
woh alag pan nazar nahi aaya...

ummid hai aagaami kalaamoN meiN wohi baat nazar aaye... Usual Smile

aate rahiye... likhte rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
khuda hafez... Usual Smile




 Bahut shukriya , Parwaaz  saheb . Aap  waqt  nikaal
kar  apni  raai  de  dete   hain  ,  bahut   mashkoor  hoon.
Waqai  traffic  to khoob  badhi  hai  lekin  yeh Yoindia Shayariadab
ke  liye  eik  khush  aayend  baat  hai .  Zyada  se zyada   log is
bazm  mein  shareek  hon  aur   purwiqaar tareeqe  se  hon  to
is  ki  raunaq  barhegi . Aap  ka  eik   baar phir  shukriya . Hasan


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«Reply #26 on: April 30, 2012, 06:55:33 AM »
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Congratulations..

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«Reply #27 on: May 02, 2012, 05:06:30 PM »
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Thanks ,  iAdmin ji .
Congratulations..

This work has been featured in Yoindia Shayariadab April 2012 newsletter. You may read more about it HERE.


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«Reply #28 on: June 11, 2012, 04:11:08 AM »
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waah waah very nice ghazal
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«Reply #29 on: June 11, 2012, 05:24:20 AM »
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Baat kertey jo saaf dil se tum....
Kya baat hai janaab... wah
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