Aankhon Se Zubaan Tak Pahunche / आँखों से ज़ुबाँ तक पहुँचे.....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: January 31, 2014, 04:46:53 AM »
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बात हक़ की हो तो क्यों चन्द मकाँ तक पहुँचे
इस क़दर फैले की वह सारे जहाँ तक पहुँचे

Badi Hi Khubsoorat Baat Kahi Hai Sir Jee
Dil Se Daad Aur Rau Kabul Farmaayen.

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«Reply #16 on: January 31, 2014, 01:27:51 PM »
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Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka bahut shukriya ... Sunil Saral ji.... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #17 on: January 31, 2014, 03:28:48 PM »
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बात हक़ की हो तो क्यों चन्द मकाँ तक पहुँचे
इस क़दर फैले की वह सारे जहाँ तक पहुँचे

आँखों आँखों में हुआ करती हैं बातें अब तक
जाने कब गुफ़्तगू आँखों से ज़ुबाँ तक पहुँचे

गामज़न यूँ तो सभी जानिबे मंज़िल हैं मगर
ये अलग बात, कि अब कौन, कहाँ तक पहुँचे

लोग भी कहते हैं, है भी वो यक़ीनन मुज़रिम
इतना शातिर है, कोई कैसे गुमाँ तक पहुँचे
 
है तो मसरूफ़ बहुत क़त्ल की तफ्तीश में वह
यह ज़रूरी नहीं क़ातिल के निशाँ तक पहुँचे

वक़्त-बेवक़्त चली आती हैं यादें अब भी 
यह तसव्वुर लिए हम राज़े-निहाँ तक पहुँचे

दीनो मज़हब की न ताउम्र जिसे फ़िक्र रही 
आख़िर-ए-वक़्त में आवाज़े अज़ाँ तक पहुँचे

कुछ नहीं, कुछ नहीं औक़ात मेरी कुछ भी नहीं
रहमते हक़ के सहारे ही यहाँ तक पहुँचे

रेत के ज़र्रों में पानी का गुमाँ ले के 'रक़ीब'
तिश्नालब कैसे भला आबे-रवाँ तक पहुँचे

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Satish ji,Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.Aik RAU ke saath dili daad qabool kijiye.

Bahut bahut shukriya...Sudhir Ashq Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #18 on: January 31, 2014, 06:11:00 PM »
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Waah waah waah , Satish ji . Kya khubsurat ghazal kahi hai . Eik murassa ghazal . Har sher bahut shandaar hai , kis kis ki tareef karun . Lekin yeh ashaar bahut khoob lage . Aise hi khubsurat ashaar ke majmuay ko ghazal kahte hain.Tah e dil se daad aur mubarakbaad.

गामज़न यूँ तो सभी जानिबे मंज़िल हैं मगर
ये अलग बात, कि अब कौन, कहाँ तक पहुँचे

दीनो मज़हब की न ताउम्र जिसे फ़िक्र रही 
आख़िर-ए-वक़्त में आवाज़े अज़ाँ तक पहुँचे

कुछ नहीं, कुछ नहीं औक़ात मेरी कुछ भी नहीं
रहमते हक़ के सहारे ही यहाँ तक पहुँचे

रेत के ज़र्रों में पानी का गुमाँ ले के 'रक़ीब'
तिश्नालब कैसे भला आबे-रवाँ तक पहुँचे



Hasan Sahab,
            Aadaab !

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut
shukriya....

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #19 on: January 31, 2014, 07:48:35 PM »
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Bahut khub.

Bahut shukriya....Advo. RavinderaRavi Ji......Raqeeb
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«Reply #20 on: February 01, 2014, 12:52:33 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SHUKLA JI
ACHCHHA LIKHATE HAIN AAP
WAH WAH

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«Reply #21 on: February 01, 2014, 02:17:06 AM »
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dil khush ho gaya jaise main ne ye ghazal nahin padhi MAIN NE APNE PASAND KI ICE-CREAM BASKINROBIN KI BUTTER SCOTCH khaai hai. wah hi wah kya kahne satish ji aap ka rau due hai 15 hrs ke baad inshaallah doon gi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!


rau de diya satish ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #22 on: February 02, 2014, 12:57:44 PM »
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Satish ji bas waaaaaaaaaaaaaah hi waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah nikal raha hai... tareef ke liye alfaaz nahin aapki is peshkash ke liye... hazaron hazaron daad qubool kare..


Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Aqsh Sahab....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #23 on: February 02, 2014, 01:46:14 PM »
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Bahut shukriya....dksaxenabsnl Ji....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #24 on: February 02, 2014, 03:00:40 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Sir
maza aa gaya
eik se badhkar eik ashaar

Kuch naheen..kuch naheen..is sher ki adaaygi pe bahot si daad


Bahut shukriya Mukesh Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #25 on: February 03, 2014, 03:50:14 PM »
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लोग भी कहते हैं, है भी वो यक़ीनन मुज़रिम
इतना शातिर है, कोई कैसे गुमाँ तक पहुँचे
 Applause Applause Applause

Nazare inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Ram Saraswat Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #26 on: February 03, 2014, 07:09:09 PM »
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bahut khoob

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya.....Bansi Dhameja JI.......Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #27 on: February 03, 2014, 08:02:27 PM »
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bahut khoob

Bahut shukriya.....nandbahu ji....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #28 on: February 03, 2014, 09:08:12 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही उम्दा, बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल....हर एक आशार एक से बढ़कर एक......ढेरों ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद कुबूल करें शुक्ला जी.....

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Bahut bahut shukriya Amit Ji....mujhe bahut sharmindagi mahsoos hoti hai ki main aap sab ke kalaam na to padh pata hoon na apni pratikriya hi de pata hoon fir bhi aap sab ki mohabbaten kam naheen hueen.. Raqeeb Lucknowi

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«Reply #29 on: February 04, 2014, 04:31:03 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah khoobsoorat ghazal sir, khaas taur pe ye ashaar bahut pasand aaye:

deeno mazhab ki na taaumra jise fiqr haree
aakhir-e-waqt meN aawaaze azaaN tak pahuNche
 
kuchh naheeN, kuchh naheeN auqaat meri khuchh bhi naheeN
rahmate haq ke sahaarey hi yahaaN tak pahuNche

DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se qubool kareN.


Bahut shukriya.....Iftakhar Ahmad Sahab...Raqeeb Lucknowi
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