Aap aatey bhi naheen, ham ko bulaatey bhi naheen!

by abdbundeli on January 23, 2009, 11:33:04 AM
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Aap aatey bhi naheen, ham ko bulaatey bhi naheen!
Gungunaatey bhi naheen! Baam pai chhaatey bhi naheen!!

Kuchh to batlaaou, ki, kyaa ham sey huyee gustaakhee?
Muskuraatey bhi naheen! Bazm mein gaatey bhi naheen!!

Roo-b-roo paa key hamain, khairmaqdamee key liye,
Apney ahbaab ko, jaldee sey bulaatey bhi naheen!

Surkh, shabnam key chhuye, khil uthhtey gulaaboun-sey,
Mahmahaatey bhi naheen, haath hilaatey bhi naheen!

Guzar rahey hain zamaaney, duaa-salaam naheen!
Nigah uthhaatey naheen, wajh bataatey bhi naheen!!

Door sey hee, nazar, nazar mein samaan jaatee thee;
Aaj, ham kyaa kaheyn, woh aankh milaatey bhi naheen?

‘Abd’, woh chup hain, to, khaamosh hai duniyaa saaree!
Chashm pur-aab hain: woh ham ko sataatey bhi naheen!!

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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2009, 03:09:18 PM »
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Wah wah wah Abd ji... bahut accha likha hai aapne  Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2009, 07:51:23 PM »
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wah Bundeli, bahut hi khoob

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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2009, 01:44:29 AM »
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Wah Wah, Abd Ji  Applause
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Wah wah wah Abd ji... bahut accha likha hai aapne  Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, Roja ji!
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2009, 05:30:43 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 24, 2009, 07:51:23 PM
wah Bundeli, bahut hi khoob

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Thanks Jasbir!
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Quote from: Deepati on January 25, 2009, 01:44:29 AM
Wah Wah, Abd Ji  Applause
Thanks Deepati i!
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2009, 05:34:36 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 23, 2009, 11:33:04 AM
Aap aatey bhi naheen, ham ko bulaatey bhi naheen!
Gungunaatey bhi naheen! Baam pai chhaatey bhi naheen!!

Kuchh to batlaaou, ki, kyaa ham sey huyee gustaakhee?
Muskuraatey bhi naheen! Bazm mein gaatey bhi naheen!!

Roo-b-roo paa key hamain, khairmaqdamee key liye,
Apney ahbaab ko, jaldee sey bulaatey bhi naheen!

Surkh, shabnam key chhuye, khil uthhtey gulaaboun-sey,
Mahmahaatey bhi naheen, haath hilaatey bhi naheen!

Guzar rahey hain zamaaney, duaa-salaam naheen!
Nigah uthhaatey naheen, wajh bataatey bhi naheen!!

Door sey hee, nazar, nazar mein samaan jaatee thee;
Aaj, ham kyaa kaheyn, woh aankh milaatey bhi naheen?

‘Abd’, woh chup hain, to, khaamosh hai duniyaa saaree!
Chashm pur-aab hain: woh ham ko sataatey bhi naheen!!

                                        - abd bundeli


Wah Wah Abd Ji Subhan Allah Janab Dil khush ho gaya Is nayab ghazal ko padke !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe janab !!

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Wah Wah Abd Ji Subhan Allah Janab Dil khush ho gaya Is nayab ghazal ko padke !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
Thanks a lot, abdulqadeer ji, for your comments as well as for your good wishes! May HE also bless you with all what you desire!
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2009, 05:51:39 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 23, 2009, 11:33:04 AM
Aap aatey bhi naheen, ham ko bulaatey bhi naheen!
Gungunaatey bhi naheen! Baam pai chhaatey bhi naheen!!

Kuchh to batlaaou, ki, kyaa ham sey huyee gustaakhee?
Muskuraatey bhi naheen! Bazm mein gaatey bhi naheen!!

Roo-b-roo paa key hamain, khairmaqdamee key liye,
Apney ahbaab ko, jaldee sey bulaatey bhi naheen!

Surkh, shabnam key chhuye, khil uthhtey gulaaboun-sey,
Mahmahaatey bhi naheen, haath hilaatey bhi naheen!

Guzar rahey hain zamaaney, duaa-salaam naheen!
Nigah uthhaatey naheen, wajh bataatey bhi naheen!!

Door sey hee, nazar, nazar mein samaan jaatee thee;
Aaj, ham kyaa kaheyn, woh aankh milaatey bhi naheen?

‘Abd’, woh chup hain, to, khaamosh hai duniyaa saaree!
Chashm pur-aab hain: woh ham ko sataatey bhi naheen!!

                                        - abd bundeli


Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd ji..Itni Khoobsurti se aapne yeh Nazm likhi hai..bahut ache.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2009, 06:10:20 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Abd ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2009, 06:11:50 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 25, 2009, 05:51:39 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd ji..Itni Khoobsurti se aapne yeh Nazm likhi hai..bahut ache.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Ji! Mujhey khushee huyee ki aap jaisey Urdu key jaankaar ko yah pasand aayee!
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2009, 06:13:02 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 25, 2009, 06:10:20 AM
Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Abd ji
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Pooja ji!
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