Abhee Seekh Raha Hoon / अभी सीख रहा हूँ ....... Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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उल्फ़त में दिलो-जान, अभी सीख रहा हूँ
कर जाऊँगा क़ुर्बान, अभी सीख रहा हूँ

क़ुर्बत तेरी जी का मेरे जंजाल न बन जाए
हर शय से हूँ अंजान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

आग़ाज़े महब्बत में ये आँखें ये अदाएं
ले लें न कहीं जान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

हसरत है कि गेसू-ए-ग़ज़ल मैं भी संवारूँ
ये बह्र, ये अर्कान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

ख़्वाहिश नहीं बनने की फ़रिश्ता मुझे हरगिज़
बनना ही मैं इंसान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

महफ़ूज़ न रख पाऊँगा दौलत के ख़ज़ाने
कहता है ये दरबान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

परवाज़ को देने दे 'रक़ीब' और बुलन्दी
काटूँगा तेरे कान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

ulfat men dilo-jaan abhi seekh raha hoon
kar jaaunga qurbaan abhi seekh raha hoon

qurbat teri jee ka mere janjaal na ban jaaye
har shay se hoon anjaan abhi seekh raha hoon

aagaaze mahabbat men ye aankhen ye adaayen
le len na kaheen jaan abhi seekh raha hoon

hasrat hai ki gesoo-e-ghazal main bhi sanwaaroon
ye bahr, ye arkaan abhi seekh raha hoon

khwahish naheen banne ki farishta mujhe hargiz
ban na hi main insaan abhi seekh raha hoon

mahfooz na rakh paaunga daulat ke khazane
kahta hai ye darbaan abhi seekh raha hoon

parwaaz ko dene de 'Raqeeb' aur bulandi
kaatoonga tere kaan abhi seekh raha hoon

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2015, 06:01:13 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 25, 2015, 05:48:58 AM

उल्फ़त में दिलो-जान, अभी सीख रहा हूँ
कर जाऊँगा क़ुर्बान, अभी सीख रहा हूँ

क़ुर्बत तेरी जी का मेरे जंजाल न बन जाए
हर शय से हूँ अंजान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

आग़ाज़े महब्बत में ये आँखें ये अदाएं
ले लें न कहीं जान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

हसरत है कि गेसू-ए-ग़ज़ल मैं भी संवारूँ
ये बह्र, ये अर्कान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

ख़्वाहिश नहीं बनने की फ़रिश्ता मुझे हरगिज़
बनना ही मैं इंसान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

महफ़ूज़ न रख पाऊँगा दौलत के ख़ज़ाने
कहता है ये दरबान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

परवाज़ को देने दे 'रक़ीब' और बुलन्दी
काटूँगा तेरे कान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

ulfat men dilo-jaan abhi seekh raha hoon
kar jaaunga qurbaan abhi seekh raha hoon

qurbat teri jee ka mere janjaal na ban jaaye
har shay se hoon anjaan abhi seekh raha hoon

aagaaze mahabbat men ye aankhen ye adaayen
le len na kaheen jaan abhi seekh raha hoon

hasrat hai ki gesoo-e-ghazal main bhi sanwaaroon
ye bahr, ye arkaan abhi seekh raha hoon

khwahish naheen banne ki farishta mujhe hargiz
ban na hi main insaan abhi seekh raha hoon

mahfooz na rakh paaunga daulat ke khazane
kahta hai ye darbaan abhi seekh raha hoon

parwaaz ko dene de 'Raqeeb' aur bulandi
kaatoonga tere kaan abhi seekh raha hoon

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’


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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2015, 08:58:20 AM »
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bahut hee khoob waah Shukla Jee.
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2015, 12:59:20 PM »
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Bahut hi umda peshkash. rau kabool karen
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Bahut bahut shukriya adil bechain sahab ......Raqeeb
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2015, 06:51:28 AM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaa...

WaaH jee waah kia hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam se rubaru karaya hai aapne... bade hi pur asar ashaar huye hai...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...




Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 25, 2015, 05:48:58 AM

उल्फ़त में दिलो-जान, अभी सीख रहा हूँ
कर जाऊँगा क़ुर्बान, अभी सीख रहा हूँ

क़ुर्बत तेरी जी का मेरे जंजाल न बन जाए
हर शय से हूँ अंजान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

आग़ाज़े महब्बत में ये आँखें ये अदाएं
ले लें न कहीं जान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

हसरत है कि गेसू-ए-ग़ज़ल मैं भी संवारूँ
ये बह्र, ये अर्कान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

ख़्वाहिश नहीं बनने की फ़रिश्ता मुझे हरगिज़
बनना ही मैं इंसान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

महफ़ूज़ न रख पाऊँगा दौलत के ख़ज़ाने
कहता है ये दरबान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

परवाज़ को देने दे 'रक़ीब' और बुलन्दी
काटूँगा तेरे कान अभी सीख रहा हूँ

ulfat men dilo-jaan abhi seekh raha hoon
kar jaaunga qurbaan abhi seekh raha hoon

qurbat teri jee ka mere janjaal na ban jaaye
har shay se hoon anjaan abhi seekh raha hoon

aagaaze mahabbat men ye aankhen ye adaayen
le len na kaheen jaan abhi seekh raha hoon

hasrat hai ki gesoo-e-ghazal main bhi sanwaaroon
ye bahr, ye arkaan abhi seekh raha hoon

khwahish naheen banne ki farishta mujhe hargiz
ban na hi main insaan abhi seekh raha hoon

mahfooz na rakh paaunga daulat ke khazane
kahta hai ye darbaan abhi seekh raha hoon

parwaaz ko dene de 'Raqeeb' aur bulandi
kaatoonga tere kaan abhi seekh raha hoon

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’
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Bahut bahut shukriya ..... Mast Khalander Sahab ..... Raqeeb
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Bahut Bahut shukriya Rustum Rangila Ji  ..... Raqeeb
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bahut hee khoob waah Shukla Jee.
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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ..... Surindarn Ji ...... Raqeeb
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Bahut hi umda peshkash. rau kabool karen

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ..... Rajigujral Sahib ...... Raqeeb
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaa...

WaaH jee waah kia hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam se rubaru karaya hai aapne... bade hi pur asar ashaar huye hai...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...





Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya .... Parwaaz Sahhib ...... Raqeeb
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