"ab tum har pal mujhay"

by aaina on June 28, 2009, 04:17:19 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 28, 2009, 04:27:25 PM »
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Quote from: Sammual on June 28, 2009, 08:28:46 AM
Wah Kya Baat Hai Aaina Ji.Bahut Khoob.

bhut shukriya sammual
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«Reply #16 on: June 29, 2009, 05:02:15 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 28, 2009, 04:12:57 PM
Waah Waah Bahoot Hi Khoob Likha hai Aslam Ji

thnxxxx so much sophi ji
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«Reply #17 on: June 29, 2009, 05:03:11 AM »
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Quote from: Alam Qazi on June 28, 2009, 04:04:12 PM
very nice.....
bhut shukriya qazi sahab
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«Reply #18 on: June 29, 2009, 11:40:21 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 28, 2009, 04:17:19 AM
dheere dheere mujhay you.n satane lage
ab tum har pal mujhay yaad aane lage

kisne tumko kaha tha you.n chaho hame
daikh lo kaise tum bhi thikaane lage

khat mai thereer tha khud ko sambhalo zra
aur khud apni halat ko humse chupne lage

raat aaye nahi aap, masroof thay
hum bhi kaanto.n pe bistar lagane lage

tum zaroor aaogi is yaqeen ke saath
hum sitaaro.n ko ginne gainaane lage

ye zamane ki apni hain majbooriyaan
baat choti si ho, ye badhnae lage

chehra matla ho.nt misre, aapko daikh kar
asalm jaise bhi, ghazal gungunane lage


Bohot hi Khoob Aslam Ji, jawab nahin aap ka  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: June 30, 2009, 08:37:56 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 28, 2009, 04:24:14 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Aaina Ji
Achchha likha hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
thnxx sevesh sahab hosla afzaai ka bhut bhut shukriya
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«Reply #20 on: June 30, 2009, 08:39:02 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 29, 2009, 11:40:21 AM
Bohot hi Khoob Aslam Ji, jawab nahin aap ka  Applause Applause Applause

thnxxx so much talat, lakin aapse kam mashallah bhut ahca likhti hain aap
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«Reply #21 on: June 30, 2009, 08:57:33 PM »
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Shukriya Aslam Ji, ye to aap ki zarranawazi hai.
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«Reply #22 on: July 07, 2009, 02:58:30 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aslam ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 08:16:46 AM »
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Aaina Ji,

Bohot Khoob. Umdah asha'ar kehte hain aap.
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«Reply #24 on: July 08, 2009, 08:42:56 AM »
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Wah Aslam ji kamaal ka likha aapne.wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #25 on: July 15, 2009, 10:25:50 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 07, 2009, 02:58:30 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Aslam ji  Thumbs UP


thnxx so much roja
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«Reply #26 on: July 15, 2009, 10:27:25 PM »
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Quote from: Shayara on July 08, 2009, 08:16:46 AM
Aaina Ji,

Bohot Khoob. Umdah asha'ar kehte hain aap.

bhut shukriya ke aapko pasnd aaye is hosla afzaai ka bhut shukriya
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«Reply #27 on: July 15, 2009, 10:28:27 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 08, 2009, 08:42:56 AM
Wah Aslam ji kamaal ka likha aapne.wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnx so much madhu
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