Aashna na-aashna moonh mortay jaate hein kyon?

by mazHur on February 04, 2011, 09:41:26 PM
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Aik ik kar ke mujhe sab chortay jate hein kyon?
Is shikasta jaan-o-dil ko tortay jaate hein kyon?

Mein ne kia unka  bigaara tha ke mujh ko dekh kar
Aashna na-aashna moonh mortay jaate hein kyon?
 
Jaan gusal rasm-e-wafa ahl-e-junoon ko he pata
shama kee jaanib patangay dortay jate hein kyon?

Kia milay ga bandaparwar sa'yee-e-bay-kar se
aabloan ko aap naahaq phortay jaate hein kyon?

Khwaab hee toe dekhta hoon jaagtay sotay magar
aatay jaatay aap yoon jhunjhortay jaate  hein kyon?

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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2011, 03:24:06 AM »
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 ***************oOo **************

Aik ik kar ke mujhe sab chortay jate hein kyon?
Is shikasta jaan-o-dil ko tortay jaate hein kyon?

Mein ne kia unka  bigaara tha ke mujh ko dekh kar
Aashna na-aashna moonh mortay jaate hein kyon?
 
Jaan gusal rasm-e-wafa ahl-e-junoon ko he pata
shama kee jaanib patangay dortay jate hein kyon?

Kia milay ga bandaparwar sa'yee-e-bay-kar se
aabloan ko aap naahaq phortay jaate hein kyon?

Khwaab hee toe dekhta hoon jaagtay sotay magar
aatay jaatay aap yoon jhunjhortay jaate  hein kyon?

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Bahut Khoobsurat ehsaas bayaan kiye hai aapne ... mazHur ji!!

Very nice creation  ... Very touching .... dil se daad !!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2011, 05:10:39 AM »
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wah mazharji bahut umda.... daad

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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2011, 06:08:00 AM »
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bahut koob dher saari daad~
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2011, 07:26:27 AM »
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MazHur Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janaab haal e dil ko badi khoobi se bayaan kiya hai hai..
Waah waah waah sabhi ashaar umdaa rahe....

Aise hi kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile
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mazHur
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2011, 10:29:10 AM »
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aap sab ka bahut bahut dhanebad!:)
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2011, 03:16:14 PM »
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Bahut Khub Mazhur JI
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mazHur
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2011, 05:56:10 PM »
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Rishi jee, aapka bhi bahut bahut shurkria!!:)
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