Ab aa gaye ho to...sana afroz

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Ab aa Gaye ho to jaaney ka naam mat lena,
mujhe hansa ke rulaaney ka naam mat lena.

tumhari chahtein sachchi agar hain mere liye,
to jhoothey khwaab dikhaney ka naam mat lena.

dilon ke dard samajhney ka andiaa deykar,
dilon Mein dard jagaaney ka naam mat lena.

k tum to hosh Mein aakar k mujhse baat karo,
nashey Mein choor zamaaney ka naam mat lena.

hisaab maangney aaye they merey dard sabhi,
inhein sulaa ke jagaaney ka naam mat lena.

khushi ke geet sunati 'sana' fizaaon Mein,
ghamon ke naghmein sunaaney Ka naam mat lena.
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2014, 11:38:03 AM »
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मोहतरमा सना जी,आदाब. बहुत सुंदर गजल लिखी है|  पेश है - हमने भी दिल के झरोखे से उनके दिल मे झाका है
उनकी सच्ची मोहब्बत को कोई नाम ना देना

इस अच्छी गजल के लिये एक राऊ कबूल करे
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2014, 11:42:17 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on December 02, 2014, 11:38:03 AM
मोहतरमा सना जी,आदाब. बहुत सुंदर गजल लिखी है|  पेश है - हमने भी दिल के झरोखे से उनके दिल मे झाका है
उनकी सच्ची मोहब्बत को कोई नाम ना देना

इस अच्छी गजल के लिये एक राऊ कबूल करे
shukriya !!!!! Aise hi hausla barhatey rahein nawaazish hogi...
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2014, 11:47:35 AM »
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Mohtarma sana Afroz sahiba! salam

ghazal buhat shaandaar hay... bharpoor daad qabool kejay..

bay-laag kehnay ki bhi halki phulki si gunjaish tu hay, lekin jazbaat se bharpoor kalaam per takneeki havalay se baat kerna, hamara sheva nahi...

ek bar phr bhrpoor daad k sath

dua-go
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2014, 12:15:09 PM »
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Achhi peshkash hai. Dad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2014, 12:36:22 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2014, 12:41:21 PM »
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Shukriya !!!! Aap Hazraat ka !!;
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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2014, 04:10:12 PM »
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ek rau ke saath dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2014, 06:40:03 PM »
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bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2014, 09:22:27 PM »
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waaaaaaaH nihaayat khoobsurat qalaam hai, dheron daad.
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waah waaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Sana jee, yuN hi likhti rahiye, aati rahiye.
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2014, 06:19:56 AM »
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Shukriya !!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2014, 10:04:49 AM »
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bht khoob ghazal kahi aapne
dili daad aur mubarakbad qubool Karen

khush rahen
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