Aao ke wo khat saare Hum jala ke Ro lenge ( Qadeertoopchi )

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Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,Meri eak adna si khaawish ap hazrat ki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge


Din ke hum ujalon me chup chupa ke ro lenge
Raat ke andheron me dil jala ke ro lenge

Ro ke tone jo likhe parh ke jinko mai roya
Aao ke wo khat saare hum jala ke ro lenge

Mahefilon me aaye ho saare gham bhula hi do
Ap hum akele me kahe suna ke ro lenge

Jal rahe hain jo apni yaad ke diye ab tak
Aao saat me milkar sub bujha ke ro lenge

Ab talak jo raaz apne dil me rakh ke roye hain
Aaj unke aage hum sab bata ke ro lenge

Sun “qadeer” gar tujh ko gardishon ne ghera hai
Maa.N ke paas chalte hain sar jhuka ke ro lenge


Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2011, 12:06:10 PM »
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Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,Meri eak adna si khaawish ap hazrat ki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge


Din ke hum ujalon me chup chupa ke ro lenge
Raat ke andheron me dil jala ke ro lenge

Ro ke tone jo likhe parh ke jinko mai roya
Aao ke wo khat saare hum jala ke ro lenge

Mahefilon me aaye ho saare gham bhula hi do
Ap hum akele me kahe suna ke ro lenge

Jal rahe hain jo apni yaad ke diye ab tak
Aao saat me milkar sub bujha ke ro lenge

Ab talak jo raaz apne dil me rakh ke roye hain
Aaj unke aage hum sab bata ke ro lenge

Sun “qadeer” gar tujh ko gardishon ne ghera hai
Maa.N ke paas chalte hain sar jhuka ke ro lenge


Qadeertoopchi

Qadeer Bhai...Jaise Ke Aap jaante Ho Aap Mere Sabse Pasandida Shayaro mein Ek Ho..Aapki Lekhni Ke kya kehne..Aapki Tareef Karna to jaise suraj ko diya dikhaane wali baat Hai..

Bahut Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob

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"Sun "Qadeer" Gar Tujhko Gardishon ne Ghera Hai
Maa Ke Paas Chalte Hai Sar Jhuka Kar Ro Lenge

Kya Jazbaati Ashaar Hai Bhai...Hazaaro Daad iss Ashaar Par..

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«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2011, 12:59:33 PM »
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last aashar to behad hi lajawaab hain --
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«Reply #3 on: August 14, 2011, 01:13:46 PM »
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Ro ke tone jo likhe parh ke jinko mai roya
Aao ke wo khat saare hum jala ke ro lenge

Ab talak jo raaz apne dil me rakh ke roye hain
Aaj unke aage hum sab bata ke ro lenge

Sun “qadeer” gar tujh ko gardishon ne ghera hai
Maa.N ke paas chalte hain sar jhuka ke ro lenge


Qadeertoopchi
Kya baat hai Qadeer Sahab..
Ek mohobat si hogayi hai mujhe apke kalamon se..
Kya jazbaati ghazal kahi hai apne..  tearyeyed
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Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: August 14, 2011, 02:51:43 PM »
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Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,Meri eak adna si khaawish ap hazrat ki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge


Din ke hum ujalon me chup chupa ke ro lenge
Raat ke andheron me dil jala ke ro lenge

Ro ke tone jo likhe parh ke jinko mai roya
Aao ke wo khat saare hum jala ke ro lenge

Mahefilon me aaye ho saare gham bhula hi do
Ap hum akele me kahe suna ke ro lenge

Jal rahe hain jo apni yaad ke diye ab tak
Aao saat me milkar sub bujha ke ro lenge

Ab talak jo raaz apne dil me rakh ke roye hain
Aaj unke aage hum sab bata ke ro lenge



Sun “qadeer” gar tujh ko gardishon ne ghera hai
Maa.N ke paas chalte hain sar jhuka ke ro lenge


Waahhh.... Qadeer Sahab...

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bahut khoob...... Sare zazbaat aankhhon me aa gaye....

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«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2011, 05:34:12 PM »
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khoobsoorat ghaal hai,qadeer saheb.khaas taur se maqta to ghazab ka hai.mubarakbaad aur daad .Hasan
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«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2011, 07:00:10 PM »
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As Salaam walekum Bhaijaan Usual Smile

Waah Bhaijaan yakeen jaaniye aapki gazal ki posting
dekhkar hi dil ko behad khushi hoti hai Usual Smile

Behad dilkash pur asar pur noor gazal kahi
hai apne, aik aik ashaar kimti motiyoN se
bunaa hai.... Usual Smile

Dil se humari hazaaroN daad kabul kijiye Usual Smile         



Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,Meri eak adna si khaawish ap hazrat ki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge


Din ke hum ujalon me chup chupa ke ro lenge
Raat ke andheron me dil jala ke ro lenge

Kia baat Bhaijaan ... bahad dil ko lagne
wala matla kaha hai sad5         


Ro ke tone jo likhe parh ke jinko mai roya
Aao ke wo khat saare hum jala ke ro lenge

Bahut khoob bhaijaan ....           

Mahefilon me aaye ho saare gham bhula hi do
Ap hum akele me kahe suna ke ro lenge

Kia khub soch ka muzahera kia hai
aapne waah ... Usual Smile         


Jal rahe hain jo apni yaad ke diye ab tak
Aao saat me milkar sub bujha ke ro lenge

Achcha hai bhaijaan Usual Smile         

Ab talak jo raaz apne dil me rakh ke roye hain
Aaj unke aage hum sab bata ke ro lenge

Bahut khoob Bhaijaan daad Usual Smile         

Sun “qadeer” gar tujh ko gardishon ne ghera hai
Maa.N ke paas chalte hain sar jhuka ke ro lenge


Laa jawaab Maqta kaha hai Bhaijaan
behad umdaa daad daad daad Usual Smile         


Qadeertoopchi

Bhaijaan Dilse nikli daad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2011, 07:45:57 PM »
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Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,Meri eak adna si khaawish ap hazrat ki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge


Din ke hum ujalon me chup chupa ke ro lenge
Raat ke andheron me dil jala ke ro lenge

Ro ke tone jo likhe parh ke jinko mai roya
Aao ke wo khat saare hum jala ke ro lenge

Mahefilon me aaye ho saare gham bhula hi do
Ap hum akele me kahe suna ke ro lenge

Jal rahe hain jo apni yaad ke diye ab tak
Aao saat me milkar sub bujha ke ro lenge

Ab talak jo raaz apne dil me rakh ke roye hain
Aaj unke aage hum sab bata ke ro lenge

Sun “qadeer” gar tujh ko gardishon ne ghera hai
Maa.N ke paas chalte hain sar jhuka ke ro lenge


Qadeertoopchi

EXCELLENT.........QADEER SAHAB
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2011, 08:50:21 AM »
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Yaarane bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,Meri eak adna si khaawish ap hazrat ki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge


Din ke hum ujalon me chup chupa ke ro lenge
Raat ke andheron me dil jala ke ro lenge

Ro ke tone jo likhe parh ke jinko mai roya
Aao ke wo khat saare hum jala ke ro lenge

Mahefilon me aaye ho saare gham bhula hi do
Ap hum akele me kahe suna ke ro lenge

Jal rahe hain jo apni yaad ke diye ab tak
Aao saat me milkar sub bujha ke ro lenge

Ab talak jo raaz apne dil me rakh ke roye hain
Aaj unke aage hum sab bata ke ro lenge

Sun “qadeer” gar tujh ko gardishon ne ghera hai
Maa.N ke paas chalte hain sar jhuka ke ro lenge


Qadeertoopchi


kya hi khubsurat ghazal pesh kiya hai huzur . tarif ki mohtaaj nahin hai  aap ki ye alatarin peshkash
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