ab akelay chala nahi jaata

by mazHur on September 13, 2010, 09:16:04 PM
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beech sehra me mein kahaan jaata?
kaisay manzil ka mein nishaan paata?

Qaafilay se bicharnay waaloan ko
koi sehra nahi he   apnaata.

Aao mil kar qadam barhaatay hein
ab akelay chala nahi jaata!


piyar ka naam sab hi laite hein
piyaar karna kisi ko hay aata?


Eid aa kar guzar gayee zalim
chaand dekha na aata na jaata!

Qirmizi rang gul me bhar deta  
shaakh-e-gul se jo mein lipat jaata!


  dil mein jo he zabaan per he wohi
mujh ko makr ro riya nahi aata!!

mazHur


 
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2010, 09:41:43 PM »
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Mazhur Saheb Aadaab!

Aapko shayad paheli martaba padh raheN hai..... aapki gairmuradaf gazal behad umdaa lagi hume.... Usual Smile

Daad hazir hai sahaab..... Usual Smile         


Quote from: mazHur on September 13, 2010, 09:16:04 PM
beech sehra me mein kahaan jaata?
kaisay manzil ka mein nishaan paata?

Matla achcah raha hai janab Daad         


Qaafilay se bicharnay waaloan ko
koi sehra nahi he   apnaata.

sher achcha hai daad janab par Hume.. sher ka mafoom saaf nahilaga hume...           


Aao mil kar qadam barhaatay hein
ab akelay chala nahi jaata!

Kia baat hai behad khoob janab.... sidhe se lafzoN meiN achchi guzarish kii hai daad         

piyar ka naam sab hi laite hein
piyaar karna kisi ko hay aata?

Waah behad sahiN kaha hai aapne daad.... sach hai pyaar karna kisko aata hai janab.. Usual Smile         

Eid aa kar guzar gayee zalim
chaand dekha na aata na jaata!

hmmm sher achcha hai janab .. daad... khayal aur qafiye ko madde nazar rakheN to aur bhi khubsurti se is sher ko anjaam diyaa ja sakta hai humare khayaal se.           


Qirmizi rang gul me bhar deta 
shaakh-e-gul se jo mein lipat jaata!


Kia baat hai behad umdaa daad behad khoob Usual Smile         

  dil mein jo he zabaan per he wohi
mujh ko makr ro riya nahi aata!!

hum dusre misre ko samjh nahi paye janab wazahat ki darkhast hai ummid hai aap wazahat kar deNge,,, Usual Smile           


mazHur


 



Aik achci koshish par dili daad o mubarakbad kabool kijiye..... Khush O aabaad rahiye......

Aise bazm ko roshan karte rahiye......
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2010, 02:42:53 AM »
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poetic piece is wonderful but kindly explain me the last two pragraphs ...as iam no very fluent in urdu
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