Abra aayengey: uyoonoun ko tar kareyngey, 'abd',

by abdbundeli on July 13, 2009, 09:19:25 AM
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Un key jigar-o-zeyhan mein, dil kee sadaa goonjeygee!
Un key saarey badan mein, dil kee sadaa goonjeygee!

Ham na gaayengey, gungunaayengey nahin, tab bhee,
Rukh-ae-gunchahdahan mein dil kee sadaa goonjeygee!

Jab bhi jaayengey woh, bulbul key taraaneyen sun ney:
Lahlahaatey chaman mein, dil kee sadaa goonjeygee!

Un ko beychain kareygaa agar akeylaapan,
Un key naazuk-sey man mein, dil kee sadaa goonjeygee!

Un ko soonaa-saa lageygaa agar kabhee mousam,  
Ghar mein, saarey sahan mein, dil kee sadaa goonjeygee!

Yaad mein hongey kayee wasl key nishaan baaqee;
Yaadgaar-e-kuhan mein, dil kee sadaa goonjeygee!

Abra aayengey: uyoonoun ko tar kareyngey, 'abd',
Aasmaan-e-watan mein, dil kee sadaa goonjeygee!
 
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2009, 05:11:46 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achchi Ghazal Likhi Hai Bhai, Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2009, 07:07:29 AM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achchi Ghazal Likhi Hai Bhai, Bohat Achche,.
Thanks a lot, Azeem bhai!
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2009, 07:20:17 AM »
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Bohot achchi ghazal hai Babu Ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2009, 08:34:02 AM »
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Bohot achchi ghazal hai Babu Ji
Thanks Celmira!
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2009, 03:51:37 PM »
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Abd Ji hamare kano me bas aapki hi ghazal goonjegi

Classical style of ghazal Bundeli Saheb
Bahut khoob

wah wah
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2009, 05:03:34 PM »
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Bahut acchi gazal likha hai aapne uncle ji..... excellant
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2009, 09:04:13 AM »
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Abd Ji hamare kano me bas aapki hi ghazal goonjegi

Classical style of ghazal Bundeli Saheb
Bahut khoob

wah wah
Mein khushnaseeb hoon Rastogi ji, ki, aap ko meyree 'rachnaayen' pasand aa rahin hain! Thanks a lot!
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2009, 09:06:46 AM »
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Bahut acchi gazal likha hai aapne uncle ji..... excellant
Thanks a lot Roja! I'm happy to note that you have liked it!
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2009, 09:58:18 AM »
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Wah Abd ji,beautiful gazal,very wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2009, 10:42:31 AM »
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Wah Abd ji,beautiful gazal,very wonderful creation, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, Madhu!
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