Ab ishq kabhi khel kabhi karobaar nazar aata hai--- Kumaar

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Be-daag hai fir bhi daag-dhaar nazar aata hai,
Chand ki tarah har kirdaar nazar aata hai!!

Mohabbat hoti thi kabhi poori shiddat se is jahaN mei,
Ab ishq bhi kabhi khel kabhi karobaar nazar aata hai!!

Maa-baap ki sunta tha beta bujurgo ka hota tha sammaan,
Ab walidaan ki baatoN mei poorana vichaar nazar aata hai!!

Khud ko manta khuda se bhi badkar ab insaaN,
Chhooti si museebat mei phir kyoN lachaar nazar aata hai!!!

Koshish karta hai 'Kumaar' apne dard ko chhupane ki,
KyoN meri dard meri mere chehre pe bar-bar nazar aata hai!!

Jai Kumar


first 2 lines kahin padi thi meri nahi hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2015, 06:15:53 AM »
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Be-daag hai fir bhi daag-dhaar nazar aata hai,
Chand ki tarah har kirdaar nazar aata hai!!


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Mohabbat hoti thi kabhi poori shiddat se is jahaN mei,
Ab ishq bhi kabhi khel kabhi karobaar nazar aata hai!!

Maa-baap ki sunta tha beta bujurgo ka hota tha sammaan,
Ab walidaan ki baatoN mei poorana vichaar nazar aata hai!!

Khud ko manta khuda se bhi badkar ab insaaN,
Chhooti si museebat mei phir kyoN lachaar nazar aata hai!!!

Koshish karta hai 'Kumaar' apne dard ko chhupane ki,
KyoN meri dard meri mere chehre pe bar-bar nazar aata hai!!

Jai Kumar


first 2 lines kahin padi thi meri nahi hai

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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2015, 06:23:50 AM »
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Be-daag hai fir bhi daag-dhaar nazar aata hai,
Chand ki tarah har kirdaar nazar aata hai!!

Mohabbat hoti thi kabhi poori shiddat se is jahaN mei,
Ab ishq bhi kabhi khel kabhi karobaar nazar aata hai!!

Maa-baap ki sunta tha beta bujurgo ka hota tha sammaan,
Ab walidaan ki baatoN mei poorana vichaar nazar aata hai!!

Khud ko manta khuda se bhi badkar ab insaaN,
Chhooti si museebat mei phir kyoN lachaar nazar aata hai!!!

Koshish karta hai 'Kumaar' apne dard ko chhupane ki,
KyoN meri dard meri mere chehre pe bar-bar nazar aata hai!!

Jai Kumar


first 2 lines kahin padi thi meri nahi hai







                               

                             hai   be-daag   per   daagdaar   nazar   aaye!
                             chaand   kii   tarah   kirdaar  nazar   aaye!!

                             sookhe   hont,  viraan  chehraa , thhaka jism!
                             aankho.n   mein  phir  bhii pyaar  nazar aaye!

                             ghazal  terii  mujh se waaqif nahin phir kyon!
                             her   sher   mein   tere,  yaar  nazar   aaye!

                             phool  khile, khushboo  udii kaafii nahin hai!
                             machaltii   huii  kabhi  bahaar   nazar  aaye!

                             chaaragar, dawaa,maraz, pareshaa.n bahut hain!
                             khoobsoorat  ek   soorat  bimaar  nazar  aaye!

                             manzar  ufaq  kaa  haqiqat  to  nahin jaaniye!
                             nazaara  qudrat kaa ye  jaanisaar  nazar aaye!

                             kahaa kuch nahin dekhta rahaa khamosh chaar-soo!
                             her  chehre mein  jab   agyaar  nazar aaye!!

                             
                             
                             

                             
                             
                             

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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2015, 12:12:41 PM »
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aapne shayad poori padi nhi mr qalb I have already mentioned that ki ye 2 lines meri nahi h
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2015, 12:13:24 PM »
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aapne shayad poori padi nhi mr qalb I have already mentioned that ki ye 2 lines meri nahi h
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2015, 12:15:50 PM »
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So I just request before reading full statement don't judge anyone
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Phali do line hakikat hai sad11
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2015, 09:35:22 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash Kumaar Sahib, bahut bahuuuuut daaaaaaaaaaaaad.
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अति सुंदर पेशकश ,कुमार साहिब ,ढेर सारी दाद कबूल करे-आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2015, 03:40:33 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa khoob likhaa hai Jai Kumar ji....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2015, 04:44:01 AM »
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waah!  waah!  waah! waah! waah! kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne Jai Kumar ji..
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