AAP JUB SE MERE HUMSAFAR HO GAYE...Hasan

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Aap jub  se  mere  Humsafar  ho gaye ,
Raaste khud-bakhud Mukhtasar ho gaye

Sapne oonchi udaano.n ke  Sapne rahey ,
Saazisho.n kee nazar Baal-o-par ho gaye

Haq-bayaani  jo kee , Badgumaani badhi ,
Unn ki jaisee kahee , Moatabar ho gaye

Manzil-e-ishq  thee , bus tere dar Sanam,
Tera dar  chhoota hum Dar-ba-dar ho gaye

Raah-e-ulfat hamei.n  raas aayee nahee.n ,
Tang  hum  per sabhi  Rehguzar ho  gaye

Jurm ka  to hua  baad  mei.n  irtikaab ,
Naamzad  per kayee  Peshtar  ho  gaye

Ek zaraa bhee na pighla wo Sangdil 'Hasan',
Saare  Shikwe - giley   Be-asar  ho  gaye
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2011, 10:02:03 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 02, 2011, 05:07:01 AM
Aap jub  se  mere  Humsafar  ho gaye ,
Raaste khud-bakhud Mukhtasar ho gaye

Sapne oonchi udaano.n ke  Sapne rahey ,
Saazisho.n kee nazar Baal-o-par ho gaye

Haq-bayaani  jo kee , Badgumaani badhi ,
Unn ki jaisee kahee , Moatabar ho gaye

Manzil-e-ishq  thee , bus tere dar Sanam,
Tera dar  chhoota hum Dar-ba-dar ho gaye

Raah-e-ulfat hamei.n  raas aayee nahee.n ,
Tang  hum  per sabhi  Rehguzar ho  gaye

Jurm ka  to hua  baad  mei.n  irtikaab ,
Naamzad  per kayee  Peshtar  ho  gaye

Ek zaraa bhee na pighla wo Sangdil 'Hasan',
Saare  Shikwe - giley   Be-asar  ho  gaye



bahut bahut khoob hasan ji
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2011, 01:11:50 PM »
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Wah..Waah..Wah...Waah.. Hasan Sahab
maza aa gaya aapki ghazal padhkar
bahut khoob..

Yoon to pooree ghazal hee naayaab hai
par matle kaa jawaab naheen.

Dili daad qubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2011, 04:25:50 PM »
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mb saheb,bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzai ka.Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2011, 06:18:48 PM »
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Satish ji,Bahut mashkoor hoo.n ki aap ne apne,purkhuloos,hausla afza alfaaz mein daad di.Aap ke taa'ssur ka hamesha muntazir rehta hoo.n.Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2011, 05:23:22 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 02, 2011, 05:07:01 AM
Aap jub  se  mere  Humsafar  ho gaye ,
Raaste khud-bakhud Mukhtasar ho gaye

Sapne oonchi udaano.n ke  Sapne rahey ,
Saazisho.n kee nazar Baal-o-par ho gaye

Haq-bayaani  jo kee , Badgumaani badhi ,
Unn ki jaisee kahee , Moatabar ho gaye

Manzil-e-ishq  thee , bus tere dar Sanam,
Tera dar  chhoota hum Dar-ba-dar ho gaye

Raah-e-ulfat hamei.n  raas aayee nahee.n ,
Tang  hum  per sabhi  Rehguzar ho  gaye

Jurm ka  to hua  baad  mei.n  irtikaab ,
Naamzad  per kayee  Peshtar  ho  gaye

Ek zaraa bhee na pighla wo Sangdil 'Hasan',
Saare  Shikwe - giley   Be-asar  ho  gaye



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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2011, 06:51:14 AM »
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Khujli ji,

Thankyou !
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2011, 04:41:40 AM »
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Wah Wah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2011, 06:28:53 AM »
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wah wah wah........ Janab Hasan Saheb! Ji khush ho gaye poori ghazal paRhte hi. Rawaaiti shayari ka haseen namoona pesh kiya aapne. Is ehd meiN rawaaiti shayari meiN kahne waale unqa hone lage haiN lekin aapki ghazloN ko har dafa paRhne ke baad aisa lagta hai k asl shayari to rawaaiti shayari hi hai aur aap is ke rang o aahang ko na sirf barat rahe haiN balke maiN to ye kahuNga k is ki classikiat ko aur urooj par pahuNchaane ka kaam bhi kar rahe haiN. Aap jaise shayar hi is naye daur ki nayee raushni haiN. Aur kuchh na kah kar barjasta jo kuchh zehn meiN aa raha hai use yahaN pesh karne ki jasarat kar raha hooN:

Dekhte dekhte kya sitam ho gaya
Be-khatar raaste pur-khatar ho gaye

Aik bahut hi achchhi classical ghazal k liye mubarakbad k saath saath hazaroN daad qubul kijiye.

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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 02, 2011, 05:07:01 AM
Aap jub  se  mere  Humsafar  ho gaye ,
Raaste khud-bakhud Mukhtasar ho gaye

Sapne oonchi udaano.n ke  Sapne rahey ,
Saazisho.n kee nazar Baal-o-par ho gaye

Haq-bayaani  jo kee , Badgumaani badhi ,
Unn ki jaisee kahee , Moatabar ho gaye

Manzil-e-ishq  thee , bus tere dar Sanam,
Tera dar  chhoota hum Dar-ba-dar ho gaye

Raah-e-ulfat hamei.n  raas aayee nahee.n ,
Tang  hum  per sabhi  Rehguzar ho  gaye

Jurm ka  to hua  baad  mei.n  irtikaab ,
Naamzad  per kayee  Peshtar  ho  gaye

Ek zaraa bhee na pighla wo Sangdil 'Hasan',
Saare  Shikwe - giley   Be-asar  ho  gaye
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2011, 11:38:06 AM »
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Hasan saheb aap bakamaal shayar hain mubarakbad kabool farmaaye

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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2011, 12:00:03 PM »
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Aadaab Janab Siddiqui Sahaab !


Masha Allah Janab kia kahne aapke andaaz e bayaaN
aur ahsaas O khayaal ke..... behad dilkash O dil
nasheeN ashaaroN se aapne kalaam ko sawaara hai.. Usual Smile

Janab Dil ki gehraaiyoN se daad O mubarak bad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 02, 2011, 05:07:01 AM
Aap jub  se  mere  Humsafar  ho gaye ,
Raaste khud-bakhud Mukhtasar ho gaye

Kia kahne waah behad dilkash aur umdaa matla kaha hai janab daad daad daad Usual Smile         

Sapne oonchi udaano.n ke  Sapne rahey ,
Saazisho.n kee nazar Baal-o-par ho gaye

Waah janab kafi umdaa aur gehra khayaal hai
daad Usual Smile         

Haq-bayaani  jo kee , Badgumaani badhi ,
Unn ki jaisee kahee , Moatabar ho gaye

Masha Allah behad sahiN farmaya janab daad daad daad Usual Smile         

Manzil-e-ishq  thee , bus tere dar Sanam,
Tera dar  chhoota hum Dar-ba-dar ho gaye

Kia kahne bahut khoob Usual Smile         

Raah-e-ulfat hamei.n  raas aayee nahee.n ,
Tang  hum  per sabhi  Rehguzar ho  gaye

Bahut khoob janab bade dilfareb ashaar kahe hai daad Usual Smile         

Jurm ka  to hua  baad  mei.n  irtikaab ,
Naamzad  per kayee  Peshtar  ho  gaye

Waah janab bahut khoob Usual Smile         

Ek zaraa bhee na pighla wo Sangdil 'Hasan',
Saare  Shikwe - giley   Be-asar  ho  gaye

Masha Allah kia kahne janab ... waah
waah waah dil loot liya aapke is umdaa sher ne Usual Smile
Bahut umdaa Maqta kaha hai janab daad daad Usual Smile         


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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2011, 02:20:25 PM »
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Siddiqui saaheb! mujhse pahle aap ke liye jisne bhee ,jo bhee kahaa.....sab kaa sab meri or se bhee..........aap kee taareef karne me khud ko adnaa saa mahsoos kar rahee hooN.........bas itanaa hee kahooNgee.......laajawaab!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2011, 02:23:23 PM »
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sanjeev kash ji,zarra nawaazi ke liye behad mashkoor hoo.n.
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2011, 02:35:46 PM »
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Saini saheb,Aapki daad aap ki faraakhdili ka mazhar hai.Tah e dil se mamnoon hoo.n.Hasan
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2011, 05:04:42 PM »
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Janab Parwaaz  saheb,Aapka kaise shukriya ada karoo.n. Hamesha hi aap dil se aur puri tawajjo se takhleeqat parhte aur unn per tafseeli tabsira aur hausla afzai karte hai.n. Mai.n apni taraf se to aap ka mashkoor hoo.h hi ,mai.n samajhta hoo.n iss website ke sabhi logo.n ki taraf se aap salaam ke haqdaar hai.n. Bahut bahut shukriya.aap ka,Hasan 
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