"ab tum har pal mujhay":Ghazals

aaina

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dheere dheere mujhay you.n satane lage
ab tum har pal mujhay yaad aane lage

kisne tumko kaha tha you.n chaho hame
daikh lo kaise tum bhi thikaane lage

khat mai thereer tha khud ko sambhalo zra
aur khud apni halat ko humse chupne lage

raat aaye nahi aap, masroof thay
hum bhi kaanto.n pe bistar lagane lage

tum zaroor aaogi is yaqeen ke saath
hum sitaaro.n ko ginne gainaane lage

ye zamane ki apni hain majbooriyaan
baat choti si ho, ye badhnae lage

chehra matla ho.nt misre, aapko daikh kar
asalm jaise bhi, ghazal gungunane lage


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shab

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2009, 04:19:07 AM »

WAAH ASLAM JI,BAHUT KHOOB


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pandit

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2009, 04:32:10 AM »

Quote from: aaina on June 28, 2009, 04:17:19 AM

kya baat hai aaina jee..


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saaz_haldwanvi

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2009, 05:19:18 AM »

isi rafaqat aur kaifiyat ke hi to kayal hai hum,
gud work aaina ji, isi tarah apna aks numaya karte rehyein,
saaz haldwanvi


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 05:58:39 AM »

Umda ghazal hai aslam ji Waah..


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faisal314

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 06:07:52 AM »

well said


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Sammual

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 08:28:46 AM »

Wah Kya Baat Hai Aaina Ji.Bahut Khoob.


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aaina

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 03:59:52 PM »

Quote from: shab on June 28, 2009, 04:19:07 AM

WAAH ASLAM JI,BAHUT KHOOB

thnsss shab ji


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aaina

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2009, 04:01:39 PM »

Quote from: pandit on June 28, 2009, 04:32:10 AM

kya baat hai aaina jee..

bhut bhut shukria pandit sahab


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Alam Qazi

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2009, 04:04:12 PM »

very nice.....


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aaina

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2009, 04:06:24 PM »

Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on June 28, 2009, 05:19:18 AM

isi rafaqat aur kaifiyat ke hi to kayal hai hum,
gud work aaina ji, isi tarah apna aks numaya karte rehyein,
saaz haldwanvi

bhut bhut skhuriya saaz sahab hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya janab


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aaina

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2009, 04:07:39 PM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 28, 2009, 05:58:39 AM

Umda ghazal hai aslam ji Waah..

shukriya randeri sahab


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deepika_divya

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2009, 04:12:57 PM »

Waah Waah Bahoot Hi Khoob Likha hai Aslam Ji


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aaina

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2009, 04:15:21 PM »

Quote from: faisal314 on June 28, 2009, 06:07:52 AM

well said

thnxxxxx faisal


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: "ab tum har pal mujhay"

«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2009, 04:24:14 PM »

Wah wah bahut khoob Aaina Ji
Achchha likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI


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