Aatey ho, to, lagtaa aisaa, thandi bayaar aatee ho jyoun!

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Aatey ho, to, lagtaa aisaa, thandi bayaar aatee ho jyoun!
Muskaatey ho, to lagtaa hai, hariyaalee muskaatee ho jyoun!!

Har zarrey mein, yuun to, sach hai, qaayam hai har dam mooseeqee;
Gaatey ho: aisaa lagtaa hai, sur mein bulbul gaatee ho jyoun!

Yuun to, naqaab sey jhaank rahey uyoon chhuptey–sey dikhtey hain;
Roo-b-roo deykh kar shouhar ko bhee dulhin sharmaatee ho jyoun!

Kyaa kah duun main, jisko sunkar, fir shafaq khil uthhey ounthhon par;
Chhaayee badlee par chupkey sey laalaamee lahraatee ho jyoun?

Lagtaa hai, jaisey kabhee naheen deykhee ho aisee raanaayee,
Anjaaney aa nazaroun mein jo, ankhoun mein bas jaatee ho jyoun?

Kaisey hain wo? Kaisey hain ham? Kaisey kyaa, kisko batlaayen?
Jaisey dulhin ho raqeeb kee; ham haazir baaraatee hon jyoun?

Ay ‘abd’, na jaaney kyaa honey ko baaqee hai ab bhee rah mein;
Zindagee kharhee chouraahey par, bas, palkeyn jhapkaatee ho jyoun?

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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2013, 09:01:55 PM »
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bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Abd ji....!!!
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kya baat hai abd bundeli jee. dheron daad qubool kare
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waah ,.............bohat c daad,.......
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Abd Jee Aadaab!


Badi hi khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai janab... dilkash ahsaas O khayaal
se sanJeedgi ki intehaaN badi khoob rahi...Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye
likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Dr. Saini ji!
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bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Abd ji....!!!
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Hriday ji!
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wah wah

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Nandbahu ji!
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kya baat hai abd bundeli jee. dheron daad qubool kare

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Aqsh ji!
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Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, 'Laaiba' ji!
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 19, 2013, 07:47:14 AM
Abd Jee Aadaab!


Badi hi khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai janab... dilkash ahsaas O khayaal
se sanJeedgi ki intehaaN badi khoob rahi...Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye
likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Namaskaar ParwaaZ ji!
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah! Khush rahiye!
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bahut khoob
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut badiya abdbundeli jee
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