Ab Tod Dete Hain ............. !!!

by Talat on May 05, 2009, 08:05:34 PM
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2009, 08:34:44 PM »
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WAH WAH WAH Kaya baat hai Celmira... wow ... ek ek shabd kamal ka likha hai apne apni kavita main.... bahoot khoob... good work, Good creation!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2009, 08:43:06 PM »
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Wonderful Presentation Celmira Ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2009, 09:16:51 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2009, 08:34:44 PM
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WAH WAH WAH Kaya baat hai Celmira... wow ... ek ek shabd kamal ka likha hai apne apni kavita main.... bahoot khoob... good work, Good creation!!!

Thanks so much Pooja Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2009, 03:44:05 AM »
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Bahut khoob Celmira Ji
Yet another beautiful creation, I liked it too much.

KHIJAON KO MITANE KE KABHI HAAMI NAHIN HAIN HUM
BAHAREN BHI BULA LENGE BHALE KUCHH DER HO JAYE

AGAR HAQ AUR FARZON KA SAHI MATLAB SAMAJH LOGE
NAHIN ANDHER PHIR HOGA BHALE KUCHH DER HO JAYE

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2009, 04:35:34 AM »
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Beautifull creation Talat sis ..G88 words,,, Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2009, 08:01:48 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 08:05:34 PM

Applause Bahaut acha likha hai apne Talat di...
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2009, 10:22:50 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 05, 2009, 08:43:06 PM
Wonderful Presentation Celmira Ji

Thanks so much Rajesh Ji for reading the work and appreciation.
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2009, 12:18:37 PM »
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Talat saheba Aadaab
Aapke naam ke saathh Ustad-e-Shayri likha dekha to tajassus badh gaya.
Ghazal dekhi to...
Mohtarma...Tasveer,Tehreer,jageer aur taa'beer kis tarha todi ja sakti hai..hairat huii...Ek umda radeef isteamaal nahiN ho saki!ye meri nasamjhi bhi ho sakti hai...bura na maaneN.
Doosre sher main vaaz'e nahiN hua k kya tod deN!
Khayalaatt khoob haiN. Nazar-e-saani kar leN.Waise aap behtar jaante haiN.
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2009, 12:23:57 PM »
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Quote from: wordsmith on May 06, 2009, 12:18:37 PM
Talat saheba Aadaab
Aapke naam ke saathh Ustad-e-Shayri likha dekha to tajassus badh gaya.
Ghazal dekhi to...
Mohtarma...Tasveer,Tehreer,jageer aur taa'beer kis tarha todi ja sakti hai..hairat huii...Ek umda radeef isteamaal nahiN ho saki!ye meri nasamjhi bhi ho sakti hai...bura na maaneN.
Doosre sher main vaaz'e nahiN hua k kya tod deN!
Khayalaatt khoob haiN. Nazar-e-saani kar leN.Waise aap behtar jaante haiN.
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Shukriya Jalees Sahab... mujhe likhna nahin aata, bas koshish karti hoon.....ye mera profession nahin hai aur na hi maine kahin kisi ustaad se taaleem li hai......ye forum hi meri ustaad hai.....aapke nazariye ka bohot bohot shukriya........pata to chala ki kitne paani main hain !!! Aage se khyal rakhenge !

Aur jahan tak title Ustaad-e-Shayari ka sawal hai, wo qaabiliyat par nahin number of posts ke muatabiq  hota hai chaahe kisi insaan ne yahan ek sher bhi na kaha ho...isiliye usse dhoka na khaiyega...

Shukriya is Hausla-Afzaai ka !!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2009, 12:33:45 PM »
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Thank You all my dear friends, Kaash Ji, Sarvesh Ji, Honey Sis and Rahim for appreciating this worthless creation !
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2009, 12:34:14 PM »
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bahut hi badhya likha hai cera ... koi kuch bhi bole hume to pasand aayi hai.. aapki trah likhne wale yoin me bahut hi kam milege

bahut hi badhya
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2009, 12:36:26 PM »
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Quote from: samnoj on May 06, 2009, 12:34:14 PM
bahut hi badhya likha hai cera ... koi kuch bhi bole hume to pasand aayi hai.. aapki trah likhne wale yoin me bahut hi kam milege

bahut hi badhya

Thanks Sam...Tumne humesha hausla badhaya hai.....par shayad likhna mere bas ki baat nahin....Thanks dear friend.
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2009, 12:39:18 PM »
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are yaar aap aise kaise kah sakte ho.. ager likhna aap ke bas ki baat nahi to phir hum to abhi tak ande me hi hue ..

aap bahut hi bahtareen likhti ho.. kisi ki baat ka bura nahi maante beta.. aap likhte rahiye .. hume aapka likha bahut acha lagta hai
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«Reply #14 on: May 06, 2009, 12:48:56 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut hi khoob
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