Ab Tod Dete Hain ............. !!!

by Talat on May 05, 2009, 08:05:34 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 07, 2009, 11:02:37 AM »
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Quote from: poppoetry1 on May 06, 2009, 12:48:56 PM
WAH WAH  Applause Applause Applause
WAH WAH
WAH WAH Clapping Smiley
WAH WAH : :clapping
bahut bahut bahut hi khoob

Thanks so much Pooja Ji for appreciating my work
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«Reply #31 on: May 07, 2009, 11:04:25 AM »
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Mashallah BohatAchcha Likha Hai Talat Sis,.
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #32 on: May 07, 2009, 03:21:58 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on May 06, 2009, 01:15:35 PM
behad umda talat..har sher apne aap me mukammal har shabd bilkul satik...hazaron daad aapko Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tah-e-dil se shukriya is taareef, iss hausla - afzai ka Sanjeev Ji...Thanks so much for your kind and encouraging words Usual Smile
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«Reply #33 on: May 07, 2009, 06:11:29 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 06, 2009, 01:41:10 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Dost...Har ek sher Lajawaab!!!

sahi maayne mein aap hi shayar-e-ustad ho Talatji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Rahi baat Har Ek Ke Comments Ki,To wahi ek baat phir kehne cahunga jo Mirza Gaalib saheb ne kahin thi...

Bura Naa Maan,Waayaz Bura kahe,
Aisa Bhi koi Hai Jo Sirf Acha Kahe...

        ~~~~Mirza Ghalib~~~~~~



Khwaish  aapka bohot aur bohot shukriya, aapne itni hausla-afzaai ki....Sach kaha aapne.......Thanks so much Dost for your encouraging words.
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«Reply #34 on: May 08, 2009, 02:30:58 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 06, 2009, 04:20:36 PM
Talat,
As usual it is wonderful. All the words used are the real pearls.
Agar aap aise kehti hia ke aapko shayri nahi aati to shayad hamein to shayri ka bilkul ilm hi nahi hia,
Here no one is professional. We just put our emotions in words, and when it comes out beautifully, that really matters.
Its really hard to give words to our emotions, and trust me you do it beautifully all the time. Even if it was not on the number of posts, you would have been 'USTAD-E-SHAYRI' in the real sense. AND I MEAN IT.

Dont go on a single comment, just think that WE ALL YOINDIANS love you and YOUR POETRIES a lot. And some people still here are there who wait for your poems desperately and i am one of them...

YOINDIA IS PROUD OF TALAT Usual Smile
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Cho Chweet Angel !!! Just Loved you for this encouraging post of yours....Really sweet ..... You made my day with your lovely comments love4

Thanks so much my dear.....Yeah ! true....We just try to give words to our thoughts.....We are not porofessionals but there is always room for growth and that only occurs with proper encouragement and support.....Thanks a million !
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«Reply #35 on: May 08, 2009, 02:38:16 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on May 06, 2009, 04:23:24 PM
wah wah di kya khoob likha hai aapne.. behad umda as always,, har lafs mano chun cun kar sameta gaya ho iss gazal mea.  too gud.

Very NIce Additon sarvesh ji & kaash ji... bahoot khoob


Thanks so much Divs dear for the appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #36 on: May 08, 2009, 02:39:12 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 06, 2009, 04:30:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause
Nice creation... and as Angel said..
We Yoindians are proud of you.. icon_salut


Thanks so much dear Roja ...Thanks for the lovely comment Usual Smile
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«Reply #37 on: May 08, 2009, 02:40:36 PM »
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Quote from: NAJIBSHAMSI on May 06, 2009, 06:18:58 PM
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Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #38 on: May 08, 2009, 02:41:17 PM »
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Quote from: NAJIBSHAMSI on May 06, 2009, 06:19:51 PM
KIA BAAT HAI CALMERA

Bohot bohot shukriya, Najib Ji
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«Reply #39 on: May 08, 2009, 02:42:06 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on May 07, 2009, 08:55:25 AM
bahut achche di.... khoob likha hai aapne .........

Thanks a lot Salil for your appreciation
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«Reply #40 on: May 08, 2009, 02:43:20 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 07, 2009, 11:04:25 AM
Mashallah BohatAchcha Likha Hai Talat Sis,.
Bohat Achche,.

Bohot bohot shukriya Azeem
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«Reply #41 on: May 08, 2009, 02:47:13 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 07, 2009, 10:50:51 AM
talat ji.........sabse pehle to baat aapki ghazal ki bhut hi khoobsurat hai mashallah se bhut hi khoobsurat khayaal har shair daad ke qaabil, khyaal mai tashdee daad qabool karain.........
dusri baat aapne kaha hai ki aapne koi taaleem nhi li aur kisi se islaah bhi nhi laiti hain, bina islaah ke itna acha kaalm mashallah jawaab nhi is baat ke liyn aapki jitni hosla afzaaii ki jaani chahiye, baat yahi khatm nhi hoti balki aap mushkilain bhi laina pasnd karti hain jaisa ki aapne apni is ghazal mai li hai jiddat paida karne ki koshish ki khoob ki aur mukammal ki.......aapki is ghazal pe waseem sahb ka ek shair yaad rha hai

koi apni hi nazr se tu hame daikhega
ek qatray ko samandar nazar aaye kaise

jahan tak apni samjh kaam karti hai ji ki zahir ke apne andaaz se hi sochegi na ke bhut zaheen aur tajurbekaar logo.n ki tarhaan to apni samajh to yahi kehti hai ki agr lafz tootna insaan ke liyn kya ja skta hai to phir todan tasveer aur tehreer ke liyn bhi kya ja skta hai jo ki hoskta hi isse phele kisi ne na kya ho bas aapne isko kis mafhoom mai kaha hai ye maayene rakhta hai,,,, bahr haal you.n hi likhti rhiye is mehfil ke chiraago.n mai se ek charaagh aap bhi hain jinse is mehfil ko roshan kar rakha hai............keep writing....acha likhti hain aap,

Aslam Ji,

Kin alfaaz main aapka shukriya ada karen, samajh nahin aata......apne itni gehraayi se padha aur samjha.....Bohot bohot shukriya in khoobsurat lafzon ke liye jo aapne mere liye kahe.....!!

Aaur bohot achcha sher likha hai aapne...Us ek sher se sab bayaan ho jaata hai, agar koi samjhe to !!

Aapki ye hausla-afzaai humesha yaad rahegi, Aslam Ji.....Thanks so much  notworthy notworthy
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