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mahfil ko mera pyaar bhara salaam aaj phir haazir huaa hu apke ek adaa si koshish liye ye guzaarish hai ke apne nazariyaat se ise nawaaziye. agar koi ise tarannum me adaa karega to lutf baD jayega...waise to bahut si acchi acchi dhune hai magar mera sujhaav hai ye dhun 'dil ke armaa aasuuoo me bah gaye ' waah,ye to khoob hi qissaa huaa
tod kar dil puuchte haiN kya hua
choRkar humko khushi jaane lagi
lo chalo kuch bojh to halkaa huaa
kis tarah hum khud se muh ko pherte
dost hu mai khud hi se bichdaa huaa
har kadam ik zalzala hai zindagi
kya nayaa isme bhalaa aisaa hua
unke gesu ke andheron ke tale
chand jaise din me ho niklaa hua
aap ki jabse padi parchaiyaaN
aaina bhi humse hai rootha hua
dil lagane ki sazaa dil ko mili
hona tha jo hashr vo uskaa hua
khud ko ham khudse juda kar naa sake
har kadam par hamkadam saaya hua
kabke mahfil chodkar hum uth gaye
aap kahiye aapka phir kya huaa
mujse zidd aise gale milta hai gum
jaise vo koi meraa apnaa huaa
bazm ka meri ye hi dastur hai
aaye vo jo ishq me ruswaa huaa
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2010, 04:36:15 AM » |
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kis tarah hum khud se muh ko pherte
dost hu mai khud hi se bichdaa huaa
Very Impressive ........ Zidd Sahab !
Aam baatoN ko .... iss andaaz me keh jaanaa hai ... khaas banaata hai ... aapki shaayri ko ... yahi baat har baar saabiit karti hai ... Zidd Sahab aapki Ghazal .... ! woh sab iss peshkash me bhi nazar aaya .... ek ek sher kaabile taareef bana hai... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...
aise hi behtar kalaam se ru-ba-ru karate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahe ...
duaaon ke saath ...
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2010, 06:14:40 AM » |
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Zidd saaheb !bahut khoob!bahut bahut khoob!
aap kee gazal ko maine zaraa hat ke ek naye tarannum me gaane kee koshish kee or koshish kaamyaab bhee hui...film khandaan kaa gaanaa..
Dhun ye hai...
"kal chaman thaa aaj ik sahraa huaa
dekhte hee dekhte ye kyaa huaa..."
yuNhee apni behtareen gazaloN se humeN roobroo karaate rahiye...
isi zameen par ek shair maine bhee kahne kee koshish kee hai...
yuN gazal kahne ka jisko shouq hai
hai koi aashiq meraa bhatkaa huaa
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2010, 03:13:43 AM » |
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Bohat Khoob Janaab Zidd Sahab...
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2010, 06:01:35 AM » |
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kis tarah hum khud se muh ko pherte
dost hu mai khud hi se bichdaa huaa
Very Impressive ........ Zidd Sahab !
Aam baatoN ko .... iss andaaz me keh jaanaa hai ... khaas banaata hai ... aapki shaayri ko ... yahi baat har baar saabiit karti hai ... Zidd Sahab aapki Ghazal .... ! woh sab iss peshkash me bhi nazar aaya .... ek ek sher kaabile taareef bana hai... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...
aise hi behtar kalaam se ru-ba-ru karate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahe ...
duaaon ke saath ...
naresah sahab....aapki daad sar anko par sahab... meter me kuch bhi phenkiye accha hi lagta hai mostly... ab philosopher to hain nahi so philosophy nahi hoti ....aam ahayar hai aam baat karte hai ( aur waise socho to dunya me naya bhi kya hai?) hamara maqsad to sunne wale ko kuch pal ke liye lutf pahuchana hai.... kabhi shayad kaamyaaab hote hai kabhi nahi !!! chalta rahta hai.... regards regards |
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2010, 06:10:22 AM » |
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Zidd saaheb !bahut khoob!bahut bahut khoob!
aap kee gazal ko maine zaraa hat ke ek naye tarannum me gaane kee koshish kee or koshish kaamyaab bhee hui...film khandaan kaa gaanaa..
Dhun ye hai...
"kal chaman thaa aaj ik sahraa huaa
dekhte hee dekhte ye kyaa huaa..."
yuNhee apni behtareen gazaloN se humeN roobroo karaate rahiye...
isi zameen par ek shair maine bhee kahne kee koshish kee hai...
yuN gazal kahne ka jisko shouq hai
hai koi aashiq meraa bhatkaa huaa
mamta ji aapka bahut shukriya hamaari ghazal sunne ka... apki dhun bhi wahi meter hai so baat wahi hai.... aur koshish zarur karenge ke aapko hamaari ghazalen agee bhi acchi lagti rahe........ apka bandha hua sher bhi bahut khoobsurat hai.....ek barjastaa... mere bhi muh se fisal gaya aap hi ki qadr ka hai ye asar ke ghazal goyi me yu charcha huaa.....in anticipation samjh lijiye aap....hahahahaha milte rahiye regards |
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2010, 06:18:44 AM » |
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aji kamaal karte he aap Zidd sahab ....
andhiyon se takrata jo me chalta raha "Abhi"
wo kehene lagi tu parvat he ya koi dil toota hua~
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2010, 06:21:35 AM » |
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WAH WAH KYA BAAT HAI ZIDD JI ....BAHUT KHUB.....
EK KOSHISH KI HAI,GALTIYAN MAAF KARNA JI......
DILBAR MERE MUJHSE HAI RUTHE HUE
NA KUCH KAHETE HAIN NA SUNTE HAIN
CHEHRA UNKA KYUN HAI YUN UUTRA HUA
JAISE MAYAT SE KISI KI LAUTE HAIN
NA JAANE KYA HUI HAMSE HAI KHATA
DIL JALA KE DEKHO KAISE BAITHE HAIN
LAKH KOSHISH KI MAGAR "ZIDD" PE ADE
PATHAR DIL KE JALDI KAB PIGALTE HAIN
DILBAR MERE MUHJSE ......
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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2010, 06:28:23 AM » |
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Zidd Sahab aadab
Wah Kya hi khoob ghazal ata ki hai bazm ko ,, Har sher apni hi Wazh me ..kaunsa sher ziyada acha laga ye batana bada mushkil ho chala hai .. Ik nahi balke hazarah dad apki is pur-acar o murassa ghazal pe .. Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe .. apko bazm me tashreef farama dekh dili mazrat howi .. apki maujodgi bazm ki khush naseebi hai .. umid hai ahebab apki islaah se mustafeed hote rahenge .. aate rahen ..
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2010, 11:29:40 PM » |
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chor kar humko khushi jaane lagi
lo chalo kuch bojh to halka hua
aapke andaaz e bayaaN ka jawaab nahi meri nighaah mai ye sher hasil e ghazal hai aapke bhut se aashaar jo ki mujhay ab tak achay lage haiN ye sher un aashaaroN mai shamil hai meri nazar ek baDa sher jisme ehsaasoN ki ek aisi rawish hai jo shayad insaan bayaaN karte karte thak jaayega magr ada nahi kar paayega aise aashaar kahe nahi jaaya karte bas shayad zabaan par yuN hi chale aate haiN, aapko aapki is khoobsurat dilfareb ghazal ke liyN behad o behisaab daad hazir hai qubool keejiye
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«Reply #11 on: September 28, 2010, 05:06:08 PM » |
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mahfil ko mera pyaar bhara salaam aaj phir haazir huaa hu apke ek adaa si koshish liye ye guzaarish hai ke apne nazariyaat se ise nawaaziye. agar koi ise tarannum me adaa karega to lutf baD jayega...waise to bahut si acchi acchi dhune hai magar mera sujhaav hai ye dhun 'dil ke armaa aasuuoo me bah gaye ' waah,ye to khoob hi qissaa huaa
tod kar dil puuchte haiN kya hua
choRkar humko khushi jaane lagi
lo chalo kuch bojh to halkaa huaa
kis tarah hum khud se muh ko pherte
dost hu mai khud hi se bichdaa huaa
har kadam ik zalzala hai zindagi
kya nayaa isme bhalaa aisaa hua
unke gesu ke andheron ke tale
chand jaise din me ho niklaa hua
aap ki jabse padi parchaiyaaN
aaina bhi humse hai rootha hua
dil lagane ki sazaa dil ko mili
hona tha jo hashr vo uskaa hua
khud ko ham khudse juda kar naa sake
har kadam par hamkadam saaya hua
kabke mahfil chodkar hum uth gaye
aap kahiye aapka phir kya huaa
mujse zidd aise gale milta hai gum
jaise vo koi meraa apnaa huaa
bazm ka meri ye hi dastur hai
aaye vo jo ishq me ruswaa huaa
BAHUT KHOOB ZIDD SB KYA KAHNEY HAIN AAPKEY ISS KALAAM KA KUCH TO SUNTAA WO TAHREER MERI DHADKAN KA, JO MERE DIL SE USKE LIYE NASHR HUA.... |
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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2010, 05:37:26 AM » |
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aji kamaal karte he aap Zidd sahab ....
andhiyon se takrata jo me chalta raha "Abhi"
wo kehene lagi tu parvat he ya koi dil toota hua~
hahahhahh...abhi sahab....'kamaal' bhi karte hai ....dhamaal bhi karte hai...aur soch kar batate hai kum aur kya kya kaam harte hai... thanks abhi ji...for liking the attempt regards |
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2010, 05:39:11 AM » |
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WAH WAH KYA BAAT HAI ZIDD JI ....BAHUT KHUB.....
EK KOSHISH KI HAI,GALTIYAN MAAF KARNA JI......
DILBAR MERE MUJHSE HAI RUTHE HUE
NA KUCH KAHETE HAIN NA SUNTE HAIN
CHEHRA UNKA KYUN HAI YUN UUTRA HUA
JAISE MAYAT SE KISI KI LAUTE HAIN
NA JAANE KYA HUI HAMSE HAI KHATA
DIL JALA KE DEKHO KAISE BAITHE HAIN
LAKH KOSHISH KI MAGAR "ZIDD" PE ADE
PATHAR DIL KE JALDI KAB PIGALTE HAIN
DILBAR MERE MUHJSE ......
thanks cara sahab....aapko pasand aaya to paisa wasool.... aapki koshish bhi bahut pasand aayi.....mere taraf se ek hazaar daad... regards |
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2010, 05:46:28 AM » |
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Zidd Sahab aadab
Wah Kya hi khoob ghazal ata ki hai bazm ko ,, Har sher apni hi Wazh me ..kaunsa sher ziyada acha laga ye batana bada mushkil ho chala hai .. Ik nahi balke hazarah dad apki is pur-acar o murassa ghazal pe .. Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe .. apko bazm me tashreef farama dekh dili mazrat howi .. apki maujodgi bazm ki khush naseebi hai .. umid hai ahebab apki islaah se mustafeed hote rahenge .. aate rahen ..
Khadim
Qadeertoopchi qadeer sahab aadaab... aapki daad to hamesha khaas rahi hai... aapki ek hazaar daad ke liye mere taraf se dus hazaar shukriya.... izzat afzaaii ke liye ajhad maskoor hu magar islah ka kaam hamara nahi....ye to aap jaise urdudaano ka hai... ghazal ke paziraai ke liye behadd shukraguzaar hu .... aur daad ke liye saatve aasmaan par... dua go zidd |
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