Aayaa naheen hun ab bhi , 'abd', unkee nazar mein!

by abdbundeli on August 27, 2012, 12:59:06 PM
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Hamko patah nahin hai, wo baahar hain, ki, ghar mein!
Maahoul hai udaas, thak chukaa huun safar mein!!
 
Kyoun hain faraar fir, tamaam koshishoun key ba'ad?
Uljhaa  huaa hai hijr-e-yaar shaam-o-sahar mein!

Imkaan thaa louteyngey wo dour-e-khizaan key ba'ad;
Par, ab to khil uthey hain gul tamaam shajar mein!!

Koyee khabar hai, kis parhaaw par hai wasl-e-yaar?
Koyee saraa ho, kaash, kaheen raahguzar mein!

Lagtaa hai, kho gayaa huun kaheen dour-e-zeest mein;
Aayaa naheen hun ab bhi , 'abd', unkee nazar mein!

                        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2012, 01:09:20 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Abd ji...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2012, 01:16:23 PM »
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boht khub abd ji
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 27, 2012, 01:09:20 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Abd ji...!!!

Shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2012, 02:45:06 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2012, 03:35:57 AM »
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bahut khoob sirman ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2012, 03:42:21 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 27, 2012, 12:59:06 PM
Hamko patah nahin hai, wo baahar hain, ki, ghar mein!
Maahoul hai udaas, thak chukaa huun safar mein!!
 
Kyoun hain faraar fir, tamaam koshishoun key ba'ad?
Uljhaa  huaa hai hijr-e-yaar shaam-o-sahar mein!

Imkaan thaa louteyngey wo dour-e-khizaan key ba'ad;
Par, ab to khil uthey hain gul tamaam shajar mein!!

Koyee khabar hai, kis parhaaw par hai wasl-e-yaar?
Koyee saraa ho, kaash, kaheen raahguzar mein!

Lagtaa hai, kho gayaa huun kaheen dour-e-zeest mein;
Aayaa naheen hun ab bhi , 'abd', unkee nazar mein!

                        - abd bundeli

Bahut umda gazal abd saahab bahut achche ehsaas-o-khayaloN se bharpoor dheron daad qabool kijiye..Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2012, 04:18:10 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on August 27, 2012, 01:16:23 PM
boht khub abd ji

Shukriyah, 'saahill' ji!
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2012, 04:19:26 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on August 28, 2012, 02:45:06 AM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2012, 04:21:07 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 28, 2012, 03:35:57 AM
bahut khoob sirman ji badhaai ho


Shukriyah, Saini ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2012, 04:22:54 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on August 28, 2012, 03:42:21 AM
Bahut umda gazal abd saahab bahut achche ehsaas-o-khayaloN se bharpoor dheron daad qabool kijiye..Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Pankaj ji!
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2012, 05:48:05 AM »
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Hamko patah nahin hai, wo baahar hain, ki, ghar mein!
Maahoul hai udaas, thak chukaa huun safar mein!! Applause Applause
 
Kyoun hain faraar fir, tamaam koshishoun key ba'ad?
Uljhaa  huaa hai hijr-e-yaar shaam-o-sahar mein! Applause Applause Applause

Imkaan thaa louteyngey wo dour-e-khizaan key ba'ad;
Par, ab to khil uthey hain gul tamaam shajar mein!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Koyee khabar hai, kis parhaaw par hai wasl-e-yaar?
Koyee saraa ho, kaash, kaheen raahguzar mein! Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Lagtaa hai, kho gayaa huun kaheen dour-e-zeest mein;
Aayaa naheen hun ab bhi , 'abd', unkee nazar mein! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                        - abd bundeli



veriiiiiiiiii      naaaaaaaaaice------abd
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2012, 09:04:50 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 28, 2012, 05:48:05 AM

veriiiiiiiiii      naaaaaaaaaice------abd

Loads of thanks, Khamosh ji!
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