Aankhon Ne Kah Diya Jo Kabhi Kah Na Paaye Lab........Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: September 16, 2011, 05:46:21 AM »
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बहुत अच्छी गज़ल लिखी है सतीश जी,,,,
सरफिरा जी ने जैसे कहा कि अक्षर छोटे
होने चाहिये,,,ठीक ही कहा है,,,लिखते रहिये...!!!

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«Reply #16 on: September 16, 2011, 05:50:48 AM »
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बहुत अच्छी गज़ल लिखी है सतीश जी,,,,
सरफिरा जी ने जैसे कहा कि अक्षर छोटे होने चाहिये,,,
ठीक ही कहा है,,,लिखते रहिये,,,,

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«Reply #17 on: September 16, 2011, 08:27:29 AM »
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Khamosh_Aawaaz Ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur jawab dene ka
bahut bahut shukriya...

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«Reply #18 on: September 16, 2011, 10:54:15 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya....yoon to
tamaam reply aur comments padhta hoon par aapki
baat hee kuchh aur hai....Ghalib Sahab ki tarah..

......kahte hain ki Ghalib ka hai andaz e bayaan aur

Hamesha ek achchhi zameen ki talaash rahti hai,
jitna bhi waqt bacha pata hoon adab ki thodi bahut
khidmat kar leta hoon, kabhi kabhi gaib ki aamad
huee to do-chaar she'r ho jate hain.

Josh Malihabadi Sahab ka ek Maqta yaad aa raha
hai thodi der pahle hi kisi se is par baat ho
rahi thi..aap bhi lutf andoz honge..

"kisi ka is meN naheeN hai ghata, adab ka hai 'Josh' naqd sauda
 gada to paigambari milegee, sada to fir daavree milegi"
   
Hausal Aafzai ke liye ek baar phir se shukriya.

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«Reply #19 on: September 16, 2011, 12:11:27 PM »
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Rahim Sahab,

Bahut bahut shukriya, jawab dene aur
ghazal pasand karne ka.

Oopar waale ne bahut hi nayaab chees ata
ki hai bashar ko aur woh hai fikra...kabhi
kabhi pakad men aa jate hain khayal aur sher
ho jata hai.

Hausala Aafzai ka ek baar fir se shukriya

Apna ek sher isee manzar par aapki nazra hai..

"yooN to dil-o-dimag meN aaye bahut khayal
 utre waraq pe chand hi ashaar ki tarah"

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«Reply #20 on: September 16, 2011, 12:36:03 PM »
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Satish Sahab
Apki ye gajal lajawaab hai. Gayki ke hisab se to iska kya kahna. Aap se mujhe bahut kuch seekhna hai. Parwaaz sahab ne bhi apki tareef ki hai. vo to ustaad hai is field ke.
Vah. vah..
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«Reply #21 on: September 17, 2011, 05:38:50 AM »
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Sarfira Ji,

Janmdin bahut bahut mubarak, jawab dene aur ghazal
pasand karne ka shukriya

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«Reply #22 on: September 17, 2011, 07:02:07 AM »
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usha rajesh ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriy.

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«Reply #23 on: September 17, 2011, 09:27:12 AM »
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Sanjeev Ji,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut
shukriy...

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«Reply #24 on: September 18, 2011, 05:05:15 AM »
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AVTAR RAYAT JI,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya..aapki farmaaish
par gaur karoonga.

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«Reply #25 on: September 18, 2011, 06:25:57 AM »
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mkv ji,

jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya..

kuchh naya karne ki koshish karta
rahta hoon..aur logon ki pratikriyaaon se
manobal dadhta hai..khud ek talib-e-ilm hoon
fir bhi aapke kisi kaam aa saka to khushnaseebi
hogi.

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«Reply #26 on: September 19, 2011, 07:27:31 AM »
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Satish sahab
Jo accha hai use accha hi kaha jayega. no. of views itself tell the story.
kabhi time mile to mere creations par gaur pharmaiyega. mujhe to is field ki abcd... bhi nahi malum.
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«Reply #27 on: September 19, 2011, 07:59:02 AM »
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mkv ji,

Shukriya Janab...aapki creations bhi jaldi
se jaldi padhoonga aur jawab dene ki koshish
karoonga.

All the best...

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«Reply #28 on: September 19, 2011, 08:16:31 AM »
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khubsyrat rachna satishji..
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«Reply #29 on: September 19, 2011, 09:26:41 AM »
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mann.mann ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya....

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