Ab Tod Dete Hain ............. !!!

by Talat on May 05, 2009, 08:05:34 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 06, 2009, 12:55:02 PM »
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chalo ab sab ye baate choro.. itna acha thread hai ..ise aage badhao.
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«Reply #16 on: May 06, 2009, 01:15:35 PM »
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behad umda talat..har sher apne aap me mukammal har shabd bilkul satik...hazaron daad aapko Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: May 06, 2009, 01:41:10 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Dost...Har ek sher Lajawaab!!!

sahi maayne mein aap hi shayar-e-ustad ho Talatji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Rahi baat Har Ek Ke Comments Ki,To wahi ek baat phir kehne cahunga jo Mirza Gaalib saheb ne kahin thi...

Bura Naa Maan,Waayaz Bura kahe,
Aisa Bhi koi Hai Jo Sirf Acha Kahe...

        ~~~~Mirza Ghalib~~~~~~
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«Reply #18 on: May 06, 2009, 04:06:15 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 05, 2009, 09:41:16 PM
Bahot hi achi ghazal likhi hai aapne Talat ji...har sher dard ka ek sagar ho jaise..aur aakhiri sher me to jaise qayamat ka dard ubhar aaya...Talat ji it's just outstanding  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley     

ek koshish hope u'l like                                                                                                                        

har dard apna asar rakhta hai,
har dard yun hi nahi basar karta hai,
har dard parwaaz bekadar rakhta hai,p
ar hauslon  se nahi bekhabar rahta hai                                                                                                                
har dard apni kahar rakhta hai,
har shab apni sahar rakhta hai,
har dard nahi dil me zahar rakhta hai,
Khuda par harek pe meher rakhta hai

Itne khoobsurat comments ke liye shukriya Kaash Ji

Aapne bhi bohot achcha likha hai...Waah Bohot Hi Khoob....Jaldi hu iska jawab dene ki koshish hogi.....Thanks so much Kaash Ji
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«Reply #19 on: May 06, 2009, 04:20:36 PM »
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Talat,
As usual it is wonderful. All the words used are the real pearls.
Agar aap aise kehti hia ke aapko shayri nahi aati to shayad hamein to shayri ka bilkul ilm hi nahi hia,
Here no one is professional. We just put our emotions in words, and when it comes out beautifully, that really matters.
Its really hard to give words to our emotions, and trust me you do it beautifully all the time. Even if it was not on the number of posts, you would have been 'USTAD-E-SHAYRI' in the real sense. AND I MEAN IT.

Dont go on a single comment, just think that WE ALL YOINDIANS love you and YOUR POETRIES a lot. And some people still here are there who wait for your poems desperately and i am one of them...

YOINDIA IS PROUD OF TALAT Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: May 06, 2009, 04:23:24 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 08:05:34 PM

wah wah di kya khoob likha hai aapne.. behad umda as always,, har lafs mano chun cun kar sameta gaya ho iss gazal mea.  too gud.

Very NIce Additon sarvesh ji & kaash ji... bahoot khoob
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«Reply #21 on: May 06, 2009, 04:30:53 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Nice creation... and as Angel said..
We Yoindians are proud of you.. icon_salut
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«Reply #22 on: May 06, 2009, 05:08:22 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 06, 2009, 03:44:05 AM
Bahut khoob Celmira Ji
Yet another beautiful creation, I liked it too much.

KHIJAON KO MITANE KE KABHI HAAMI NAHIN HAIN HUM
BAHAREN BHI BULA LENGE BHALE KUCHH DER HO JAYE

AGAR HAQ AUR FARZON KA SAHI MATLAB SAMAJH LOGE
NAHIN ANDHER PHIR HOGA BHALE KUCHH DER HO JAYE

SARVESH RASTOGI

Thanks so much Sarvesh Ji...and it means so much coming from you....Thank You for your encouragement.

Lovely lines, infact I loved your whole ghazal "Bhale kuch der ho jaaye"  Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: May 06, 2009, 06:18:58 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 08:05:34 PM
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«Reply #24 on: May 06, 2009, 06:19:51 PM »
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KIA BAAT HAI CALMERA
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«Reply #25 on: May 06, 2009, 08:37:30 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 06, 2009, 04:35:34 AM
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Beautifull creation Talat sis ..G88 words,,, Thumbs UP

Thanks so much Honey SiS
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«Reply #26 on: May 07, 2009, 08:37:17 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on May 06, 2009, 08:01:48 AM
Applause Bahaut acha likha hai apne Talat di...

Thanks so much dear brother !
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«Reply #27 on: May 07, 2009, 08:55:25 AM »
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bahut achche di.... khoob likha hai aapne .........
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«Reply #28 on: May 07, 2009, 10:50:51 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 08:05:34 PM

talat ji.........sabse pehle to baat aapki ghazal ki bhut hi khoobsurat hai mashallah se bhut hi khoobsurat khayaal har shair daad ke qaabil, khyaal mai tashdee daad qabool karain.........
dusri baat aapne kaha hai ki aapne koi taaleem nhi li aur kisi se islaah bhi nhi laiti hain, bina islaah ke itna acha kaalm mashallah jawaab nhi is baat ke liyn aapki jitni hosla afzaaii ki jaani chahiye, baat yahi khatm nhi hoti balki aap mushkilain bhi laina pasnd karti hain jaisa ki aapne apni is ghazal mai li hai jiddat paida karne ki koshish ki khoob ki aur mukammal ki.......aapki is ghazal pe waseem sahb ka ek shair yaad rha hai

koi apni hi nazr se tu hame daikhega
ek qatray ko samandar nazar aaye kaise

jahan tak apni samjh kaam karti hai ji ki zahir ke apne andaaz se hi sochegi na ke bhut zaheen aur tajurbekaar logo.n ki tarhaan to apni samajh to yahi kehti hai ki agr lafz tootna insaan ke liyn kya ja skta hai to phir todan tasveer aur tehreer ke liyn bhi kya ja skta hai jo ki hoskta hi isse phele kisi ne na kya ho bas aapne isko kis mafhoom mai kaha hai ye maayene rakhta hai,,,, bahr haal you.n hi likhti rhiye is mehfil ke chiraago.n mai se ek charaagh aap bhi hain jinse is mehfil ko roshan kar rakha hai............keep writing....acha likhti hain aap,
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«Reply #29 on: May 07, 2009, 10:58:37 AM »
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Quote from: samnoj on May 06, 2009, 12:39:18 PM
are yaar aap aise kaise kah sakte ho.. ager likhna aap ke bas ki baat nahi to phir hum to abhi tak ande me hi hue ..

aap bahut hi bahtareen likhti ho.. kisi ki baat ka bura nahi maante beta.. aap likhte rahiye .. hume aapka likha bahut acha lagta hai

Bohot bohot shukriya Sam ... Thanks so much  notworthy
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